<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二零二六年二月上社课</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">要求：用平水韵六麻写七言律诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刊头题字 ：蒋孝余</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收集简评 ：谢 勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇编辑 ：赵以顺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【赵学鹏】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山 行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">远罩阴霾近罩纱，山中腊月少烟霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒村有路疑无路，病树新痂覆旧痂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">问道无人风咶絮，推门有答扇吱呀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">炊烟不起风仍至，似问空巢第几家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：荒凉及目，山村索寞。一村无犬吠，穷屋少炊烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">立春日车行遵义至贵阳道中</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人事经年乱似麻，多缘阳错与阴差。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">从来对酒因寻乐，不必吟春就访花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁暮已羞谈理想，车轻宜合载烟霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">身家长系房车上，枕过山崖又水涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：节物感羁旅，游边更苦辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">立春后二日居海龙囤</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">荒囤本是小天涯，苒苒春回待着花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">却道千年杨氏业，终归万载帝王家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雄才妄自称慷慨，霸业何曾惜旮旯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一度东风今又至，再描新绿到伤疤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：怀古之作，缺少跌宕起伏之感。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">腊月与播州汇川诗友访沧海行芝麻山中</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峰回又见石嵯岈，雾起难探路远遐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雅集令呼情切切，刨猪饭惹眼巴巴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">花随我后来三月，诗占枝先发一茬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不忿东君不同往，岁残更惜老蒹葭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：怜君又惜君，世态自纷纭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">芝麻访诗友孟天兴，遇雨房车不能进，停半道，醉归于车中宿，次日方回</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人车一体不分家，向晚旅居临水涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">择得山中邻有孟，吟成笔下思无邪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尘间琐事非关己，网上围观仍吃瓜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶梦翩翩来午夜，再携庄子品南华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：剡溪访友，自在随性。芝麻访友，深杯契心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【刘先伦】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">访友抒怀</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是日登临不足夸，将身横亘测天斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">烟云锁路三千里，汇水成河一尺洼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">未尽尘缘销白骨，何来因果毁诗家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">弹歌山下生民病，需用人间悟道茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：开合有度，结句有味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【庄 红】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">腊月访友</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲路盘山冻雨霾，车徐难上野云崖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逢人远近三番问，分道崎岖几转徘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">客慕林深多自在，君称意寡与时乖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薄田十亩劳诗梦，幸有梅花俩看偕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：客行满山雪，香处是梅花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周国庆】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">今夜，雨夹雪</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜雨声中漫品茶，几多往事任长嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾因兴尽愁空盏，何故悲来避细娃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五味杂陈心似梗，三更思绪乱如麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晓风误解斯人意，吹落梅花成雪花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：穷愁盈雪屋，长笛吹梅花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【汪守先】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳岁尾</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萱闱葬后黯云加，岁末悲心乱若麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山楼雨弄旋成泪，村野雪飘强作花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">思情长续人空梦，年味半消春自嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冥外清魂何处觅，祁寒酹酒朔风斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：北堂揽陈迹，中夜起长悲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【梁正森】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">岁暮还家</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">进屋闻声不见妈，弟兄从此各为家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋蓬散尽天涯远，春雨流残地角赊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">梦里常存思母意，庭前犹见逐儿丫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我今头白乱心绪，岁尾年头独叹嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：少裁风树痛，无疾慰萱慈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【罗洪涛】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">岁末归</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">放任蹄烟腋裹霞，脱弦离箭弃天涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">潇湘暮苦灯笼雨，北斗神叨网约车。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">店主嘘寒迎道客，空调问暖化冰花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三更雪夜朦胧里，半宿孤魂已到家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：羁怀推去毂，风雪拥归途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【文受刚】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">熏腊肉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清晨买捆柏香桠，小院窝棚日影斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫架木柴妻挂肉，儿揩汗水女端茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浓烟淡处枝条引，烈焰腾时草叶遮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚掌灯收拾后，金睛火眼泪如麻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);">评：殷勤熏腊肉，取次就春醪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(176, 79, 187);"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【周大中】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山盆访友</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久慕雕龙心似沙，轻车一路入烟霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">导航屡误通天路，幽草多寻处士家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">闭户清修花醉月，围炉闲话韵分茶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">白云深处种红豆，已惯风霜早结痂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：红豆，指红豆杉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：寻诗苍海阔，访友白云深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">赴海龙参加秉鋐诗社年会</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">韵筑兰垣约试茶，轻车直向帝王家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">海龙囤上加微信，飞虎关前眺白沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云耸空城威尚在，碑镌霸业运偏差。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟旌起处春先到，岭上枯枝渐着花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">注：白沙，指白沙河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：残垣堪雅集，遗迹逐流风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【赵以顺】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">山 居</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一径清幽到野家，数峰苍翠入云涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疏林带雾藏轻鸟，浅濑无风浣落花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">半亩青畦分秀色，数间茅舍隔尘沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山中不记年和月，闲坐云边看日斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：山中樵斧烂，窗外白云深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【牟明英】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">偶 拾</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">独行幽径摄梅花，蹑步亦惊枝上鸦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一阵轻飞声散落，几番低逐影横斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">堪离堪合还堪怨，耐寂耐寒更耐嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">入世多逢难解结，风亲雪拥任由他。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：拾得几分春意，另供感物情怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【唐嘉诚】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">丙午破五日，外曾祖潘绍臣本发先生后裔招饮新场桃子坝。</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孟春景色最堪嘉，门外芸苔一望遮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山北山南成偶聚，花开花落几回嗟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">拾来旧事浑如梦，话到残阳渐有涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫道欢愉真少见，不知月华已东斜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：相逢不令尽，别后为谁空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【谢 勇】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">乙巳贱降日</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">自知陋质是蒹葭，淹忽劳生两鬓华。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">业事从来非不力，橐囊比旧近浮夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萧疏境况箪瓢窘，偃蹇年光名利赊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">逼仄门庭空尔尔，老怀凄断碧江涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;">评：拙作</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(176, 79, 187); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(128, 128, 128); font-size:20px;"></span></p>