<p class="ql-block">昵称|云迹小号</p><p class="ql-block">图片|网络.致谢</p><p class="ql-block">美篇号|498017213</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一、</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【秋天的思念】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">玫瑰的火焰是血红色的</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">正如酒杯里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">高高举起的夕阳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">燃烧了黄昏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在那片血色的喧嚣中</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">孤鹜学会了歌唱</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">让人间的故事</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">如同原野上的青草</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被季节收割</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一茬又一茬</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">于是 又一朵花谢了</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">写诗的手</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在虚无中举着一枚羽毛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">听风说相思</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一声蝉鸣</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唤醒了树梢上的月光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">带着田野的麦香</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一如透明的蝴蝶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">飞入了字行间</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">于是 种一粒红豆</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在茶杯里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">然后坐在窗前</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">细品着风中的思念</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">二、</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【记忆是挂在蛙鸣声里月亮】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一片月白</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">压着一片苍白</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">撒些盐，变成羽毛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">落在树上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一种孤独</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">缠在写字人指尖上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">红烛灭了</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">纸简上是禅坐的月光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一缕香，氤氲在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一声木鱼声里</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">天空中星是挂在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">树枝上的眼睛</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像一盏又一盏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">无数盏灯笼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">照在飞往</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">故乡的小路上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">风起时没有云</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只有鸟飞过的划痕</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那一条晾衣绳上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">晃动着一串铃声</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">坐在灯下的人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一杯茶一壶寂寞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">听雨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">石头撞击的声音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">将回忆打成结</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">结成风干的野果</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">坐在树下，张开双手</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">接住落下来的故事</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">三、</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【蝉鸣】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">空杯的寂寞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被夜色挂在柳树上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像一首</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">跳动在琴弦上的古曲</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些远走日子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">轻轻的飘在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">反刍的岁月里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【远方】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">骑单车轮上的远方</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是口哨声里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">飞扬在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原野的青春</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一袋干粮，一壶水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像雪青色的马兰花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">摇曳在</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">深夜的地平线上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">收藏应旺安老师雅赏点评</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">这组诗以“秋的歌”为线，将思念、记忆、远方等心绪揉进秋的意象里，细腻又满含诗意。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《秋天的思念》里“玫瑰火焰如夕阳”“月光似透明蝴蝶入字间”，把相思藏进夕阳、蝉鸣、红豆中，让思念有了可触的温度；“写诗的手举着羽毛听风说相思”，又添了几分缥缈的怅惘。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《记忆是挂在蛙鸣声里的月亮》以“月白压苍白”“禅坐的月光”写孤独，“星是故乡路上的灯笼”道尽乡愁，“回忆打成风干野果”的比喻，让过往有了岁月的质感。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">后两首短章中，“空杯寂寞如古曲”“单车远方似马兰花”，把寂寞与青春写得凝练又鲜活。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">整体语言如秋光般柔和，意象串联起秋的况味与人心的细腻，读来如品一杯浸了秋意的茶，余韵悠长。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> 谢谢阅读