法渔洋绝句第五法 寄今昔之慨叹 <p class="ql-block">1、依据“渔洋七绝十二法”之第五法，写一首七绝。</p><p class="ql-block">2、题目自拟，题材自选。</p><p class="ql-block">3、韵部不限，数量不限。</p><p class="ql-block">4、要合律合韵，律韵自检。</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">见兰芳越冬芭蕉新叶初展</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>寄众姐妹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹记霜天碧叶招，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风流引领路迢迢。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">嫩芽今又渐肥硕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">重约津门共赏蕉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">访罔极寺</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">党剑华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓼莪吟罢筑禅门，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蕃汉会盟故地存。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">此际空廊唯雨迹，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">苔纹漫漶认前恩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老舍丹柿小院</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">党剑华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">四世龙须一巷中，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">画帘菊影小窗东。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今朝柿树垂丹果，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">独向秋庭诉晚风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏日西堤</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶建华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉带含烟笼素纱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">塘边旧址记繁华。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今翠盖飘香处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">落日熔金映水涯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧岸重游并忆父亲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郭代平</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晴滩野菊映眉娥，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">慈父相牵识翠螺。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧岸重来人易感，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤怀不忍对沧波。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆河</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张素梅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">儿时荒岸草萋萋，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">未有笙歌未有堤。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日临风观画舫，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晴光朝旭焕河溪。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">回故乡</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔时千顷接山光，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲涧穿畴酿黍香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日层楼连碧宇，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">万家灯火是吾乡。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西堤稚荷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">董韶军</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧岁风摇菡萏妍，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠罗轻袂映长天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今新嫩才舒角，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">几点蜻蜓伴燕翩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">山居寄怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔逐浮名未得闲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">平生碌碌锁尘寰。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今解带松阴下，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清曲高吟对月山。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">端阳念母</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清晨煮蛋点雄黄，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五色线妍蒲艾香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">又是端阳慈母渺，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">萦回暖语泪汪汪。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">端午怀母</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晨来蒸粽煮鸡蛋，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩线捻搓环手腕。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喟叹而今成永离，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">嘉行懿范长依伴。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏鲁冰花（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宁玲玲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一溪澄碧响潺湲，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">过尽芳菲万木残。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽谷而今开锦绣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">缤纷清韵暖心间。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">别海淀老龄大学</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李洪茹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">四秩韶华誉九垓，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风化雨润灵台。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今绛帐弦歌寂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">独对空庭暮色催。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">父亲节忆父</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅杨桢</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半世追思膝下欢，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年驮我陟层峦。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清幽梦绕慈言在，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">满院儿孙岁岁安。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">重游鼓浪屿</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅杨桢</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍茫琴岛碧连天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">卅载浮云锁屿前。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今有轻鸥飞似箭，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">随风伴我晚霞边。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">过儿母校</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘敬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾送儿郎入校门，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">书声犹在耳边喧。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今桃李成林际，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">尚记当年雨露痕。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">高考</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李惠深</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">儿时追逐闹球场，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">共伴书窗觅韵长。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日考堂酬夙愿，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥毫尽展少年狂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">思念</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">姜超英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">娟娟小字满清笺，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑靥犹如在眼前。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">此日因何常恨柳，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">人间天上别十年。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆故乡小院（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑成美</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春夏时光草木丰，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑声满院百花红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今父母天堂住，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">往日欢欣已是风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡小院（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔡建品</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂架葡萄鸡犬欢，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">父亲扫地母烹餐。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今灶炕蒙尘垢，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">静寂空庭蛛网悬。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">新田（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑昭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">杂草蓬蓬夹乱石，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜂蝶不至鸟难食。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">而今禾谷盈畴垄，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿水塘中鱼儿驰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏紫藤花 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘天阁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮春紫蔓簇花开，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂瀑藤萝画面裁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">骤雨今来摧落蕊，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">只留残叶满阶台。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金婚纪念日</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈多佳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">知音亭处结良缘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">举案齐眉五十年。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日吉辰何以赠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥毫泼墨并头莲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">别好友</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒窗夜雨一灯青，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野渡春风双醉汀。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日孤帆沧海外，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮云何处是曾经。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;">女子诗社美篇编辑部</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾 问：苏兰芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">主 编：张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block">副主编：庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美 </p><p class="ql-block">本期编辑：庞志敏</p><p class="ql-block">本期组稿：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block"> 审 核：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block">编 委 会：张彤彦 党剑华 </p><p class="ql-block"> 庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美</p><p class="ql-block"> 刘敬芳</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">欢迎： 观赏 点赞 转发</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 收藏加点评</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">🤝诚邀各路诗友🤝</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">于评论区挥毫留墨</span></p><p class="ql-block" 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