<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1" style="text-align:right;">文字/云迹</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1" style="text-align:right;">图制作/云迹</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1" style="text-align:right;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把梦打开，魂就飞向故里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">新年的老屋外的月亮还白吗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">窗外的大槐树是否开始葱茏</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">门上的旧符是谁更换</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一朵云泊在屋顶，多像</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那一缕炊烟</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> ——题记</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">【梦深】</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">风很浅 梦很深</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">月很淡 鼾声却浓</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">夜有多静 梦有多深</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">梦有多深 心就多远</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">梦里的脚</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">总是脱不下那双</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">沾着故乡泥土旧鞋</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">穿上这双鞋</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">就踩着了故乡的田埂</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">老屋前的枣树</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">拉着我不放手</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">要我再用竹竿</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">打落红了的枣</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">还有那条小河</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">她怪我</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">怎会这么久</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">不来水里洗脚丫</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">屋顶的炊烟不说话</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那里站着我的童年</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我闻到</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">娘的米香爹的烟火</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">娘说锅里粥还热着</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">爹言走累了就回家</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">梦里回到故乡</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">附身在娘的烛火下</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">让娘柔软的手</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">给我把小辫子扎</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一曲摇篮曲</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">唱醒了七色彩风车</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">张开了蒲公英的翅膀</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">于是</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">我再也不想走远</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜很静 风亦轻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">故乡很远 梦很深</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">梦里</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">那缕炊烟</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">唱着母亲的歌</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诚谢一弦清心老师雅赏点评！</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">《魂归故里》以梦为舟，载乡愁穿越时空。拟人手法精妙，“枣树拉着我不放手”“小河怪我怎不洗脚丫”，故园万物皆有情。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">精华在“梦里的脚/总是脱不下那双/沾着故乡泥土旧鞋”，虚实相生，鞋是归途，泥是乡根，寻常物象凝成无尽思恋。炊烟唱母歌、烛火扎辫子，细节温润，织就深沉绵长的故园之恋。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">――谢谢阅读――</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">🍀🍀🍀</p>