《国庆》《秋分》华夏微型诗社周周发同题第561期

巴山一松

<p class="ql-block">@所有人</p><p class="ql-block">华夏微型诗社第561期周周发同题创作开始了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 欢迎诗友们参与微型诗写作!请早日构思打磨!</p><p class="ql-block">备注:</p><p class="ql-block">1、投稿、收稿时间:</p><p class="ql-block">9月30日晚上7点——10点。</p><p class="ql-block">2、每人选投一首微型诗。</p><p class="ql-block">3、请单独发帖,不要自行接龙,由巴山一松老师统一收稿。</p><p class="ql-block">4、稿件选编到美篇,并由诗社老师择优予以点评。</p><p class="ql-block">5、本期题目:</p><p class="ql-block">①《秋分》 </p><p class="ql-block">②《国庆》</p><p class="ql-block">6.出题老师:岐麟散人</p><p class="ql-block">7、交流时可交流两首,投稿时只选投一首,收稿只收一首,点评也只点评一首。</p><p class="ql-block">8.优秀作品推荐“微诗坊”。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[选评作品]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1. 秋分</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雨洒第一季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日月压着扁担,两头一样沉重</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">父亲捻熟四季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">换一下肩,又挑起霜花雪月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 诗人借助秋分,写出对父亲的赞美。父爱如山,为子女双肩挑起责任与担当,满满的正能量,满满的担当,让我们为父亲赞一声,“您辛苦了”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2. 国庆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/行天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">国歌灿亮血液的时候</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亿万中国结红成同心圆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为共和国庆生</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人浅评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 国庆应是普天同庆的欢喜之日,让我们共同举杯,共同欢呼“祖国万岁”,诗作借“国歌、中国红、同心圆、庆生”等词语,写出亿万儿女的心声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3. 秋分</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/森林雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不偏也不倚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拨正昼夜刻度</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你是天地间,最公正的法官</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 抓住秋分的特点,从时间上构思,尾句“最公正的法官”引伸得不错。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4. 国庆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/喜阳柳保宅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">擎着先烈血染的旗帜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我们欢呼着</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">祝您生日快乐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 祖国,母亲,76华诞。作者直抒胸臆,表达中华儿女最真的祝福。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[选评作品]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">5. 秋分</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">桂香刚漫过门槛 月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">就把影子劈成两半</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一半归蝉 一半属雁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 由“桂香”点明季节。虚实结合中,有景,有物,有情,有人。写出了不一样的“秋分”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">6. 国庆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/赵正霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">纵有 千般爱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">莫如 一抹中国红</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">刻在心里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 对比中显诗意。“中国红”耀眼的红,让国人醒目、提神,自豪感满满。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">7. 秋分</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昼夜在天平两端凝滞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">落叶在风中签署离别协议</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">蟋蟀将余音,沁入月的豁口</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 属于个人独有的创作,尤以后两句让人思索、琢磨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">8. 国庆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/书虫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一晃,母亲七十六岁华诞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">拉一把海峡迷途的孩子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">复兴梦,就圆了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 微诗立意深刻。国庆日想到了宝岛台湾,是呀,复兴梦,咋能少了台湾。国人期盼,台湾早点回到祖国的怀抱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">9. 秋分</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/东方虹雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">风调七色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">一笔丰收的五彩 晒满小院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">剩下的余墨 染红西山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 秋分好像是分界线,一边是丰富多彩的秋收景象,一边天气渐渐变凉,草开始枯,花凋谢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">唯有“西山”的景色,让人留恋、惬意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">10. 国庆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">阳光修复天空筛子眼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">心转晴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">处处中国红,惬意了中秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">昨夜星简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);"> 天转晴,人也心情好起来。街道悬挂中国红,国庆后,又将迎来中秋节,这样的喜庆节日,人人笑逐颜开,皆大欢喜,乐融融的气氛将会洋溢在祖国的大江南北。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">【参与作品展示】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">秋分</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/雨洒第一季</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">日月压着扁担,两头一样沉重</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">父亲捻熟四季</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">换一下肩,又挑起霜花雪月</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国 庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"> 文/行天 </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国歌灿亮血液的时候</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">亿万中国结红成同心圆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">为共和国庆生</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">秋分</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/丹霞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">随着你的到来</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">昼和夜切割成半</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">凉风吹上心头</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/阳光</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">中国红</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">醉倒十月</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">幸福着你我他</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/喜阳柳保宅</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">擎着先烈血染的旗帜</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">我们欢呼着</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">祝您生日快乐</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/米书</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">红旗招展灯笼挂</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">繁荣富强 幸福安宁 </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">霞光万道映华夏</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/岐麟散人</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">血脉里奔腾的潮汐</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">每一声‘母亲’</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">都溅起一朵血色的涟漪</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">秋分</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/古道白杨</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">叶老荷残 月色弥漫起清凉 </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">逼催流浪雁</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">回乡取暖</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">国庆</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">文/赵正霞</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(1, 1, 1); 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