诗词名家廖水平老师等诗友《家乡小溪偶拾》唱和集稿欣赏

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<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">临江仙*家乡小溪偶拾</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74); font-size:22px;">文/廖水平</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨起漫行桑梓赏,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">淙淙碧水欢流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">如同妙曲奏歌优。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">倾听轻唤我,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">顿觉俚言留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">索谱喜填词细琢,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">铺笺秉笔心投。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">欣然拾句构思酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">低吟欣脱稿,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乐品韵悠悠</span>。</p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">2025.9.15。</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">临江仙·依韵奉和廖师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《家乡小溪偶拾》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(57, 181, 74);"> 文/李彬生</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨雾朦胧乡径路,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">潺潺溪水清幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">似弹古调韵悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">唤回多少梦,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡语暖心留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">信手拈来皆雅趣,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">诗情画意难收。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">挥毫泼墨意难休。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">新词初写就,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜上柳梢头。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025.9.15。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">敬和水平宗长雅词临江仙.</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《家乡小溪偶拾》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"></span><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74); font-size:22px;"> 文/廖湘隆</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">晓日晴霞秋水碧,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一溪浮影泛金流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">家山景色画图优。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">风光堪醉我,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">几步一停留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">数载客身居在外,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">番番幽梦心投。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡情缕缕总思酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">清芳皆入句,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">赋笔乐悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025.9.15。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">依韵敬和水平廖吾师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《家乡小溪偶拾》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74); font-size:22px;">文/刘福良</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">秋日晴峦霞彩绕,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">涓涓泛映东流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">欢歌妙曲韵清悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">撩人音醉我,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">入眼画堪留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">驻足老家心绻缱,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">观山看水情投。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">春风澍雨百般酬,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡愁难割舍,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">思念总悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025.9.15。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《临江仙》*奉和廖水平老师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(57, 181, 74);"> 文/张世奕</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">久别桑榆心绪愧,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">绵绵多少离愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">一轮明月照高楼,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">含羞云里躲,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">岁岁玉池游。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">索梦迟迟难入睡,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">经年往事烦忧。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">甜酸苦辣味同收,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">家乡何眷恋?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">游子意悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025.9.16。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">临江仙·步韵敬和廖水平老师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《家乡小溪偶拾》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74); font-size:22px;">文/邓国超</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫步欣逢溪浅处,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">潺潺漱玉长流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">松风竹韵两清幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">萦回闻鸟语,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">恰似画中留。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">撷取灵源归砚底,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">烟霞漫共相投。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟边逸兴一时酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">云笺凝翠影,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">几度乐悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025.9.16。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">临江仙·依韵奉和廖师</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《家乡小溪偶拾》</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="color:rgb(57, 181, 74); font-size:22px;">文/王金祥</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">闲步溪岸莺歌闹,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">谢谢清波携调东流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳丝轻拂韵悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫薇尽绽放,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">辉映树梢猴。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">曾记赤脚追鳞处,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">石圆沙软温柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">忽闻稚子水中游。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">耍杆带叶竹,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px;">搅碎梦中舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;">2025.9.16。</p>