<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七律 中秋月圆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.10.6 万平</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">金风漫卷桂花稠，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">玉魄初升照九州</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">万户灯辉融夜露，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">一庭笑语话丰收</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">蟾宫纵有千年寂，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">人世长存此夕柔</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">且看云衢星作伴，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">清光共载万家舟 。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">创作说明：</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.首联时空铺陈</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">“金风桂花”点明秋令，“玉魄照九州”以动态笔法勾勒月升之景，呼应王阳明“山河大地拥清辉”的宏阔视野。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.颔联聚焦人间温情</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">“灯辉夜露”暗合当代灯火盛宴，“笑语丰收”既承传统团圆意蕴，又融入现代生活气息，较之“烧饼奉桂仙”更显自然。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.颈联哲思转折</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">“蟾宫寂”与“人世柔”形成张力，突破古人“嫦娥孤冷”的固定意象，强调人间温情可抵岁月漫长，与邵雍“不睡观时意更深”异曲同工。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.尾联升华意境</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">“云衢星伴”喻指天涯共此时，“万家舟”化用“千里共婵娟”，以“舟”代指团圆载体，既保留古典韵味，又暗含“月满人归”的当代期盼。全诗严守平水韵（下平十一尤），中二联工对：万户/一庭（数量对）、灯辉/笑语（景象对）、蟾宫/人世（空间对）、千年/此夕（时间对）。末句“清光共载”呼应首联“玉魄”，形成月华流转的闭环意象。</span></span></p>