遵渔洋绝句第四法 发畴昔之感 <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">过梁思成林徽因故居</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金棱河畔紫葳开，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">门径清幽少客来。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹恋曾经谢庭宴，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">邻花岁岁过墙台。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">访将府公园点将台</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">党剑华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坝河波敛晴光动，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟柳垂阴护旧台。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾记黄金求骏骨，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">千旗卷地朔云开。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">信步龙潭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">张素梅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">缓步幽堤远世尘，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天轮静峙野塘滨。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆寻年少嬉游处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐浪欢声漾碧粼。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">悼闺密梅梅（ 新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈多佳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">妹在云中鹤舞翩，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">姐翻相册泪涟涟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾同望月吟风雅，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今剩枯梅落粉笺。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕京晴望</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">丝云如练曳燕京，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风递香芬草木盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔岁烟霾遮白昼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">今朝天际日华明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西堤望水</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">董韶军</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霁天高云自悠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一湖静谧想兰舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔乘彩舫穿荷碧，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻棹摇波画卷留。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">杜鹃花与杜鹃鸟（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郑昭</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遍野燃丹三月春，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">珍稀乔木蕴奇根 。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾经泣血声声唤，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花鸟皆如赤子纯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘公岛谒邓世昌雕像偶题</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郭代平</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟波漠漠锁蛟宫，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">锈楫苔碑夕照中。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">深忆邓公沉舰处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">怒涛犹带百年烽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">观电影有感</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅杨桢</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">银龄逐乐入黉门，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">观影凝怀倍感恩。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹记儿时乡坝晚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">村邻相伴守黄昏。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">端午怀屈子</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">家家蒲艾立门楣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">角黍投江几许悲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">遥忆灵均抱石去，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">贞魂铁骨万秋垂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">端午思母</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陈素娜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">角粽飘香端午时，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">艾蒿户户插门楣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蓦然追忆童年事，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩线雄黄母爱随。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏桃花（通韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宁玲玲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">落英浮水漾春风，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">满树丹霞照眼明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹记昔年初绽日，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">群芳未醒最先红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">旧宅</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘天阁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏篱蛛网映斜阳，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂院风来叶落黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹忆当年同酌酒，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">独听檐外燕声长。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">思念母亲</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘天阁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">破壁荒庭落日光，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西风残叶满阶黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆随慈母栽花处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">剩有孤藤绕旧廊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">入朝阳女子诗社有寄</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李洪茹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">从今喜入朝阳社，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑伴群芳沐韵光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆昔挥毫题贺句，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">自惭才陋怯登堂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏通州漕运码头</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟柳风荷护月楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">啼莺舞燕伴人游。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔时千舸争流处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">粮米丝罗入帝州。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">谒梁林故居</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">庞志敏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">低檐敛翠叠枝稠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">素壁斜辉引客眸。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆昔双贤营宇处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗心匠骨载千秋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">游将府公园</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘敬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖水微澜映碧天，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">林深野陌轨斜穿。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">当年货运通南北，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯见荒台锁暮烟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">海棠花溪的今昔（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔡建品</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪水清清映榭亭，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">海棠夹岸似霞明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诸君可记之前日，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">浊气污流乱草生。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">海棠花溪</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李惠深</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">骄阳穿柳碧波融，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠果垂枝叶影胧。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾赏花红香满径，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺啼水暖醉春风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">发小聚会 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">姜超英</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一任公交驶向东，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">胸萦发小意朦胧。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曾经貌美肤如玉，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">难抵光阴剪翠红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">过将府公园点将台</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">堞前古柳试秋声，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">台上青棠待点兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忆昔将军麾众处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一番清角暮云平。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">题将府公园野鸭湖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">刘桂娥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">云影湖光一镜开，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">凫雏三五破空来。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔时乱苇横斜处，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度春风换旧苔。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px;">女子诗社美篇编辑部</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾 问：苏兰芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">主 编：张彤彦</span></p><p class="ql-block">副主编：庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美 </p><p class="ql-block">本期编辑：庞志敏</p><p class="ql-block">本期组稿：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block"> 审 核：刘桂娥</p><p class="ql-block">编 委 会：张彤彦 党剑华 </p><p class="ql-block"> 庞志敏 刘桂娥 </p><p class="ql-block"> 赵淑玲 郑成美</p><p class="ql-block"> 刘敬芳</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">🤝 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