遵渔洋绝句第七法 景起事转虚结 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1、要求：依据“渔洋七绝十二法”之第七法，写一首七绝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>即：一二句直赋眼前景、心中情，第三句以叙写人事转接，结句由实返虚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2、题目自拟，题材自选。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3、韵部不限，数量不限。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4、要合律合韵，律韵自检。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">初冬</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滕绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜寒风上小楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">纷纷落叶送余秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨来拾取两三片，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">隐隐春声在里头。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昆明湖夏景</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">党剑华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠盘承露晓珠明，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">粉面初开映水清。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">画舸移时香染袖，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">长桥影里澹烟生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">开阳桥灯光秀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张素梅 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桥灯铺水映夕霞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩练随风拂岸葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静倚栏头凝睇久，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">流光摇散落星花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏夜独坐</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹椅摇风月渐醺，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">茶烟未尽夜先分。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">临街歌笛飘然去，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半榻空明半榻云。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">防城港红树林即景</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨润西湾烟袅袅，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风含红树鹭关关。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓑衣独坐汀边叟，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">入水长杆钓远山。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉蝶花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">董韶军</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">万千粉紫绕枝头，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂轻欢惹蝶羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉醉芳丛迷去路，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">香尘漫径暮云悠。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">海畔垂纶</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三分潮软风舒浪，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹭领银帆入远洋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐岸垂丝闲望渚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晴云渺渺共天长。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">机场接女归京有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李洪茹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">银箭穿云度海天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">九霄澄碧浸晴烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舷窗影动千山退，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一片归霞落鬓边。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">银杏叶片书签（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑昭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金黄满树秋声至，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小扇莹莹香气融。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">数片细拾夹册内，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">书斋长伴忆无穷。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏夜书怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘敬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒸云暑气伴宵长，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">时有清风送浅凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静坐窗前闲展卷，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝉鸣入梦尽书香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">读诗（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔡建品</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗书一卷难离手，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹影摇窗月色柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">细品轻吟心已醉，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">飘然仙子共云悠。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏 晴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨来雨霁鹊声声，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">木槿花妍芳露盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">契友相偕湖畔去，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰舟轻荡碧波明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲秋怀母</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">桂子流香夜气清，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月华如水映窗明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今分饼无萱伴，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂寂星河断雁声。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五月槐花情（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宁玲玲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琼花初夏竞芳芬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐伞高摇耸入云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">几盏清茶翁妪伴，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">吹英嚼蕊忆童心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">凤凰单枞茶</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郭代平</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">云藏雾养蕴春芽，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日月明辉焙物华。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一注清泉岩韵出，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半瓯烟雨是生涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琉璃𠂆</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李惠深</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">灰瓦雕梁匾额红，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">文房金石墨香融。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老街信步槐荫里，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静览丹青仰古风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋夜怀远</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张杰</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦花飞雪满神洲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁背斜阳带晚秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">独坐寒窗怀故友，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半江明月半江流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">京居咏怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶建华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">十载离乡客上京，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陪孙问道幸相迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">流年不觉霜沾鬓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一卷书香伴我行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">题山叶口景区</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">姜超英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">峡谷溪流五彩石，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">山峦迷雾卧龙姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鉴湖亭畔终开窍，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿野含烟远梦痴。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏 荷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈多佳（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑气蒸腾热浪烘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翁推轮椅扇摇风。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老妻安坐观荷景，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">并蒂莲花分外红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">参观中央民族大学有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅杨桢</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲夏炎天暑气扬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">树阴捧出界清凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡邻缓步黉门里，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">恍若青春入梦长。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昙 花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑成美</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">素蕊凝香趁夜开，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">银辉漫溢绝尘埃。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">相逢莫叹韶华短，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一缕温馨入我怀。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;">女子诗社美篇编辑部</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾 问：苏兰芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">主 编：张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block">副主编：庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美 </p><p class="ql-block">本期编辑：庞志敏</p><p class="ql-block">本期组稿：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block">审 核：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block">编 委 会：张彤彦 党剑华 </p><p class="ql-block"> 庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美</p><p class="ql-block"> 刘敬芳</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:22px;">欢迎</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><i style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">观赏点赞转发</i></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><i style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;">收藏加点评</i></p> <p 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