<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">6月12日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山径行悠曲袅风（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遂携美酒泛清波（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">烟汀得趣鹭鸥盟（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山客到迟背负霜 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当容倦鸟觅清凉 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愁中览卷月灯燃 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浊酒浅斟笑溢腮（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便除罗袂弄清江（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉时跩步野郊歌（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄犬迎前尾拂衣（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫游碧水戏浮云（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">散仙振袂海天游（老丁）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父返迟头戴星 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常欣静羽避炎风 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">空山负斧岭峰歌 (张国福)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父行悠船载星（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又思高树纳阴凉（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暮湾收篓蟹鱼归（弦思）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父唱悠棹载星（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便划游艇戏明湖（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忙时伏案墨笺耕（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稚子迎前手捧茶 (A. 正群)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尤欣闲蝶戏芳丛 (A. 正群)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽怀倚杖岭山游 (A. 正群)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老妪探频头顶星(不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便投钓饵候佳音(不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醉时纵笔竹梅勾(不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔叟停舟手掬星 (小江鱼)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常寻野径觅清阴 (小江鱼)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽塘酌酒藕丝牵 (小江鱼)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白鹭飞急翅带风 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便寻浓柳纳微凉 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静心观水柳风拂 (小雨点)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">童牧耽迟头顶星（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更怜游蝶舞残春（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忙时挥汗稻粱收（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">田叟荷锄头顶星（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡浅鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谁怜瘦马困残阳（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清风抚杖竹松吟（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">斜径行时袖带风 (武先生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">时怜倦鸟憩幽林 (武先生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平时谋业雨风多 (武先生)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父泊舟手揽星（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常钦孤鹤傲严霜（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故人把酒鹤鸥盟（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父停桡手捧星（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">更欣山鸟纳微凉（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静时执笔鹭鸥吟（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山径行徐笛和风（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便凭小棹弄清波（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长堤倚柳耳心清（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家犬当门眼望星（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还欣飞鹭戏清池（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳笺运笔草花吟（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村嫂冒寒脚踏霜（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何如振翅向青天（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">他乡策马晓昏行（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家燕争先翅挂珠 (北国之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">即寻幽谷纳微凉 (北国之春)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欢时把盏月风酬 (北国之春)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">禅客化缘头戴星（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常欣翔鹭入青云（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">静心习武地天摇（刘义） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">村妇恐迟手拨炉（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常怜田叟沐骄阳（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅时泼墨竹梅描（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹤径风幽履染霜 (高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常耽幽涧净喧尘 (高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青灯揽卷岁光悠 (高山流水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父收竿手掬星 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">常钦倦鸟避炎风 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽时拂砚墨诗酬 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔父钓闲头枕波 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹欣高树引清风 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清风弄笛鹭鸥眠 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老妪倚扉目望山 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛夏（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">也观归雁离金秋 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲时抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">择时架釜露风餐 (胡萝卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野樵归晚肩扛月（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稚子趋前手托鸢 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每羡潜鳞逃盛暑（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">便掬荷盏挹清风 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲日抛竿云水钓（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清宵揽月竹亭吟 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">出句简析：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：野樵归晚肩扛月</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 野樵：山野间砍柴的樵夫，泛指隐于山林的劳作之人。</p><p class="ql-block"> 归晚：天色已晚，方才踏上归途。</p><p class="ql-block"> 肩扛月：全联诗眼，并非实指扛着月亮，是浪漫的拟人+夸张写法。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为： </p><p class="ql-block"> 深山里的樵夫趁着夜色返程，皓月东升，清辉落在他的肩头，仿佛一轮明月被他扛在肩上。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句勾勒出一幅山夜归樵、月色随行的清幽山野图景。</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：每羡潜鳞逃盛暑</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 每：常常、每每，流露长久的观感与心绪。</p><p class="ql-block"> 羡：羡慕、向往。</p><p class="ql-block"> 潜鳞：代指水中游鱼。鳞，借指鱼；潜，深藏水底。</p><p class="ql-block"> 逃盛暑：避开盛夏酷热。 </p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）常常羡慕水底的游鱼，能藏身碧波之中，躲开盛夏难耐的酷暑。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句以夏日实景起笔：人间骄阳似火、燥热难耐，而游鱼潜游深水，清凉自在。一热一凉形成鲜明对比，画面鲜活。</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：闲日抛竿云水钓</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：叙事联</p><p class="ql-block"> 闲日：清闲无事的时日。</p><p class="ql-block"> 抛竿：抛出钓竿，即垂钓。</p><p class="ql-block"> 云水：流云、碧水，代指山水江湖。</p><p class="ql-block"> 钓：本义垂钓，此处一语双关。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 清闲无事之时，手执钓竿，在山水云际之间悠然垂钓。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句勾勒出一幅江野闲钓、自在悠然的画面。</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 震撼哥 老丁 张国福 弦思 雨燕 ANG.ZQ 不亦le乎 小江鱼 一粒种子 若水 愚夫 武先生 荷花 淡定 云朵 元其 闲云 北国之春 刘义 文心 高山流水 美西洋 笛里关山 胡萝卜 燕燕于飞</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 以上简析仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自本人随拍</p>