<p class="ql-block">@所有人</p><p class="ql-block">华夏微型诗社第557期周周发同题创作开始了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 欢迎诗友们参与微型诗写作！请早日构思打磨！</p><p class="ql-block">备注：</p><p class="ql-block">1、投稿、收稿时间：</p><p class="ql-block">9月2日晚上7点——10点。</p><p class="ql-block">2、每人选投一首微型诗。</p><p class="ql-block">3、请单独发帖，不要自行接龙，由巴山一松老师统一收稿。</p><p class="ql-block">4、稿件选编到美篇，并由诗社老师择优予以点评。</p><p class="ql-block">5、本期题目：</p><p class="ql-block">①《大阅兵》 </p><p class="ql-block">②《开学季》</p><p class="ql-block">6.出题老师：岐麟散人</p><p class="ql-block">7、交流时可交流两首，投稿时只选投一首，收稿只收一首，点评也只点评一首。</p><p class="ql-block">8.优秀作品推荐“微诗坊”。</p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[点评作品展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">1.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雪儿怀春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辛苦攻读把梦想拉进现实</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目标再次锁定</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一步一脚印去丈量人生甜酸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗接地气，写出求学的本真，“拉进现实”一词将梦想具象化，赋予力量感。随之道出学子的的坚定，把开学的意义从学业延伸至人生体验，语言质朴，情感真挚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 2.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/赵正霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风儿引蜂蝶 齐拥来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向着书山进发 小背篓里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待收集 新墨香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">岐麟散人点评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗以生动的意象营造出热闹的开学氛围，“拥”字尽显活力。“向书山进发”点明学子行动方向，“小背篓”细节充满童真，末句把对知识的渴望转化为可感知的画面，尽显开学季的朝气。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">3.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨香漫过走廊 书包</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坠着黎明的重量</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铃声裹着嬉闹余响</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 三个点去呈现开学季，“墨香浸过走廊”氛围浓，“书包坠着黎明的重量”虚实结合突出时间早，“铃声裹着嬉闹余响”，由静态转到动态，展现出活力，这样画面有了主角。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">4.大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝阳引领钢铁洪流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三面旗帜下，正步拓展</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山河挺直脊梁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">巴山一松简评:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 由实到虚，虚实结合，正能量满满。大题目，唯以点代面方不口号和空洞，抓取准确。看过大阅兵，相信对这文字背后的震撼和激动会有共鸣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">[点评作品展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">5.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/森林雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校园，在九月盛开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朵朵稚嫩的芬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与晨光携手，飘进了课堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 以花朵喻学童，以晨光喻时光，九月又是一个开学季。作品虚实结合，词语搭配新颖鲜活，“飘”字精准动感，是成功的一首。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">6.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又一个阶梯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抬高新希冀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目光所及 到处都是快乐的空气</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> “阶梯”“抬高”多意，既实又虚。“快乐的空气”搭配出新，有对教育大环境赞誉之意，兼有无微不至之意。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">7.大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铿锵的步伐，踏响威严</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天安门广场上，誓言如磐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伟大的声音，震颤河山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫塞长风简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 紧扣时代主题，用词威武昂扬，彰显了大阅兵的气势，和坚如磐石的精神，提气。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">[点评作品展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">8.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">见稻谷都将黄金铺展开来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学子开足马力</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">澈目憧憬，奔向下个加油站</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗由物及人，鼓励开学季的孩子们，勤奋努力，为理想铆足劲、加油！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝉鸣 还没听够</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书包就背起新的页码</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走廊里 招呼追着背影跑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗写开学季，孩子们假期结束，奔赴校园，走廊打闹之情景。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 开篇的引入，自然、简洁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">10.开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/王建刚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校门口的树影拉长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新校服像晨光缝制的羽翼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有人目送，背影化作九月的风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜星简评：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗第一句写景，用景给人物出场营造环境。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 次句写到人，校服之美，衬托出学生之精神面貌，心情愉悦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 末句写到父母，写出了父母依依不舍之情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 微诗抓住了人物之外貌（服饰），从小细节，表达了开学季，学生们的兴高采烈，家长们的关爱之情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">[同题所有作品展示]</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/陈果果</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">浩气凝长街 威武惊天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉默的纪念碑发出感言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">这盛世 如我所盼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/赵正霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风儿引蜂蝶 齐拥来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">向着书山进发 小背篓里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">待收集 新墨香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/付光渝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">墨香漫过走廊 书包</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">坠着黎明的重量</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铃声裹着嬉闹余响</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/南湖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">整齐划一 气势如虹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">军民团结如一人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">华夏盛世 再续新篇 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文／喜阳柳保宅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目送孩子进校园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家长暂松口气</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜，辅导灯火又将亮起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/丹霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉寂了一个假期的校园</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又沸腾了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">红嘟嘟的脸膛 羊角小辫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古墨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一场，盛世磅礴的陆海空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">列阵国门前</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雄赳赳，踏出军魂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/行天 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">北京云帷开 天地透明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">呼啸队列潮起声声雷 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">军旗飞 剑指远海重洋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/林康养</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心，该收回来了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">把它放在书本上，勤奋为灯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">将照亮前方一个又一个惊喜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/水巷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">刺刀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">直指天空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">驱散所有乌云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/米书</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑热的焚烤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">难敌 油墨芬香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">叩问人生的答案 书海里寻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/阳光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乘上高铁 坐上飞机</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">祖国的栋梁们</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一个个迈进心怡的大学</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/周其林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">家国之仇 复兴之志</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">象潮水一样</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一浪接着一浪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/小乙</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝阳引领钢铁洪流</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三面旗帜下，正步拓展</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">山河挺直脊梁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雪儿怀春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辛苦攻读把梦想拉进现实</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目标再次锁定</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一步一脚印去丈量人生甜酸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/韩士民</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书包压弯的背影</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再一次扯痛着</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望子成龙的心房</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/森林雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校园，在九月盛开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一朵朵稚嫩的芬芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">与晨光携手，飘进了课堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/哈生寿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今夜起</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又谁知道</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又多了一盏晚关的电灯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/道是无晴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">小身体都压弯了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还说，书包里装满了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一大家子的希望和爱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/八乡人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">油墨的清香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">稚气的脸庞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">嬉戏的操场</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/墨客吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">儿女携着家人的期望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飞向远方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">父母的心疼了疼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/蔡厚炳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钱包 已瘦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老屋的额头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又多一道皱纹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/东方虹雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抖擞龙威</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">亮相 国之重器</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">军姿飒爽 世界惊讶</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/康秀炎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">军姿挺拔筑铜墙铁壁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">步履划一驱铁流滚滚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">全世界聚焦 大国担当</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大 阅 兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/晗羲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">步调一致如一人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">声劈长空，重型兵器镇寰球</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">西方面向东方城楼，敬礼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/老妖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大手牵着小手前行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">去尝试新乐趣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">点亮又一个里程</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文 绿色</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长安街的晨光，托出</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">立体的和平宣言，五星红旗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">再一次擦亮全世界的眼睛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/雨洒第一季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看足迹，与雪山草地相连</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走过来了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">势破云天，踏向丝绸之路</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/古道白杨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又一个阶梯</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抬高新希冀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">目光所及 到处都是快乐的空气</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/岐麟散人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">铿锵的步伐，踏响威严</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">天安门广场上，誓言如磐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">伟大的声音，震颤河山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/陈桂娟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">和平鸽飞过天安门上空</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">哨声穿云 共候</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">先辈观礼的英灵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/春天的故事</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟儿展翅飞蓝天</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">送子入学流下惜别泪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">列车载着梦想驶向诗和远方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/书虫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那些血泪翻涌民族的记忆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">必须亮剑，秀一把肌肉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让太阳胆寒，低头</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/巴山一松</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">见稻谷都将黄金铺展开来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">学子开足马力</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">澈目憧憬，奔向下个加油站</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">大阅兵</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/东北老韩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">挺直的脊梁</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">是和平鸽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">栖息的肩膀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/往往醉后</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝉鸣 还没听够</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书包就背起新的页码</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走廊里 招呼追着背影跑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/王建刚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校门口的树影拉长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新校服像晨光缝制的羽翼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有人目送，背影化作九月的风</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开学季</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/故乡人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">校门前，人声又鼎沸起来</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野在课本外的心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">书包，正着手一一背回</span></p>