依渔洋绝句第六法 由景入情理 <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1、依据“渔洋七绝十二法”之第六法：前两句直赋眼前景，第三句以“好是”“好到”“分明”等词加以作者评论。写一首七绝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2、题目自拟，题材自选。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3、韵部不限，数量不限。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4、要合律合韵，律韵自检。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">望 春</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滕绍英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">丝丝鹅柳倚东风，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">点点新花绽浅红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">定是归飞云里燕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">衔来春色到京城。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫 藤</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">朱藤如瀑自天倾，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一片晴霞入眼明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">最是随风摇曳处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉阶拾尽落花声。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">海淀老龄大学诗词</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">写作班最后一课感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">党剑华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">谢家山水韵中游，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">讲席清音绕未收。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是钟鸣人散后，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">空庭立尽暮云流。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清晨像素天桥漫步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">南飔拂面鹊声鸣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">木槿初开带露盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正值蕤宾清晓好，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曦阳冉冉玉桥行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">别海淀老龄大学</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶建华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三载芸窗一旦封，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">良师教诲韵长浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">襟怀自与分明见，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">再起征帆向远峰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪畔新荷（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张素梅 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">浅碧清波托翠盘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽香暗度水云间。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">分明雨后尘嚣净，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静立池心不染繁。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庭前榴花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张素梅 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晴光盈户覆轻纱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">艳蕊堆枝映赤霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是繁英蜂蝶绕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">满庭朱色胜春花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">盼春（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宁玲玲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">孟春久候百花开，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">闭户凭窗雅韵裁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好在柔风舒柳眼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">更兼细雨润梅腮。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">法源寺丁香诗会</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘天阁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫烟浮蕊暗香传，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">把卷裁诗雅兴牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正值钟声陶俗虑，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一庭芳树自嫣然。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">古榕树（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑昭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">丝绦万缕荡清风，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遍洒花荫驱暑蒸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正是鸟群嬉树上，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">路人闲聚乘凉亭。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">江暮曲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘敬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斜阳浴水半江红，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">箫管悠扬共晚风。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正是渔家灯火现，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">归舟数点破烟空。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天青色</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李洪茹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霁云开一色鲜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天光乍泻落樽前。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">分明宋釉凝真意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">千载犹迷画里禅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">村边小池塘（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔡建品</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">微波荡漾小村旁，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿柳垂青蛙鼓扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是炎阳蒸烤日，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">儿童戏水众乘凉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷 烟</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷风暗度小池塘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠叶含烟浸夕阳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">恰是无人通得处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一湾清浅漾诗香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏格桑花（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑成美</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎阳夏日淡如风，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠叶游丝托艳红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是蝶儿常作伴，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝朝暮暮笑盈盈。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">云朵雪山</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">董韶军</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">京华雨霁幻神山，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">棉絮银纱堆雪颜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是天公真作美，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">凌霄云阁落人间。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西窗夜思</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西窗灯尽夜难安，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">独对空杯焉可叹。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一枕沉酣求暂忘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">醒来惆怅又凭栏。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">消 暑</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">姜超英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏天未到溽烟浮，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">窒比桑拿汗似珠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好在心清无俗扰，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳堤树下阅诗书。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">读赵老师竹诗感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李惠深</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">组诗声色韵悠长，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">深浅从容话典章。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好是闲庭摇竹影，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">和风化雨润新篁。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">游茶乡龙脊梯田</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">红伟</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">青茶热沏鼎间沸，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">缕缕香丝馨满腮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正是一年春好处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">重登龙脊赏芽开。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛赞两会期间冒雪值岗的志愿者 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅杨桢</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琼英三月落京华，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">挺立红衣映玉沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好在东风吹万里，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一肩晴雪护春霞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">新安江畔漳潭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏玉华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">山村绕水客难寻，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">樟树千年香满心。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">好到斜阳江上落，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">归舟唱晚碧波金。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜 市</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一城星斗落杯盘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炙味乘风拂暑残。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">正是人间清永夜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">何须更羡玉台欢。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px;">女子诗社美篇编辑部</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾 问：苏兰芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">主 编：张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">副主编：庞志敏 刘桂娥 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 赵淑玲 郑成美 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本期编辑：庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">本期组稿：刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 审 核：刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">编 委 会：张彤彦 党剑华 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 庞志敏 刘桂娥 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 赵淑玲 郑成美</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> 刘敬芳</span></p>