<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">【芳草杯】第三十期扫码对句小赛，对句采用扫码交卷，交卷即退，不得停留。匿名点评。（一人一句，不同思路可两句，友情支持，排名不得奖）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">众评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">总评：琢玉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">辅导：匿名</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">赞助：梧桐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">收稿～审核：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">美 篇 制 作：芳草</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5o1wou46" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">【芳草杯】闲时乐与诗茶伴之众评</a></p> <p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉简析：此句隐藏主语，以闲情为骨，勾勒清雅日常。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">状语：①“闲时”空闲的时候，时间状语，更精准一点是条件状语，有空闲的时候</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">②“乐”直抒悠然心绪，是内在欢喜而非外物取悦；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">③“与诗茶”中诗、茶为两个并列的雅趣意象，一润心魂，一清口舌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">谓语“伴”将诗书清茶化为知己，无喧嚣应酬，唯余独处安然，尽显淡泊闲适的生活志趣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">一等奖</span></p><p class="ql-block">36.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：僻处甘同兰竹亲【云朵】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：兰竹高洁与诗茶清雅相对，一写日常闲趣，一写幽处心境，相辅相成，尽显淡泊文雅的君子情怀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">二等奖</span></p><p class="ql-block">14.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老去思同梅鹤依【百合】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：“老去”呼应“闲时”写岁月心境，梅鹤衬隐逸风骨，与上联诗茶闲雅意境契合，淡静悠然，满含文人淡泊情怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：胜日欣同花鸟亲【芳草】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：花鸟清欢对应诗茶雅趣，一为日常小乐，一为胜日游赏，心境悠然相合，满是恬淡闲适的文人意趣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">三等奖</span></p><p class="ql-block">9.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：佳日欣随莺燕歌【三人行】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：诗茶静雅与莺燕欢歌勾勒悠闲光景，赏心悦目，恬淡鲜活，满是自在舒心的生活意趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴处常将竹菊吟【鹏程】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：竹菊、诗茶，皆是清雅风物，闲时对兴处。意境顺畅，满是悠然隐逸的文人意趣，气韵柔和协调。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：晚岁懒将名利争【云朵】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：懒争名利与乐伴诗茶反向承接，颇有新意而顺畅和谐，意境、情感超然而通透，看淡俗世、安守清雅的情趣与追求跃然笔端。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">优秀奖</span></p><p class="ql-block">1.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉后频将草木吟【芳草】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：闲伴诗茶，醉吟草木，尽显文人恬淡隐逸心境，意境和谐自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：窘处仍将气节持【逐玉】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">芳草：上联柔和恬淡，下联困窘。画面切换有点快，缺少铺垫，推优。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：晚岁期从鸥鹭游【老丁】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：鸥鹭闲游对应诗茶雅趣，淡泊归隐之意宛然可见，意境悠然，清雅统一。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老后爱同花鸟亲【宋】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：花鸟对诗茶清雅相称，闲适之意相融，恬淡安然，读来舒心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">优秀奖</span></p><p class="ql-block">33.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉后酣同云水眠【小雨点】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：云水对诗茶，一静一清。闲时、醉后两种闲逸状态呼应，尽显寄情山水、随性自在的恬淡心境，气韵悠然相融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静夜欣同风月眠【云心诗影】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：风月清景对诗茶雅趣，写出悠然独处之乐，情景相融，清雅气韵浑然一体。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴至勤将山水寻【开心】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">琢玉：承接上联闲雅意趣，勤寻山水呼应诗茶之乐，动静相宜，尽显寄情山野、随心寻幽的文人情怀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">1.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉后频将草木吟【芳草】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：胜日欣同花鸟亲【芳草】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：梦里欣依梅鹤眠【高山流水】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：忙里拒因烟酒迷【震撼哥】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：趣至常邀竹菊陪【天山飞雪】</p> <p class="ql-block"> 6.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处神随笔墨游【小江鱼】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：雅处愿同梅竹邻【山旮旯子】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处漫观风竹嬉【开心】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：佳日欣随莺燕歌【三人行】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：窘处仍将气节持【琢玉】</p> <p class="ql-block">11.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：寂里愿随风月行【乘风】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处欢同书墨行【淡定】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">13</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：倦后甘同山水栖【雨燕】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老去思同梅鹤依【百合】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处常同草木亲【刘秋生】</p> <p class="ql-block">16.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处喜同词曲吟【小草】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：急处恐遭绳索缠【闲云】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：澹处欣承木石亲【瘦竹清影】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">19.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：常日喜于山水邻【武植】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴处常将竹菊吟【鹏程】</p> <p class="ql-block">21</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：晴日常随山水游【荷花】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴里每同云水眠【梧桐】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处偏教竹月陪【鹏程】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴起常携笔墨行【北国之春】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉后梦随云水游【弦思】</p> <p class="ql-block">26.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静里欣将典籍温【老丁】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：晚岁期从鸥鹭游【老丁】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">28.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：游处喜于花月随【胡萝卜】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">29.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：淡处情随山水邻【金雨】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：厄处甘为家国酬【文心】</p> <p class="ql-block">31.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老后爱同花鸟亲【宋】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：寂处不妨鸥鹭临【乡间晚风】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：醉后酣同云水眠【小雨点】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">34.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：饮罢愿从笔墨耕【不亦乐乎】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静后欣看云水闲【淡定】</p> <p class="ql-block">36.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：僻处甘同兰竹亲【云朵】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：晚岁懒将名利争【云朵】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：暮岁喜同曲画陪【刘义】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">39.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：长处精于山水吟【高飞】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">40.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静处神随云鹭飞【运河泛舟】</p> <p class="ql-block">41.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：忙里难从梅鹤栖【笛里关山】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：余岁自同云水闲【燕燕于飞】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：闹处逸随云水游【愚夫】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">44.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老去甘同林壑居【愚夫】</p> <p class="ql-block">45.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：静夜欣同风月眠【云心诗影】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46.</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：兴至勤将山水寻【开心】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">47.（超时递交友情支持）</p><p class="ql-block">出句：闲时乐与诗茶伴【琢玉】</p><p class="ql-block">对句：老去甘依松鹤邻【拜友弘诗】</p>