初识“特里奥莱”

上海蜀草

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“特里奥莱,这来自法兰西的古老诗体,本是中世纪行吟诗人钟爱的回旋曲式,八行,首句三现。我初识它时,并未料到它会像一条蜿蜒的藤蔓,缠绕进我2026年夏日的晨昏里。”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">——摘录自听雨阁老师美篇之《诗缘三叠(代跋)》</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">近日,万龙生老师发布两组“特里奥莱”,引来围观和同好响应。余亦觉得新奇,也依葫芦画瓢凑出四首以达心志。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀遇诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀的十载诗意为舟,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时光的引力拖拽快走。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">格律体新诗相依相伴,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀的十载诗意为舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚晴的生命缪斯护佑,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">行吟的路上有群诗友。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古稀的十载诗意为舟,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时光的引力拖拽快走。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">“白海豚”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白海豚卷起风狂雨骤,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长街变成了一条河流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">豪车在水里蹒跚慢步,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白海豚卷起风狂雨骤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​玩手机宅看无聊短剧,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​偶尔也凑句疏解闲愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​白海豚卷起风狂雨骤,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长街变成了一条河流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(注:白海豚,2026年8月台风名。)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七夕</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰望星河我漫忆昔年,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">过往的悲欢付与云天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五十载光阴恬淡相守,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰望星河我漫忆昔年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙凡终归是天地两界,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟火红尘里苦中有甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰望星河我漫忆昔年,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">过往的悲欢付与云天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奶羊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​​平生只关注草青草黄,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日日都吐出醇厚奶香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从不问乳汁养肥了谁,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平生只关注草青草黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">匆匆来到这纷繁尘世,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">也不知自己老将何往。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平生只关注草青草黄,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日日都吐出醇厚奶香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">去年立秋习作(含视频)。娱乐。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再见!谢谢观赏</span></p>