<p class="ql-block">图片：网络</p><p class="ql-block">文字：夏日阳光</p><p class="ql-block">美篇号：10969225</p> <p class="ql-block">题记：</p><p class="ql-block">陶然老师的[丝雨散文诗诗苑.秋之墨韵]秋之韵。是圈子的征文美篇。读过之后，感觉非常精彩动人，印象深刻。故写一首散文诗《读陶然老师（秋之韵）有感]，与美友共享。</p> <p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5frmjtj9" target="_blank">读陶然老师《秋之韵》有感</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">读陶然老师《秋之韵》有感</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"></b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">读过《秋之韵》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我有了深刻的感想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一篇美妙的散文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">写满了秋的诗章</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">他赶走了难熬的酷暑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">送来了丝丝的凉爽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清新的墨香</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">宛如艾蒿的轻烟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袅袅婷婷的绕过房樑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陶然老师的笔下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋韵无比的优扬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">恰是满天的繁星</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">释放着无尽的光芒</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那满满的秋意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潇潇洒洒的跃上了纸张</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仿佛是小溪潺潺</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流进了读者的心房</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风儿轻轻拂过</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好像是心电图开始震荡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幌乎是心绪涟漪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">泛起了微波悠场</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《秋之韵》描绘了</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋天那真实的模样</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一幅精彩的画卷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">栩栩如生的展示新妆</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落叶空中纷飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不知是否带着哀伤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">也许有许多的愁绪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">找不到落脚的方向</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">然而秋的收获</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">给人们带来了极大的希望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那些沉甸甸的喜悦</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">装满了背上的行囊</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">灵动优雅的文字</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">编织了远大的梦想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗歌就像是神奇的种子</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在心的田园里疯长</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《秋之韵》让我沉醉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">任由思绪在期间游赏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好像灵魂都变得惬意</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">自由自在的舒张</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陶醉于欣赏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那是秋景在自由生长</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那韵味儿悠悠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">留下了温馨的梦想</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋高气爽的韵味儿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让文字也是热情满腔</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如同一颗火热的心</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">热烈的奔放</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心中对秋天感怀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">想把日月都一块儿收藏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">想让他在记忆的深处</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">永远都不能忘</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">《秋之韵》的秋情</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在丝丝缕缕间舒畅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有离别的伤感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有如暮霭茫茫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">当然也有收获的快乐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好像是那秋日的暖阳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对时光流逝的叹息</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">还是把它悄悄地隐藏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一首《秋之韵》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让我们去享受</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋日的美好时光</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋声在《秋之韵》的诗里</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好像是交响乐在奏响</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋叶沙沙摇曳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那是秋风在悄悄伴唱</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人字形的鸿雁传书</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">声声告别飞向远方</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凉爽的秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">滴滴嗒嗒敲着门窗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">他们谱出了秋之韵律</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那是美妙的秋歌乐章</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那《秋之韵》的色彩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">在散文中绚丽的绽放</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">金黄色的稻穗儿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">摇曳着田园的辉煌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">都在陶然的笔下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闪烁着秋高气爽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">好像是哪个画匠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">打翻了大自然的颜料缸</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">让斑斓的色彩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">描绘出了秋日的盛装 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">致敬陶然老师</span></p>