<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">光荣榜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">樊晓翠 潘志强 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">李智清 刘向红 徐春波</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">藏福通 王鹤群 史素贞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">曾小琴 王玉松 邵东明</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">帅建明 荣保严 王玉霞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">杨中革 姚振宇</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">三区副总院长：樊晓翠</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.桃源秋色（上平十一真）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">桃源杨柳径，浥露菊花新。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">忽见云溪色，纤枝不染尘。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.秋望（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">霁野空林静，闲花浥露羞。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">垂云遥顾影，不语任风流！①</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">注：①“不语任风流”，作者感悟自然之美本无需任何华丽的言语，其存在即是风华！</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.10</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">樊院长您好，先点赞后欣赏[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]，两首诗均能以简笔绘秋景，以淡语寄深情，《桃源秋色》胜在清幽空灵，《秋望》妙在景中含理，足见对古典诗词“情景相生”笔法的深刻把握，堪称雅制。</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 分院长 潘志强</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.贺望岳雅集九期开学（上平十三元）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">寒窗温旧典，绛帐启新元。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">雪映书灯暖，薪传古道存。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳学诗寄怀 （下平六麻）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">霜叩书窗静，灯开墨径斜。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">云程初振羽，雪案正生花。</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">副分院长 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.贺望岳九期开学·一</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">（下平八庚）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">诗承文脉旺，雅集聚群英。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">碧海扬帆起，词林策马行。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳学诗寄怀·二 （上平十灰）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳名声远，群贤四海来。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">诗词传古韵，笔墨赋良才。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.7</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">助教:李智清</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.贺望岳开学其一（下平九青）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">熏风何处弄，快语莫辞屏。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">岂料窗前月，窥来一净灵。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.贺望岳开学其二（上平十一真）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">兴至屏前暖，云集朴语真。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">梅花犹听悟，绽放雪中春。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.7</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">助教：刘向红</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.望岳九期开学有感（一）（上平十灰）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳寻高远，黉门四海开。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">扬帆凌细浪，诗韵荡舟来。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳九期开学有感（二）（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">春风垂细柳，望岳引飞鸿。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">昂首裁新韵，凝眸遇醉翁。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.7</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">助教：徐春波</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.望岳九期开学有感（一）（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳临芳甸，遥闻墨菊香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">悠然裁意韵，邂逅晋陶郎。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳九期开学有感（二）（下平十二侵）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">轻舟游望岳，荡橹窃公吟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">决眦凌高处，挥毫醉弄琴。2025.12.7</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">助教 臧福通</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.雪景（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">遥天飘碎玉，万野覆银笺。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">老树悬冰蕊，茅檐落雪绵。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.雪景（下平八庚）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">晓岸凝霜白，长天落雪轻。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">寒林遮远路，旷野尽琼英。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.10</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：王鹤群</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-5</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.学诗谱乐章（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">初冬风凛冷，菊蕊吐清香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">耐苦研诗赋，人生谱乐章。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳学诗感怀（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳诗峰峻，扶藜奋力前。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">贤师相引助，必可至云巅。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.7</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 祝贺王鹤群老师率先完成望岳九期313班第一次作业，恭喜您！[强][强][强][强]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 您完成的两首诗均符合第一次课程内容，合律合韵，意境深远，符合作业要求。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 由我代交作业。[烟花][烟花][烟花][庆祝][庆祝][庆祝]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评老师：刘向红 徐春波</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋蓉</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：史素贞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-40</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.感怀望岳公益诗词群（下平十二侵）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">诗坛承翰墨，贤俊笔文深。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">殷切恩师授，唐风汉赋寻。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.祝望岳群人才倍出</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳寒窗砺，登科夙愿酬。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">挥毫书壮志，泼墨写春秋。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.7</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 祝贺史素贞老师顺利完成望岳九期初级班第一次作业！[强][强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 两首五言绝句韵律正确，意境高远大气，文笔深厚。符合第一次作业要求，由我代收转发作业群。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 恭喜您！[庆祝][庆祝][庆祝][烟花][烟花][烟花][烟花]点评老师：刘向红 徐春波</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋蓉</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：曾小琴</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-6</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.初雪之盟 (下平八庚)</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">天门初试玉，岱岳乍飞琼。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">焙墨诗添暖，围炉意续盟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.耘诗（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">岱宗云幕卷，飞白染浮笺。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">漱玉空山净，耘诗引涧泉。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.9</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">曾小琴诗友，两首五绝格律正确，有曲水流觞之镜。收录到作业群。各位诗友加油。[强][强][强]</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：王玉松</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-1</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.覃思（上平四支）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">风清笼岱岳，露重淡濡丝。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">不惧青灯冷，覃思皓首痴。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.学赋（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">岱岳流云冷，梅花溢暗香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">青衫初学赋，墨砚谱新章。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.9</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">王玉松诗友你好，祝你完成第一次作业，格律正确，立意阔远。己收录作业群，各位诗友加油了[强][强]</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校第九期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邵东明</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-02</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.盼归（上平十五删）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">风吹荷叶摆，雨打野云闲。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">倚柳遥看处，游人几日还。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.写诗 （下平十二侵）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">小雨亲人面， 微风暖鸟音。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">不知相思苦， 捻柳暗沉吟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.10</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">邵老师您好祝贺您完成第一次作业[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]，第一首韵脚统一，格律严谨，全诗情景交融，画面感强。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第二首，以浅语写深情，将写诗时的情思与眼前景交融，含蓄动人。两首诗作合格可以收录作业。</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：帅建明</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-35</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">贺望岳开课（上平二冬）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">诗花开雅韵，众友意深浓。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳贤才聚，登攀跨顶峰。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳启程（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">韵苑开新径，诗途引俊俦。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">毫香添雅趣，素梦寄鸿猷。</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：荣保严</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-37</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.望岳班学习（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">今朝呈雅教，渐悟作诗功。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">海浪烟初起，窗前景自同。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.冬松（上平二冬）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">不惧寒风冽，巍峨映伴峰。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">能迎霜冻雪，挺拔傲苍松。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.12</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">荣老师您好祝贺您完成第一次作业，整体首作表现亮眼，两首均精准贴合指定韵部（上平一东、上平二冬），平仄规整，无出韵、落韵问题，可见初学时对格律的把控已很用心，开篇基础扎实。可以收录作业[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：王玉霞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-34</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.受业（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳倾心授，无涯苦作舟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">孤鸿秋独伴，细雨洒清眸。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.扬鞭（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">扬鞭催蹑影，岱岳墨涵香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">皓魄澄冰鉴，浮云伴鹤翔。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.13</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">两首五言绝句均严守格律、紧扣主题，且分押“下平十一尤”“下平七阳”韵部，韵脚清晰统一，初级班首次作业便有此水准，实属难得。可以收录作业[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：杨中革</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-41</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.诗香（上平六鱼）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">词章寻雅味，岱岳授诗书。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">月下听泉响，心随墨韵渠。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.墨香（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">气势吞云海，诗词洒墨香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">通幽稀径处，岱岳浸胸膛。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.14</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">第九期初级班第一次作业</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：姚振宇</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy9-x313-4</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.初萌（上平十三元）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">晨曦临岱岳，桂魄皎乾坤。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">泣血培桃李，高风满麓园。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.华章（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">夙起勤拈笔，殷殷觅雅篇。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">临窗开卷读，皓月映无眠。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.12.15</span></span></p>