<p class="ql-block">@所有人</p><p class="ql-block">华夏微型诗社第559期周周发同题创作开始了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 欢迎诗友们参与微型诗写作！请早日构思打磨！</p><p class="ql-block">备注：</p><p class="ql-block">1、投稿、收稿时间：</p><p class="ql-block">9月16日晚上7点——10点。</p><p class="ql-block">2、每人选投一首微型诗。</p><p class="ql-block">3、请单独发帖，不要自行接龙，由巴山一松老师统一收稿。</p><p class="ql-block">4、稿件选编到美篇，并由诗社老师择优予以点评。</p><p class="ql-block">5、本期题目：</p><p class="ql-block">①《故乡秋夜》 </p><p class="ql-block">②《寄友》</p><p class="ql-block">6.出题老师：昨夜星</p><p class="ql-block">7、交流时可交流两首，投稿时只选投一首，收稿只收一首，点评也只点评一首。</p><p class="ql-block">8.优秀作品推荐“微诗坊”。</p> <p class="ql-block">【选评作品】</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光在瓦垄间荡漾</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风把夜的星河连同果香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悄悄推到我梦里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人浅评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 全诗聚焦感官体验，月光的视觉、果香的嗅觉交织，诗人用极简笔触勾勒出故乡秋夜的温柔与美，满含对故乡的热爱，末句写出诗人缱绻的乡愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 2 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/善自珍重</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余温压弯夕阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">栖在肩上的月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丈量，你我之间的经纬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人浅读:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 首句将黄昏暖意具象化，很有创意。月光“栖在肩上”又“丈量经纬”，把具象的月光与抽象的距离结合，在秋夜的静谧中，道尽对故乡或故人的遥远思念，寓情于景，情景交融。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今宵 月光没有独白</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老院 残存的温情</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">足以 融化心头积霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 起笔“月光没有独白”别有风味，引发阅读兴趣；“老院”进一步勾起好奇，“残存的温情”呼应前文；尾句提升，给人温情。作品起笔不凡，铺垫到位，提升有力，让故乡的秋夜充满温情暖意，思乡之情跃然纸上。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4 寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/苇强</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨夜，不知那一轮明月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藏在哪里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我默默在窗前张望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 雨夜，烘托出念“友”的氛围，无论亲情还是友情更显珍贵。尾句“默默在窗前张望”有“心事能与谁诉”的怅然与苦闷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寂静 已成为模式</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">只有路灯睁着眼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">数着星光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 这首作品充满了对故乡的牵挂和无助。起笔表达新颖，“寂静”是现状，“模式”已成 常态，“路灯”数着“星光”具象且有冲击力。而“星光”的双关妙用，谁人识得其中滋味？</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【选评作品】</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/森林雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟鸣酣睡，月光如洗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一寸又一寸的乡愁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">于静谧中滋生，蔓延开来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 故乡秋夜，最易联想到乡愁，举头望明月，低头思故乡。本诗也不例外。这乡愁是叠加的，“一寸又一寸”，这乡愁是扩散的，“蔓延开来”。全诗动静描写相结合，动态感十足。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">7 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/书虫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">虫声在月光中沉浮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老屋搁浅，芒花等白了头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风将几粒清泪，种进一片海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 这首诗的表达较为含蓄，将情感寓于景物之中，尾句让这首诗脱颖而出，“老屋搁浅”与“一片海”协调又呼应，露珠喻清泪，出新。这故乡秋夜安静，即使有虫声起伏，月色下到处白茫茫，犹如“一片海”。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">8 寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">酒烫了一遍又一遍 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光斟满杯沿 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你窗前是晴空还是雨天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 作者饱满的情感，抒写对友人的亲切关怀与思念。杯中酒，有月色杯沿漾着，心中之感情活动，在月光之下尽显。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 尾句的提升含蓄，自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枕着弯弯月光 想起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老屋的炊烟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抓一把 总是带些白露那霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗借物写景，写人，写情。对故乡亲人的思念，是通过景物融情去完成的。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">10 故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月，再不因空巢而孤独</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有太阳能灯为伍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">替远方打工人，将家共同守护</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 作者由明月展开构思。微诗关注“空巢”问题，显然立意要深一些。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">[本期参与老师作品]</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/善自珍重</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余温压弯夕阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">栖在肩上的月光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丈量，你我之间的经纬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/赵正霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风寒 月亦寒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摘一枚枫红 系雁羽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赠君 一笺秋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/丹霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老家的月亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挂在天上</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奶奶和孙儿院中乘凉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/陈果果</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光洒银 桂花飘香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">奶奶的蒲扇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摇碎了满院清霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">酒烫了一遍又一遍 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光斟满杯沿 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你窗前是晴空还是雨天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/米书</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一轮圆月适时述说</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天人共情的话题</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯有这痴话与谁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/水巷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">把落叶信纸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">投入河流快递</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">告诉冬天 已为你铺上金的地毯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/八乡人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一阵凉风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">捎给你秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">退却那烦人的燥热</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今宵 月光没有独白</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老院 残存的温情</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">足以 融化心头积霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文／喜阳柳保宅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">低谷时你扶我</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如今隔远了距离</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">信中藏着心意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/奥冬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红月亮升起，白露未寒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜空浸入静寂。野鸭在苇丛的</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">嘎嘎声，有不可言说之美</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">你的名字比蕊还香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我把唯有临描成一枚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻轻飞向你的星</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月光在瓦垄间荡漾</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风把夜的星河连同果香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悄悄推到我梦里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/康秀炎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星星睡不着 大眼瞪小眼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">萤火虫迷路了 撞进小院</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">屋檐下 瓜果们闲聊着丰收</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/老妖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摘下无污染红叶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">精心打理火辣情话</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">这团烈火能把你冷寒融化吧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/水巷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月亮如一碗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">满满的牛奶溢出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滴入游子饥饿的唇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">寄友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/苇强</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨夜，不知那一轮明月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藏在哪里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">我默默在窗前张望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文徐宏安</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一轮玉盘擦亮星空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拾光者集齐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">零散的思维寄回解读</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span 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style="font-size:20px;">虫声在月光中沉浮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老屋搁浅，芒花等白了头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风将几粒清泪，种进一片海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枕着弯弯月光 想起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老屋的炊烟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抓一把 总是带些白露那霜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故乡秋夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月，再不因空巢而孤独</span></p><p 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