<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月14日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">微雨轻沾燕子楼（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子始知香暗浮（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">砧杵每敲游子心（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕语轻穿柳叶楼 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">信步悠然燕自闲 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渔火犹摇野渡边 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕子初临芳草园 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">策马欲归路已封 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棹影独留湖镜中(笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓雨微洇燕子矶（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问月未期风早临（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁信频传客梦间（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳草初茵黄土坡（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">提笔未成梦袭来（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦境忽回老父前（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕将还柳树庄（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">动脑详思事竟成（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">父辈时萦脑海中（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕语初临杏树园（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子尤思局必赢（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡酒总萦客子心（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月全归竹叶窗 (追梦人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">破局方惊影已空 (追梦人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡梦每萦客舍中 (追梦人)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕已啼柳树林（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子未成鸟已惊（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">慈母频来儿梦中（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨初滋柳叶堤（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泼墨易洇鸟不栖（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笛韵久飞羁旅时（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潮汛初临柳岸堤（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落笔无为韵不成（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心绪永留骨肉身（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓雾初临柳叶堤 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">揽卷方知志未酬 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁影常萦客梦间 (Ang.zq)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏蕾初开柳絮湾（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子勿惊車被擒（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">童叟永怀故土恩（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨初临柳叶湖（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子方知计已成（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影暗移别院前（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晓燕双飞溪水桥（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥墨自成茶正温（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜色频添云鬓中（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕双行杨柳村 (不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谋局才知帅已筹 (不亦le乎）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗韵频牵故土情 (不亦le乎）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚月才临芦苇塘（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">提笔欲书墨已干（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁影远离故土时（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远客初观正定墙（胡萝卜）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未雨绸缪事已休（胡萝卜）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思绪时留草舍边（胡萝卜）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚笛遥传燕子矶 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥笔欲题诗未成 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡梦频萦故梓间 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野水长流白石桥 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沽酒未成茶不妨 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花影久遮客舍门 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">社燕初归草舍门（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">依着细思局可赢（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡语频浮客梦中（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">细雨初沾柳叶眉（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">端酒未尝蝶已来（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游子沉思客邸中（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春风半入桃花巷（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕子已归茅屋檐 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棋难定花先占（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">思路未明局已输 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光长落家山处（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春梦总生客路时 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">简 评：</p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：春风半入桃花巷</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 春日和煦的春风，轻柔地、半遮半掩地渗入种满（开满）桃花的小巷。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“半入”是点睛之笔——既写出春风的灵动轻柔，似有似无、若即若离，不似狂风漫灌；又暗衬桃花巷的幽深雅致，春风需缓缓穿行，留足余韵，还让巷中桃花香与春风相融，虚实相生，勾勒出清幽又缱绻的春日景致。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们深谙出句意旨，节令相合、辞工意美的佳对比比皆是，请师友们雅赏。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 棋手手持棋子犹豫不决、难以落子之际，庭中或窗外的花枝已然抢先映入眼帘（或占据视野），勾勒出“棋思凝滞”与“花景灵动”相映的画面。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句核心妙在“花先占”：既指花朵主动“抢占”视线，打破棋局的沉静；又暗合“举棋难定”的迟疑——人尚在权衡，花已随性绽放，以自然的鲜活反衬人的纠结，添了几分雅趣与禅意。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们有很多以平行意象入对，辞工意美。</p><p class="ql-block"> 但下面的对句以流水对方式赋对，穷尽了多种棋局后续的可能，饶有情趣：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">举棋难定花先占</span></p><p class="ql-block">落子始知香暗浮</p><p class="ql-block">落子尤思局必赢</p><p class="ql-block">破局方惊影已空 </p><p class="ql-block">落子未成鸟已惊</p><p class="ql-block">落子勿惊车被擒</p><p class="ql-block">落子方知计已成</p><p class="ql-block">依着细思局可赢</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：月光长落家山处</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 家山：谓故乡。唐钱起 《送李栖桐道举擢第还乡省侍》：“莲舟同宿浦，柳岸向家山。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 联意为：皎洁的月光始终长久地映照在故乡的土地上。</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> “长落”是核心：既指月光常年不辍、恒常照耀家山，暗喻故乡是永恒的精神归宿；又暗含“月光如念”——无论游子身在何方，故乡的月光始终萦绕心头，从未远离。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> 出句既勾勒出月光遍洒故土的静谧夜景，更藏着对家乡的深切牵挂与绵长思念。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们对句意象契合、情感相通的佳句多多，敬请雅赏。</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 燕燕于飞 笑对人生 荷花 老丁 雨燕 淡定 追梦人 弦思 文心 闲云 ANG.ZQ 刘义 若水 梧桐 不亦le乎 大海 胡萝卜 美西洋 震撼哥 云朵 元其 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片根据出句意境，由AI创作</p>