<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">11月7日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪水弯环自奏琴（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨淋蕙畹落如霞（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今岁柳姿堪数幽（刘义）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">修竹绕庐漫漱词 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雁穿云水渺如烟 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昔日恩情幽入怀 (燕燕于飞)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄叶翻飞渐觉凉（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">波粼夕照闪如金（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何处柳颦堪系君（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白鹿隐岩更显幽（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜铺野岸结成毡（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">终日酒蒙空念人（老丁）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青桂绽开自发香（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜侵枫岭艳如霞（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">半世风侵早是秋（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岸柳疏条逐反青 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨浇荷伞滴如珠 (胡萝卜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">他日梅青理论新 (胡萝卜)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄菊依篱自溢香 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜侵枫岭醉如霞 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此岁梅开徒忆君 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云岭落霞屡泛红（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日巡枫岭艳如霞（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今岁梅开胜似初（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏影越墙半点红 (追梦人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾临荻港幻如烟 (追梦人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与日燕呢仍是他 (追梦人)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏竹摇窗暗送香（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月浮江渚静如霜（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一枕春痕渐化尘（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹柿挂枝深映红 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云收柳陌荡如波 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">到处莺歌宛若朋 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕啁啾喜报春 (风徐徐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">客骑骏马啸穿云 (风徐徐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故 （问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往日山盟尽是空 (风徐徐)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲径安恬静养幽（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云浮柳渡荡如烟（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度莺啼渐觉疏（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">银杏蔽窗自覆荫（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪滔烟渚散如云（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今夕月圆方显温（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枫叶飘山渐染红（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日出菊岭灿如霞（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今日春归仍是新（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月照河总荡辉（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浪翻山涧挂似帘（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">隔月竹鸣总有情（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄叶入江乱涌金 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云迷桂岭乱如烟 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故 (问天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">终夜弦歌多有因 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠 (问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清露沾衣微带凉 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪 (问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潮推石岸碎如银 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故 (问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度梅开却换新 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红杏依墙暗送香（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨侵松岭响如涛（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度梦回徒惹愁（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌凭添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瘦菊依篱高展金（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞盈水渚美如绢（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">此日月随方有缘（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧水绕山频送音（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋临枫岭艳如霞（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往日情柔难再寻（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹桂拂风默送香 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云开枫岭灿如霞 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几度莺啼又焕新 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">苍苔铺砌平添翠（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红药偎篱悄送香（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风卷芦汀飞若雪（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日斜稻垄灿如金（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逐年桃笑已非故（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">怀旧燕来却似前（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：苍苔铺砌平添翠</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 苍苔：青色苔藓。清孙枝蔚《醉题田家翁壁上》： “醉墨淋灕留在壁，莫教风雨生苍苔。”</p><p class="ql-block"> 铺砌：动宾式短语，砌：石阶，铺满石阶。</p><p class="ql-block"> 平添：平白增添。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 青苔铺满石阶，自然而然增添了一抹鲜翠生机的景致。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句捕捉“自然成景”的意趣：苍苔不刻意雕琢，悄然覆于砌石之上，以自身的清翠为原本朴素的石阶添色，既显清幽雅致，又藏着生机盎然的细节，读来满是恬淡闲适的韵味。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们辞工意美，生发补充自然生动的对句举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">苍苔铺砌平添翠</span></p><p class="ql-block">黄菊依篱自溢香 </p><p class="ql-block">云岭落霞屡泛红</p><p class="ql-block">丹柿挂枝深映红 </p><p class="ql-block">红杏依墙暗送香</p><p class="ql-block">瘦菊依篱高展金</p><p class="ql-block">碧水绕山频送音</p><p class="ql-block">红药偎篱悄送香 </p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：风卷芦汀飞若雪</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：秋景联</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;"> “芦汀”：偏正式的词语，汀：</span>引申为水边平地， 小洲。<span style="font-size:18px;">芦汀：芦苇丛生的水边平地、小洲。</span></p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 秋风席卷长满芦苇的水边平地，芦花纷飞的模样恰似白雪漫天。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句以白描手法勾勒秋景，“风卷”点出动态，“芦汀”明确场景，“飞若雪”用比喻将芦花洁白、飘散的形态写得直观灵动，画面感极强。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们大都抓住秋景这个意象生发补充，比喻修辞运用恰当的对句多多，请师友们雅赏。</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：逐年桃笑已非故</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：感怀联</p><p class="ql-block"> 桃笑：不是一个固定的合成词，但分明能从唐崔护《题都城南庄》“人面不知何处去，桃花依旧笑春风”感知含义 。“桃笑”就是“桃花依旧笑春风”的意思 </p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 年年绽放的桃花依旧含笑春风，但眼前的人事、光景早已不是旧时模样。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句“桃笑”以拟人写桃花年年盛开的鲜活，与“已非故”的人事变迁形成强烈对比，简笔勾勒出对往昔的追忆与岁月更迭的感慨。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们深谙出句意旨，生发自然，感怀恰切的对句有很多，请师友们雅赏。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：刘义 燕燕于飞 老丁 雨燕 胡萝卜 ANG.ZQ <span style="font-size:18px;">若水 追梦人 荷花 震撼哥 风徐徐 文心 闲云 淡定 大海 笑对人生 美西洋 </span>琢玉 .梧桐 弦思 笛里关山 云朵 </p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片由AI创作</p>