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<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>一、与阳光同行</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5efyzqn8?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二、丽烨</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ejh540f?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>三、晴墨斋</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b> 【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ejeeovd?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>四、文欢宇</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ejicfb7?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_uid=413419068&share_depth=1" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>五、原野</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eiez0nx?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>六、秋韵</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ejj5e6s?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>七、夏至</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ejnon79?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>八、老米</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ekd9xad?share_depth=2&s_uid=7864355&share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>九、喜乐年华</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5elxuf9g?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十、雁翎 · 魏</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5em1x70k?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十一、嫣儿</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5em9r5pf?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十二、绿色之洲</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eyqls36?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十三、陶香村</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eogzanw?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_uid=16590638&share_depth=1" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十四、飞龙</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b></b><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eonqthf?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十五、一抹香</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】退逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ery62mx?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十六、大雁</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5esnk3te?share_depth=2&s_uid=7864355&share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_to=group_singlemessage&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>十七、莲心不染</b></p><p class="ql-block 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href="https://www.meipian.cn/5etrvdak?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十、维学</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b></b><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ev0kelh?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十一、张丕彦</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5ev7eo2m?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十二、小桥流水人家</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eygdklf?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=30292030" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十三、珊花烂漫</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5f0hqt95?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block">  </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十四(1)张修梦</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】红樱桃和灰喜鹊</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eghrkz4?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十五(2)傅毓</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】槐花儿开了</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eiluzmh?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十六(3)潇潇暮雨</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】小暑忆事</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5emhozg4?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十七(4)曹正刚</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】担水与市井光阴</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5enzwh06?share_depth=1&first_share_uid=7864355&first_share_to=group_singlemessage" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十八(5)壹玖柒</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】我陪一朵花盛开</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5eqhttkg?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>二十九(6)澄怀观道</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】黄果树瀑布追踪</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5epmnsxd?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=69187735" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>三十(7)山村野夫</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>【自荐】那一渠清水</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/5es3tto0?first_share_to=group_singlemessage&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=5296730" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px;">网页链接</a></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:18px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p> 附:开场白 <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">当我们还沉浸在“五月繁花心上过”的滋润,还氤氲着“六月粽香潜入心”的醉美,不经意间,竟然被粽叶的绿意、艾草的奇香、龙舟的鼓点牵引坠入逍遥的“七月仲夏之梦”中。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">想想,在荷池波光中撷取静美的镜面,在柳林中追逐蝉蜩‌吹舞的透明的丝,在夏花丛中由一朵早醒的菊触发灵感 ,写下季秋的第一行具灵性的散文佳句,那是何等潇洒惬意?</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">让我们延续散文用隽永文字记录韵事的文脉,契合《楚辞》"纫秋兰以为佩"的香草传统,用篇篇华章让端午与重阳在时令流转中完成诗意对话。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">从六月起,叙事散文文友会的“推荐双精”将实施新举措,即实行从“同题征文”和”自主投稿”中遴选佳作的“双轨运作”。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">单一的从“同题征文”中“选稿的弊端是:</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其一,易使作者产生自己是“双精专业户”的错觉。对文章疏于打磨,致文中硬伤成串。从2025年7月1日起,本圈不再为作者逐字逐句修改病句和错别字,仅适量指瑕。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其二,易使作者养成骄娇二气。倘一次不合格未推荐便负气出走;对修改建议拒不接受,固执己见,辩解不休。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">因此,增加从“自主投稿”中选佳稿,可产生“鲶鱼效应”,营造竞争氛围。让有些作者看到——圈中作者人才济济,写作高手众多,文章写得规范漂亮。从而懂得写作规律是优选劣淘,要获双精需奋起学习,下劲提高自己的写作水平。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> 附:七月征文题 <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唐·杜甫曰:“昊天出华月,茂林延疏光。”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">“昊天”形容夏季云气博大的天空。诗人用“昊天”营造出夏夜的浩渺,“茂林延疏光”映衬夏夜静谧之美。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唐·李昂云:“人皆苦炎热,我爱夏日长。”</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诗人说,夏天阳光温暖,绿荫、蝉鸣、荷</p><p class="ql-block">风……可人们都觉得夏天酷热难熬,而我却</p><p class="ql-block">喜欢夏日悠长的时光。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><b>那么,你对夏季有怎样的具体感受呢?请以《追逐夏风的足迹》为题,描绘你眼中、心中的夏天,表达对生活的热爱和向往吧!</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"> 【同题】追逐夏风的足迹</b></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p>