<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">打破传统写法，看谁最有创意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9月第2期作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.主题：不限（推荐：初秋）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.体裁：绝句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.写作要求：前三句铺排，第四句转合。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">苏雪琴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋桂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">惊目香萦丹桂飘，露凝金粟雨犹瞧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满阶音韵枝头坠，笑对西风任尔嘲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">孙宝玲 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西风吹叶送轻凉，云淡秋高大雁忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只见青天书一字，心随影度向潇湘。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">牛英茹</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭外枝零乱，雨滴频叩窗。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">远山枫叶舞，秋日淬斜阳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱信言</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">年华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一年一度历春秋，几许耕耘几许酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荒野山川多狗尾，成熟谷穗总低头。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋怀寄远</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">两鬓霜花已入秋，闲裁诗韵上西楼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮名常扰书难尽，却借风涛寄远舟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">梁文辉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">回乡偶得</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照楼台半掩门，谷香入户犬犹亲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明朝又是秋收季，但恐劬劳负老人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘文轩</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">垂钓</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">中秋趁假休闲日，邀友三人渭水滩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">单手甩竿双目钓，东山明月送我还。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">左红艳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">垄上菽熟已泛黄，园中榴绽正飘香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">菊开更待桂花馥，心念离人满目伤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">何顺永</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">百卉翻风褪艳妆，蝉声断续绕篱墙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">疏星闪烁天微冷，一夜清霜染菊黄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赵华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝉声暗退夜初长，梧叶偷青未染霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶有凉风梳旧巷，一庭秋色半篱黄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李群</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋遇雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">连天澍雨秋来早，落叶飘摇委地殇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑟瑟蝉鸣悲谢幕，却逢菊蕊正馨香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">商怀祯</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">墨菊 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亭亭玉立朔风中，昔日芳香依旧浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">为念蝶郎初病故，罗衣不缀紫橙红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">王寿礼</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋叶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金蝶辞树不须愁，漫卷西风作远游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">非是春红争艳丽，愿随陶令种新秋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">毛应林</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青萍之末酝秋风，拂遍果园熟味萌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吮露蟠桃如醉酒，几分翠色透绯红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">南素华</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋渭河泄洪感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">无端霖雨黑云暗，恣意黄龙鹜隐踪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坝落平湖席卷苇，金汤堤坝挽浑洪！</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">吴惠琴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">省级文明村桂花街即景 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金粟裁云映月台，秋风不语沁香怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">繁星万点凝银露，疑是仙姝散玉来。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李爱琴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绵绵细雨柳梧黄，灿灿金星飘洒芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遥望南山红枫美，俯观小麦嫩芽祥。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">张陕乐</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">堤黄缀露柳丝柔，陇云托桂暗香浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举杯欲问初秋月，桑麻新语入金瓯。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫步渭桥东，气清心自明。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">红尘多少事，放下亦身轻。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">李秦豫</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">接毛应林诗句:《几分翠色透绯红》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">几分翠色透绯红，秋韵飘香润客容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摄影挥毫摘雅趣，书成美景刻心中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">王彦飞</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋澜寄怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">连雨挟风透骨寒，渭湄极目涌惊湍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">千愁万绪随波去，片棹轻飏过重关。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">韩公元</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">兴平初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋虎挣扎假作狂，难熬闷热转清凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒蝉蟋蟀欣合奏，槐里即将换盛装。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">张生效</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋问</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">连阴人尽怨，霖雨更添愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">怅问无天日，农家秋怎熟！</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋日游坝上草原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金风漫卷草初黄，摇曳桦林织锦长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万马奔腾神采奕，无边美景醉心房。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">景漫</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">初秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹院新凉透葛衣，池边柳影渐疏稀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">篱边数朵菊初绽，恰是蝉声向尽时。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛建设</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">金榜题名</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">爆竹声声村口炸，红联对对耀华堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亲朋祝贺翁婆喜，鲤跃龙门出栋梁。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">焦德斌</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋风瑟瑟送凄凉，落叶纷纷满径黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雁哀鸣声渐远，回头户户喜收粮。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">组稿审核:李群</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">整理制作:王彦飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">终审：梁文辉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">图片来自网络</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">咸阳市老年书画诗词学会诗词部</span></p><p class="ql-block">2025. 9. 26</p>