<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="font-size:20px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">9月18日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水光潋滟月华盈 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星垂松涧曳清辉 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹 (问天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊露青黄似画痕 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫林寥落晚红闲 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">君横玉笛述当年 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷影疏凉点美篇 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪光澹荡水心闲 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云开菊苑涤芳尘 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅雪朦胧认画魂 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稻香馥郁笑声欢 (北国之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花浮碧水去无踪 (北国之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰叶参差若笔锋 (北国之春)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空蒙秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江光澹荡暮怀清（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇古渡送清声（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅月疏明入画痕（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁行迢递暮云低（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钟鸣野寺递清音（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松露清泠入画屏（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪光潋滟晚云闲（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜凝野渡锁寒烟（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">涧水清泠若玉琴（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空蒙秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖光缥渺客愁长（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜凝桂棹冷清宵（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫锦翩跹似画笺（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨声淅沥柿灯明（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乌啼霜夜漫清愁（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛩语抑扬胜乐音（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风声萧瑟野芦妖 (不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风行柳径塑新型 (不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦雪素雅落画框 (不亦le乎）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊香淡雅雁声浓（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇竹岸带秋声（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅影纵横似墨痕（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁声邈远暮云低（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛩鸣秋夜奏清弦（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色苍茫似墨图（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空蒙秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪光淡远晚风柔 (小江鱼)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟横浅岸漾清波 (小江鱼)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苔篆依稀似墨痕 (小江鱼)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖光潋滟桂华香（武植）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乌啼山寺汇秋声（武植）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">草露青黄是岁痕（武植）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岚烟缥缈雁声遥（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钟敲古寺透幽声（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">涧水清寒若瑟弦（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">水声悠荡晚烟轻（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花开菊圃溢清香（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫火绚烂入画屏（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空蒙秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笛声幽怨客情浓（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风穿竹巷舞纤姿（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳遗诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅影稀疏赛墨痕（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野蹊烂漫菊香浓（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇柳岸啭黄莺（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅雪参差识履痕（刘义）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟光寥落雁声寒 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇寒渚漾轻光 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苔露零星印画痕 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">牧牛摇晃笛声悠 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪流山径透清音 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龟甲篆弯出预言 (胡萝卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁声寥落客愁深（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星浮寒水漾清光（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山雾朦胧似月宫（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁声缥缈客怀幽 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钟鸣寒寺动幽怀 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">松月空明宛梦痕 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稻香馥郁野风柔 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂桂院溢清香 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏叶婆娑似舞裙 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山色空濛秋意满（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桂香馥郁故思浓 (云心诗影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月落枫桥流素影（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">舟停江岸伴清音 (云心诗影)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹霜斑驳疑诗迹（问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨露晶莹作玉珠 (云心诗影)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">出句简析：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：山色空濛秋意满</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 山色：群山的景色、山的风貌。</p><p class="ql-block"> 空濛：亦作“空蒙”，形容烟雨迷茫、云雾迷蒙的样子。</p><p class="ql-block"> 秋意：秋天的意趣、秋的气息，包含秋山清肃、草木疏淡、天高气爽的氛围。</p><p class="ql-block"> 满：动词，充盈、遍布。指秋意无处不在，浸透整个山水之间。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 远望群山，烟雨迷蒙，漫山遍野都充盈着浓郁的秋天气息。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句写秋日山水远景，烟雨笼罩山峦，秋色遍染天地，画面空灵苍茫，既有景物之美，又透出清秋寥廓的氛围感。</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：月落枫桥流素影</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 月落：月亮下沉、月将西沉，点明夜深时分。</p><p class="ql-block"> 枫桥：地名，苏州枫桥，因《枫桥夜泊》闻名，出句也可以理解为非实指。</p><p class="ql-block"> 流：动词，流动、漾动。此处写月光如水，仿佛在江面、桥畔缓缓流淌，是化静为动的写法。</p><p class="ql-block"> 素影：指月亮洁白的光影，也兼指月光投射在水面、桥畔的清寂影子。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 明月沉落于枫桥之上，如水的月色静静流淌，洒下一片洁白清辉。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句化用张继《枫桥夜泊》的意境，写夜半江桥月色，月色如水浮动，清冷幽寂。</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：竹霜斑驳疑诗迹</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 竹霜：凝结在翠竹枝叶上的寒霜。</p><p class="ql-block"> 斑驳：色彩、痕迹错落杂沓、深浅相间的样子。</p><p class="ql-block"> 疑：仿佛、好似，表揣测联想的意思。</p><p class="ql-block"> 诗迹：诗的痕迹，指题写的诗句、笔墨字迹。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 竹枝之上凝着寒霜，霜痕错落斑驳，望去恍惚好似人们留下的诗行墨迹。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句借霜染竹枝的实景，生发诗意遐想，把眼前秋竹霜景幻化为笔墨诗痕，清冷雅致，富于文人想象。</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：张国福 燕燕于飞 震撼哥 北国之春 荷花 元其 琢玉 雨燕 老丁 不亦le乎 淡定 云朵 小江鱼 武植 文心 若水 闲云 刘义 美西洋 胡萝卜 弦思 笛里关山 小雨点 云心诗影</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 以上简析仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片根据出句意境由AI创作</p>