【雪韵诗声】No.2 雪韵平仄

金雀山

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">作者:金雀山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美篇号:9314944</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪落下来的时候</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平仄便有了形状</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">六角的晶棱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">裁开冬的素笺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一行留白</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">是未写完的诗意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风掠过檐角,摇响铜铃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">像平仄里的标点、符号</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">轻轻浅浅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有人呵手</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">写下“晚来天欲雪”的诗句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">墨痕洇开,便暖了半阙流年</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不必踏远寻梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不必围炉煮酒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">且捧一把碎玉,入诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那些藏在</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">“千树万树梨花开”中的惊艳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此刻都落在肩头,化作呢喃</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗是雪的魂,雪是诗的骨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当字句与落雪相拥</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒枝也绽出暖意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪点梅红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷峻与热烈,交织成趣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">便成了冬日里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最温柔的平仄</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青墨留香老师的精彩评论:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拜读金老师的《雪韵平仄》,只觉满纸生香,字字含情,宛如一场与冬日的温柔邂逅。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">您笔下的雪,不再是单纯的冬之使者,而是化作了平仄的韵脚,六角晶棱裁开素笺,留白处皆是未尽的诗意。风摇铜铃为标点,呵手题诗暖流年,这般巧思,将雪与诗的交融写得入木三分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不必寻梅煮酒,只需捧一捧碎玉入诗,便把“千树万树梨花开”的惊艳,化作肩头呢喃。诗为雪魂,雪为诗骨,寒枝绽暖,雪点梅红,冷峻与热烈交织,凝成冬日里最温柔的平仄,读来口齿噙香,余味悠长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">值此新岁将至,衷心祝愿金老师笔耕不辍,佳作频出,新年快乐,万事顺遂!</span></p>