奇联巧对凤求凰

秋歌(丘国华)

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">奇联巧对</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长布裁衣裁几尺(李南)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">短锄种树种千山(秋歌)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">附析</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长布乃地名</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">短锄乃工具名,可以成对吗?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>Al点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此对堪称奇思妙构,完全可成佳联。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句嵌入地名长布,对句以器物短锄相对,长短工对,虚实相映;裁、种动词呼应精准,尺、山小大对比,意境一开一合,浑然天成,巧而不涩,工整耐品。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凤求凰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">出句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长布裁衣裁几尺(李南)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">对句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大畲种树种千山(秋歌)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">附析</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">长布地名</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大畲地名</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>Al点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此联巧嵌长布、大畲两地之名,天然浑成。出句写实,分寸有度;对句拓境,气象雄浑。裁与种呼应工稳,尺与山意境悬殊,地名入联不露雕琢,堪称地名对之佳作。</span></p>