<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《我真想去看一场秋天》 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我真想去看一场秋天, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不是隔着窗,不是翻着照片, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而是让风卷着落叶扑进怀里, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">让阳光像蜜一样涂满山峦。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">带上我的爱人, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">带上那台老相机, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">它记得春天的樱花, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">也该记住秋天如何燃烧自己。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们走过秦关的城墙, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">看砖缝里藏着多少征人的叹息; </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们爬上蜀山的石阶, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">让云雾把心事都洗成透明。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">稻田在远处翻滚金浪, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">银杏把小路铺成诗行, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如果累了,就坐在溪边, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">听流水把夏天没说完的话, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一句句,讲给石头听。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到暮色把山影拉长, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到相机装不下更多的光, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们才踩着沙沙的声响回家—— </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣兜里还兜着两片红叶, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一片写着相遇,一片写着时光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我真想去看一场秋天, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不是在北方,不是踏着霜降, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而是让细雨裹着桂香沾湿衣角, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">让晚霞把水乡染成橘色的绸缎。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">带上我的旧诗集, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">带上那把油纸伞, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">它撑过梅雨季的惆怅, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">也该见证秋光如何晕开墨香。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们摇过江南的乌篷船, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">看桥洞吞下多少盏渔火的暖; </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们数过岭南的荔枝林, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">让蝉鸣把余温酿成甜软的私藏。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芦花在岸边扬起絮语, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老茶寮的陶壶咕咚着故事, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若起风了,就躲进巷尾, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">等青石板把晒不干的往事, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一寸寸,焐成糯米酒的温度。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到月亮浮上马头墙, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到竹篮盛满湿漉漉的星子, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们才沿着萤火虫的记号折返—— </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">手心还攥着半粒沙田柚, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一瓣叫乡愁,一瓣叫南方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">……</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我真想去看一场秋天, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不是选边站,不是分冷暖, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而是让大地的脉络在脚下舒展—— </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北方白桦林抖落金箔时, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南方的稻穗正弯腰拾起夕阳的碎银。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">带上地质锤与宣纸, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">敲击玄武岩的苍劲,拓印水墨的氤氲, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">当雁阵在黄河拐弯处写下破折号, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠江的倒影已把天空对折成信笺。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们站在秦岭的脊线上, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">左手接住飘来的敕勒歌, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">右手截住顺流而下的采莲谣, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而风,这最公正的邮差, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">把塞外胡杨与岭南榕须, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">编成同一本季节的活页集。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如果非要说出最爱, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">就把枫红与橙黄调进陶坯, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">窑变出九百六十万平方公里的釉色—— </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那些在晨霜里结晶的, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">终将在夜露中返潮, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">而所有未完成的秋日, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">都值得被地平线对折收藏。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到经纬线在鞋底缠成茧, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">直到相机与诗稿都患上色盲症, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">我们才在二十四节气的交汇处停步—— </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣襟别着松果与菱角, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枚叫眷恋,一枚叫流浪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 诗的创作过程,从微信群里看到一组旅行的风景图片,拍摄的场景是西北部山上金黄色的秋叶,这就使我看到了这个季节北方的美,于是有了诗的主题《我真想去看一场秋天》,因为大家都处在这个季节。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 然后,南方的秋天由于场景的不同,所反应出的韵味与北方是不一样的,又刚好多年的文友夫妇俩人昨晚刚刚从北方来南方踏上我家乡这块土地,他们所向往及看到的南方印象也肯定会超出自己的想象,我便在脑海有了创作第二段落的兴趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 最后一段,也是第三段,我是用了电影蒙太奇的手法,把南方与北方的场景片段融合了一下,写完第三段,自己觉得诗还好完美,其实写诗也好,作画也罢,它们都有规律所循。作画是具象手法,至于没骨与工笔都是它的手法。而写诗,是具情具意的创作,情意连结的过程,诗与画只是表现的手法不同,它们所表达的是一种意思,有人便说书画同源大概就是这个意思。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 在此分享一下创作过程,说的不对,还望多多包涵!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>无锡的秋天</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 时隔多年,终于见到了睿圃老师,我们好是开心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 本想第一站游玩鼋头渚风景区,不巧遇上举行内太湖马拉松跑步,只能将车停在蠡园门囗,延着内大湖步行至鼋头渚景区大门。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 鹿顶山舒天阁背景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">从草地走向樱花谷</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">背景赏樱楼</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">进阑苑赏花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过竹林径直来到包孕吴越处</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">远眺太湖三山风景</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过横云山庄石拱桥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">七桅罛船(渔船)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">长春桥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">藕塘</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">诵芬堂清芬屿</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">开车来到清名桥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">南下塘用餐后看古运河夜景</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">第二天,在惠山古镇游览。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">参观朱炳仁•铜 艺术品展览</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">走入秀嶂街(直街)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">范文正(范仲淹)公祠</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过古华山门走到直、横街交会处,就能看到江南第一山大门,这是进惠山寺、寄畅园和天下第二泉的大门</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">游寄畅园</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">锦汇漪与七星桥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">鱼翔浅底</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过七星桥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">锦汇漪摄影最佳处,景外有景,把锡山与龙光塔收入园内。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过八音澗</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过二泉书院</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">甘棠遗爱</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过惠山寺古银杏(已种植650年)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">到达惠山天下第二泉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">观皇帝宸瀚御筆碑文</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">走山径</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">过登山口</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">从胡园下,去映山湖环游,那里有泰伯殿、杜鹃園、阿炳墓、登山索道、锡山九龙壁、龙光塔等景点</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">古运河惠山浜,我们来了</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">惠山古镇清末实业家杨宗瀚(字藕芳)的宗祠</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚清淮军将领李鹤章(李鸿章之弟)而建的祠堂(内有后花园)面积较大</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">走出“一尺花园”李公祠后花院,我们又要跟惠山浜说再见了!</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">下午,游崇安寺</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">参观阿炳故居</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;"></span></p>