瑞雪映梅开 联韵醉心怀——11月12日对联学习活动纪实

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<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪落疏枝凝雅韵,联吟妙句聚知音。11月12日,清寒的初冬裹挟着淡淡的墨香,一场以邬海威老师上联“瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳”为契机的对联学习活动,在诗词爱好者的期盼中悄然启幕。平仄交替间藏着千年文脉,笔墨流转里盛着赤诚热爱,学员们在格律的浸润与灵感的碰撞中深耕细悟,让这个略显清冽的时节,因一纸书香、半阙清联更添温润情愫。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">诗词小课堂:解锁对联创作的细腻密码</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">活动伊始,一场干货满溢的诗词分享,如清泉般淌入心间,为学员们的创作之旅筑牢根基。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">平仄格律:于交替中寻声律之美</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对联的韵律之妙,藏在平仄的微妙平衡里。“失替”是同一联中相邻字平仄失序(七言联尤重二、四、六字的交替),“失对”则是上下联对应位置平仄相悖,这两处都是创作中需避开的“小遗憾”。初学者牢记“二四六分明”与“上下相对”的核心,便能让联句读来抑扬顿挫,如琴弦轻拨,自有清越之音。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">意境营造:远离“隔景”求共鸣,于契合中传情愫之真</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好联不止于格律工整,更需意境相融、情愫相通。“隔景”恰似创作中的“小隔阂”——上下联景物、时空或心绪相悖,如“听雨生厌”对“赏月痴迷”,便少了那份自然流转的默契。真正动人的创作,当如“窗外雨声听又厌,眉间心事攒犹多”,下联循着上联的情愫绵延,让景与情互为映衬,读来便有了直击人心的共鸣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">进阶思考:“隔景”与“转景”的辩证之美</b></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">传统对仗重时空统一,但高妙创作亦可突破束缚。“隔景”若能以情感为纽带,便能形成独特张力;“转景”则需遵循情感逻辑,如电影蒙太奇般让意象碰撞升华。李白“明月出天山,长风几万里”、王维“大漠孤烟直,长河落日圆”,皆是跨越时空却气韵贯通的典范,为现代对联创作提供了多元思路。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">学员佳作展:笔墨生香,为梅雪添韵</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深谙创作技巧后,学员们以笔为媒、以情为墨,围绕“瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳”各展才情,一幅幅佳作应运而生,或循格律之严谨,或蕴意境之幽远,尽显文字与心意的碰撞之美:</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">3170分院</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风猎猎志尤坚(李根深)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:严霜肃杀竹犹坚(王维峰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:红尘零落品犹清(李建生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风萧杀月犹明(李建生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风刺骨树孤残(林长国)纷飞/刺骨不搭</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风不断树孤残(林长国)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">3171分院:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:冰山腊舞鹊高欢;(张鹏飞)[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:严霜肃杀竹犹坚(王维峰)[玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:幽香暗透影尤清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 纤尘不染蕊盈香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 严寒凝练节弥高。(青涟)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:孤舟静泊月尤清。(冬冬)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅俞艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:孤窗晚映岁将浓。(陈艺夫)[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:春风乱入绿相逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 隆冬已至酒方浓(谭絮芸)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:霜风凛冽柏益青。[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 冰霜凛冽松更苍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 春风漫染草添新(李梅娟)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:琼筵交错岁弥新。[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 佳人舒卷墨含(弥)香。(王小翡)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:严寒凝练节弥高。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 严霜怒放墨添香。(唐幼君)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:岁寒暗透气微香。(王慕之)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联: 寒枝飘舞雅盈秋 。(张雪林)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:红炉沸煮酒尤醇。(王小翡)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:红炉沸煮茗尤香。(王小翡)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联: 寒霜覆盖柏枝低 (李玉)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">3172分院</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:红泥慢煮酒微醺。(王菁梅)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:欢声错落境逾幽。(刘春红)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:花香散落景逾幽。(李发喆)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒松傲立鹊犹喧。(李青)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风呼啸柏仍青。(于美娟)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:甘霖普润柳添娇。(刘小明)🌹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:柴门紧锁酒微酣。(李庚)🌹</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">3173分院</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:清风拂晓柳初发。(高治东)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联: 瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:祥云漫舞竹尤青。(任淑敏)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联: 瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:丰年喜庆民欢颜。(于华)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联: 瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风漫卷柏还青。(仲崇晶)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联: 瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:祥云缭绕竹尤清。(李传民)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联: 瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联: 和风又拂柳初青。(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳; (邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联: 春风漫卷柳方新。(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒霜骤降柿更红。(罗钰)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风刺骨雨初停(陈传大)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:孤烟伴宿夜偏寒。(彰龙)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">每一副下联都紧扣上联意境,或写寒枝玉色、或颂松柏坚贞、或抒岁华新意,在平仄对仗间流转着文字之美,在情景交融中传递着心中情怀。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">3174分院</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风渐去柳将青。(乔学权)[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:严霜肃杀竹犹坚。(王维峰)[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:寒风呼啸柏犹坚。(闫军)[玫瑰]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 下联: 灯笼点亮节方浓。(黎曙)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:红炉蒸热酒添香。(吴永飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:丰年喧兆喜尤多。(李哲)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联:瑞雪纷飞梅愈艳;(邬海威)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">下联:耸山挺立柏常青。(云峰)[玫瑰]</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">李传民老师点评:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">上联节奏:仄仄/平平平/仄仄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">断句划分:瑞雪/纷飞/梅/愈艳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词性:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞雪:形容词十名词</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">纷飞:形容词十动词</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梅:名词</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">愈艳:副词十形容词(动词性偏正短语)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">联意:因为有了瑞雪的映衬,梅花才显得更加艳丽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;">致谢暖心团队:以温柔护航文化之约</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一场圆满的文化相聚,离不开背后默默付出的团队。他们以细腻的统筹、无私的奉献,为这场对联之约保驾护航,让每一次学习都顺畅高效,每一份收获都真切温暖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171分院长:何青涟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171副分院长:陈冬冬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 总院教督兼分院特教官:刘宗辉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171执行院长:马桂武</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171班长:王慕之</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171学习委员:王小翡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171教官:王爱晨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">​</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">- 3171美篇编辑:李梅娟</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪映红梅添雅韵,联传情谊聚知音。本次对联学习活动在格律探讨与创作实践中落下帷幕,学员们既精进了技艺,又收获了同频共振的朋友;愿这份对传统文化的热爱,如梅香般绵长不绝。</span></p>