<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二六年四月下社课</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用八庚韵作七言律诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊头题字 ：谢宗山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集简评 ：牟明英</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇编辑 ：赵以顺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">图片来源 ：赵以顺种植并拍摄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【谢 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜逢大雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜风吹雨到檐楹，独坐厌闻飘洒声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">想象细民俱困苦，萧疏廛市倍凄清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻梁欠足霜添鬓，桑落但思春满城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老去无闲千百虑，胶胶扰扰了余生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：暮年还持万千忧思，借雨抒怀悲民亦悲己。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受刚】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题若兮家花卉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小园静立且无声，不慕江湖远足行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">烈烈轰轰非所愿，平平淡淡是今生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和风细雨亲身历，酷暑严寒直面迎。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世事荣枯皆有数，秋冬春夏几阴晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：老师以花喻人不留痕！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明鹏】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">访安顺云峰屯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨过云峰万树晴，空山掠影响飞声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悬关尽锁方圆路，绝峪完藏百万兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忍看新苔侵断壁，留听老妪说边城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桐花满树春将尽，落日楼头鼓角轻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：雨洗青山、云峰清朗，风影掠动、谷声空灵，险关藏势、深峪隐兵，青苔侵壁、老妪话城…老师借笔下自然之景，抒幽幽怀古之情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【刘先伦】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遣 怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三月杜鹃啼四声，和风摧我去春耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">掀开垄亩七分土，播下胸中百万兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">滴水铿锵何奈雨，幼芽孱弱只缘晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平江一带花粘露，似泣人间尽贾生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：初读感觉是我真的在田头挥锄开垄、破土播种，欲赞刘老师描绘的春耕场景实在是形象生动。再读方觉刘老师应该是把胸中的凌云壮志都化作了田间的生机，田中播凌云志，笔下藏失意情…</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周国庆】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">与王治高先生驱车之偏岩河写生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">划破阴云天乍晴，驻车临水听春声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿从野岸闲中织，日照寒波分外明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">过眼浮华馀一纸，会心故事作时评。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观君题墨能知味，半楫残舟烟渚横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：周老师好雅兴！浮华看淡，只览春日清欢…</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【赵以顺】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花 农</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲将小圃适幽情，自此晨昏不废耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣看初蕾凝晓露，勤培软土待春生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抛开俗务尘嚣远，每对清芬世虑平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不厌群芳开次第，一庭花月伴诗行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：赵老师仅以小园养花一事，把平凡日子过成了诗意桃源，不佩服不行！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【廖德勋】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">答徐二妹《咏三渡娇香辣子鸡》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身为才女自风生，秀口吟来吃货惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浓淡香甜知味蕾，高低雅俗汇诗情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">辣鸡三渡名初荐，挚友一群心最诚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今借吉言鞭策紧，求真务实向前行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：不识三渡徐二妹，却已在老师的笔下被其才情与烹出的辣子鸡所吸引。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【枕 云】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">读史感寓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昏庸宫阙皆谀赞，黑白官场入骇惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江海高吟多讳语，云山逸唱只闲情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人间冷暖春秋笔，天地沧凉风雨声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">禁锢岁年牛马走，寒边何用问阴晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：通篇借读史抒怀，咏古讽今。道尽文人避世之无奈。讽世慰己，自持史家之锐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">【牟明英】</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">共青湖即景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翠动香浮引我行，风疏烟软逸怀生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渔翁最是知欢趣，僻处悠然寄暮情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">足下径幽尘色远，眸中草浅露珠明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">临看春水倚新柳，不觉一双黄鸟惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">简评：拙 作！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">织金洞一日</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闻名已久梦魂萦，今与妻儿共一程。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世有伟观常避世，情缘未了最关情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">霸王卸甲金盔竖，大圣归田铁棒横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">题壁烟云皆哲圣，惜哉李杜不成行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：祝贺梁老师利用假期携家人寻胜梦得圆！人世哲理，山水之奇，尽显笔端，尾联更是余味无穷…</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">织金洞一日其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桥自天生洞自成，山深路遠亦知名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">号牌云贵连京沪，腔调美欧杂蓬瀛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峡谷蜿蜒龙献宝，洞天奇崛虎含情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此行归去无遗憾，麾下曾经百万兵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：梁老师的豪迈气场，织金洞的绝世美景和五一黄金周来自五湖四海的游人如织的盛况跃然纸上。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【祝西峰】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山里行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宿雨纷纷弄晓晴，嫩林翠湿野烟横。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春迟犹见迁莺啭，日暖兼闻阳雀鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芳景新浓无限趣，绿风初畅有馀情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">酴醿火棘丛丛白，让我神驰眼益明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：宿雨初霁，莺雀和鸣，春日芳景，最是娱人，由远及近、以景入心。读祝老师的山里行，如身临其境，春日温柔之气息扑面而来，醉眼沁怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“五一”节前二日取出右髌骨内固定物</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">前年手术膝穿钉，今日取之胸汗盈。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲室液输寒体暖，半麻针入老眸惊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">转轮历历人无语，割肉沉沉力有声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二寸唏嘘圆物出，骨留两洞待新生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赏读：输液、留钉、取钉，割肉声，或许打了麻药的作者当时感觉不到疼，能直面手术过程和自己的真情实感，术后也是满怀希望。但寒意与痛感却已感染了每一位读者的心。汪老师受苦了，祝您早日康复！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p>