<p class="ql-block">昵称|云迹小号</p><p class="ql-block">图片|网络.致谢</p><p class="ql-block">美篇号|498017213</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此为旧作《秋窗雁子书》，又名妆台秋思。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">借秋雁、烛火、熏香、竹风、苔痕诸景，铺展一段久别相思。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">临镜起念，拈香寄远，怯问归期，误听环佩，勘阅旧痕。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">层层心绪，由期盼到落空，再到岁月沉淀后的淡淡怅然。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">旧文重整，再呈诸君。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书一：临镜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">霜凝菱花鬓云松</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">素手未理妆奁铜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">忽见雁字书天末</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">墨痕遥映烛影红</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书二：拈香</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">金兽熏笼暖画堂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">心字篆烟绕曲廊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">欲托清香传塞北</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">却随风散入渺茫</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书三：怯问</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">欲卜归期怯倚栏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">衡阳路远怯轻寒</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">恐惊残荷听雨梦</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">独抱焦琴对夜弹</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书四：误闻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">环佩叮咚叩窗急</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">启扉唯见叶满阶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">原是天风戏竹韵</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">空教泪染紫罗衫</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">书五：勘痕</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">细数阑干旧迹深</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">十年苔纹印痴心</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">相逢陌上烟雨重</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">各道寒暖霜满襟</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诚谢应旺安老师雅赏点评</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">五笺秋窗，写尽相思意：评《秋窗雁子书》</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">这首组诗以“书”为引，借五幕场景串联起深闺相思，笔墨清雅却情意绵长，将秋日怀人的心绪写得细腻动人。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诗人以“临镜”见雁起兴，“霜凝鬓云”的慵懒与“雁字书天”的惊见形成对比，开篇便立住思念底色；“拈香”“怯问”两章，从欲托清香传意到怯问归期、怕惊残梦，把怀人时的期盼与怯意层层递进。“误闻”一章最是精妙，将风吹竹韵错听为环佩叩窗，泪染罗衫的细节，让虚虚实实的思念落地为真切的怅惘；末章“勘痕”以十年苔纹印痴心收束，陌上相逢却只道寒暖的淡然，藏尽岁月沉淀的遗憾。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">全诗语言雅致如古词，每“书”皆是一帧秋窗剪影，把相思的起承转合，写得既有古典韵味，又含绵长余味。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> 秋窗雁子书