<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七言绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:庄昌栋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">题:莲根醒岁</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 污泥藏根度冬冬,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪融冰开待春动。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">出水尖尖夺目处,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">刺破冬指脉象通。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">释义:冬指意象是寒疑,也可以:刺破寒疑脉象通。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七言绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:庄昌栋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">题:莲盘</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春暖花香拂面来,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">万枝荷箭贴水开。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">无穷碧叶拥清波,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">花仙落凡暗结胎。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七言绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:庄昌栋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">题:荷与藕</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿衣先天水不侵,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">梗茎数孔仿藕心。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">当年魂魄无处栖,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">复原少年作骨筋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">此诗咏哪吒神话故事,下面一首也是,在此说明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七言绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:庄昌栋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">荷与藕</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿衣裹体水难侵,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">多孔直脉贯根茎。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">残魂离散无栖寄,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">再塑仙躯少年筋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七言绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:庄昌栋</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">题:残荷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">[1]</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋孕春骨夏吐芳,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">叶落枝秃水戏鸯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">西风无情褪吾妆,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">来年葱色抚心殇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">[2]</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋孕春骨夏吐芳,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">叶落枝秃暗心伤。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">西风无情褪吾妆,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">来年葱色抚心殇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一日,和盱眙战友沈旭阳谈说绝句和律诗的创作的方法,谈到了旧体和新体,他谈到平仄和押韵,我个人的观点也是坚持押韵,按古体诗的写法,但字却也在上千年传承中,已经改变了原有读音和释义,我首先坚持的是在写实和抒情的同时,意思一定要层层递进,不好,张三和李四一点瓜葛也没有</span></p>