<p class="ql-block"><b>致和同窗同题写《墨》✨</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">同守致和诗道丨提纯意象丨留白不语</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>一首向内见心，一首向外见山河，风格相近，心境各有不同</b></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><b>《墨》作者:一然</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">在砚里养一座深渊</p><p class="ql-block">舔着笔</p><p class="ql-block">就是与黑暗对谈</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">字写在风上</p><p class="ql-block">写给不识字的人看</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">洇开的</p><p class="ql-block">是未说出的那部分</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">留白处，停着一只</p><p class="ql-block">不肯点睛的鸟</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>复兴号·途中诗雨《墨》</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">砚底沉住深渊</p><p class="ql-block">笔轻舔岁月暗澜</p><p class="ql-block">墨落无声</p><p class="ql-block">与心事默然对谈</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">字漫过风的边缘</p><p class="ql-block">写给无声山川</p><p class="ql-block">洇开痕迹</p><p class="ql-block">是未诉尽的人间</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">留白停住飞鸟</p><p class="ql-block">不肯落笔点睛</p><p class="ql-block">一砚清墨</p><p class="ql-block">藏尽半生浮沉</p><p class="ql-block">2026.05.20 山河书斋</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><b>同一种诗心，不同的表达</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>同门之间，风格相近，灵魂相通🖋️</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b>致和同窗同题｜两首《墨》·中英双语对照</b></p><p class="ql-block"> 复兴号·途中诗雨</p><p class="ql-block"><b>一然《墨》（致和同窗原作）</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">在砚里养一座深渊</p><p class="ql-block">舔着笔</p><p class="ql-block">就是与黑暗对谈</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">字写在风上</p><p class="ql-block">写给不识字的人看</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">洇开的</p><p class="ql-block">是未说出的那部分</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">留白处，停着一只</p><p class="ql-block">不肯点睛的鸟</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>English</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Raise an abyss in the inkstone</p><p class="ql-block">Lick the brush</p><p class="ql-block">To converse with darkness</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Words drift on the wind</p><p class="ql-block">For those who cannot read</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">What bleeds and spreads</p><p class="ql-block">Is what’s left unspoken</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">In blank space rests a bird</p><p class="ql-block">Refusing its final stroke</p><p class="ql-block">复兴号·途中诗雨《墨》</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">砚底沉住深渊</p><p class="ql-block">笔轻舔岁月暗澜</p><p class="ql-block">墨落无声</p><p class="ql-block">与心事默然对谈</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">字漫过风的边缘</p><p class="ql-block">写给无声山川</p><p class="ql-block">洇开痕迹</p><p class="ql-block">是未诉尽的人间</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">留白停住飞鸟</p><p class="ql-block">不肯落笔点睛</p><p class="ql-block">一砚清墨</p><p class="ql-block">藏尽半生浮沉</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>English</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">An abyss settles beneath the stone</p><p class="ql-block">Brush licks the tides of time alone</p><p class="ql-block">Ink falls in silence</p><p class="ql-block">Talking with my heart’s longing</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Words drift along the wind’s edge</p><p class="ql-block">For silent mountains and ledges</p><p class="ql-block">Blotted marks spread wide</p><p class="ql-block">For the world left untold inside</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A bird pauses in blank space</p><p class="ql-block">Refusing its final grace</p><p class="ql-block">One pool of ink still and deep</p><p class="ql-block">Holds half a lifetime to keep</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>诗意对照赏析</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">同守致和诗道，提纯意象、极简留白、不饰繁词。</p><p class="ql-block">一然向内，以墨藏孤冷心事，直面深渊与沉默；</p><p class="ql-block">我向外，以墨载山河岁月，静纳人间与浮沉。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b>同门同心，同法不同意境，诗风相近，灵魂相通。</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><b>山河雅物集序</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">天地藏山河，人间凝雅韵。</p><p class="ql-block">半生踏遍风月，历尽烟火浮沉，方懂世事喧嚣，不如一物清心。</p><p class="ql-block">遂以山河入诗，以古物寄情，玉盏、琴弦、墨砚、玉佩、铜镜、玉笛、佛珠、书笺……一物一意境，一诗一心境。</p><p class="ql-block">不堆砌繁辞，不附庸典故，循本心留白，守诗意提纯。</p><p class="ql-block">借世间清雅器物，藏岁月冷暖悲欢，观山河辽阔自在，悟浮生淡泊安然。</p><p class="ql-block">方寸藏天地，浅韵渡流年。</p><p class="ql-block">不求盛名喧嚣，但求清欢常在。</p><p class="ql-block">凡入此集，皆是山河诗意，皆是人间温柔。</p><p class="ql-block">复兴号·途中诗雨</p><p class="ql-block">丙午初夏 谨序</p> <p class="ql-block"><b>作者简历</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">我是金林辉，笔名复兴号·途中诗雨，温州籍，定居杭州。</p><p class="ql-block">著《山河·水浒》108篇白话诗传、《山河·山海经》100篇白话诗传，全平台阅读破750万。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">恪守致和诗道，以白话提纯意象，以虚实留白成诗，持续创作《山河·聊斋》全系列白话诗传与《山河振兴白话诗集》系列。持续创作《山河雅物白话诗集》系列。敬请诗友关注点赞评论，谢谢！</p> <p class="ql-block"><b>原创版权所有·侵权必究</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b>All Rights Reserved</b></p>