<p class="ql-block">昵称｜云迹</p><p class="ql-block">图片｜网络.致谢</p><p class="ql-block">美篇号｜10553551</p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">①</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其实 </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不会写诗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只会</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">断句分行</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">再用口水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">签名</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">②</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">从黑夜出发</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">写字的女人</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把笔捻成麻花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">扔进茶里煎炸</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">被馋嘴的狗狗叼走</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">镜子照着白纸笺</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">猫咪说加油</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">送你小鱼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">③</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">太阳嗮多了皮黑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我就晒月亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月亮掩面 藏起来</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">怕我沾了她的光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">星子友好 陪我假寐</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">梦里落下春花冬雪</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一场花与雪的幽会</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">孕育着春天</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">④</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜 多么美</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">坐在真与幻中间</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把梦的血液溢出</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">天空 成了蝴蝶的翅膀</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">飞翔多么美 多么执着 </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">尽管面前是烛火</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我多么自由</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">蝴蝶在唱</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我装作听见了</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其实我一直在写口水诗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">⑤</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诗在纸上打盹</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">字与词哈欠连天</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">捻亮白炽灯光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">撑不开它们的眼睑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜莺在夜色里静默</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">风开始嘲笑我</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你以为 潮了的就是诗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">雨在泽地积水 断句分行</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">呼呼大睡</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">2020/11/16即兴</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p>口水诗①|<a href="https://www.meipian.cn/2d3r3vkd?share_from=self&user_id=10553551&uuid=e2244838edc63326c75a4f0a07fee4e1&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=10553551&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=3658e9919f6a2750db9b84a74eb70758" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">网页链接</a></p><p><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">口水诗②|</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/2kn8ul30?share_from=self&user_id=10553551&uuid=e2244838edc63326c75a4f0a07fee4e1&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=10553551&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=3658e9919f6a2750db9b84a74eb70758" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">网页链接</a></p><p><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">口水诗③|</span><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/2n5v9mr6?share_from=self&user_id=10553551&uuid=e2244838edc63326c75a4f0a07fee4e1&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=10553551&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=3658e9919f6a2750db9b84a74eb70758" target="_blank" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">网页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诚谢一弦清心老师雅赏点评</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">这组诗以“其实，不会写诗，只会断句分行，再用口水签名”自嘲开篇，实则完成了对诗歌创作最生动的解构。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">将笔“捻成麻花扔进茶里煎炸”、“晒月亮”、“陪星子假寐”——日常物象被赋予顽皮的灵性。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">最动人处在于清醒的自觉：“蝴蝶在唱，我装作听见了，其实我一直在写口水诗”——明知是“口水诗”，却甘愿沉醉于这份自由，正如诗中所写“尽管面前是烛火”，“我多么自由”。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">朴素语言下，藏着对诗意的真挚信仰。</p> 口水也写诗