<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">立冬的夜</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">坐在窗前</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">听雨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">从檐下滴落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">雨织着</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一张青灰的网</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我抱紧双膝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">把雨声埋进怀里</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">冷冷的桂香</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">染着我的面颊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我闭上双眼</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">听菊花沉默</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">树叶飘落的声音</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜的黑</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是一帖安静剂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">而立冬 霏霏细雨</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">让我看见了</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">季节的心情</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诚谢玉渊潭老师雅赏长评</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">这首立冬夜雨诗以细腻的意象描绘了冬夜的静谧与季节更替的思绪，通过雨声、桂香、落叶等元素传递出淡淡的孤寂与对自然的感悟。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">意象解析：</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">雨织青灰的网：将冬雨比作编织的网，形象地刻画出雨丝的绵密和夜的笼罩感，暗示思绪被季节牵引。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">冷冷的桂香：以嗅觉通感触觉，突出冬夜清冷中残留的秋意，强化时光流逝的怅然。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">菊花沉默/树叶飘落：通过植物凋零的静默声响，表现生命在冬季的蛰伏与内敛。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">情感表达：</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">"抱紧双膝""埋进怀里"等动作传递出孤独感，而"夜的黑是安静剂"又展现对静谧的接纳。结尾"看见季节的心情"升华主题，将个人体验与自然律动融为一体。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">精品，经典！</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> 谢谢阅读