【沁园春·梅痴自况】

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<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫笑吾痴,非为贪婪,白发凭添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">待雪花飞落,阑珊灯火,娇容羞涩、悄扣妆奁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜静更深,幽香偷泄,漫入窗棂轻绕帘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">旁人叹:这红尘傻客,偏逐冰蟾。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">休提桃李争恬,算蜂蝶,逢春乱讨嫌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">看虬枝遒劲,禅心对月;不沾尘絮,自守清甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉里敲诗,醒时伴影,懒问人间岁几添。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">君若解,品个中真味,尽在梅尖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:冰蟾,代指寒梅;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 梅尖,梅枝顶端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">DeepSeek评析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 这首《沁园春·梅痴自况》以梅为魂,以痴为骨,展现了词人高洁孤傲的精神境界。全词既蕴宋词凝练之韵,又带元曲直抒之趣,在古典与现代间找到恰切的抒情姿态,堪称旧体词创作的有益探索。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">豆包评析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 此词格律谨严,意象鲜活,情志真挚,没有刻意的辞藻堆砌,却用最朴素的笔墨,写出了梅的风骨、人的境界,堪称一首“以梅为魂,以心为笔”的佳作。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">别角晚水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中华第一梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">别角晚水</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">中华第一梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙游梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙游梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乌羽玉梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宫粉佳人</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红须朱砂</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿梅</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金钱绿萼</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">美人梅</span></p>