<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学名：姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：WY8-X315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.贺望岳开学（下平八庚)</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">今逢开课际，望岳聚精英。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">欲展鲲鹏志，诗途万里程。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳开学有寄（上平十灰）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">望岳贤英至，黉门聚众才。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">潜心研李杜，折桂待君来。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.4.12</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">姜老师的两首诗作平仄押韵正确，符合作业要求，意境优美，同意提交教学群。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第二次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号wy8-x315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.无题（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">柳岸拂春风，花开别样红。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">凭栏邀素月，对酒叹飞蓬。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2. 兰花（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">兰生峡谷藏，淡淡散幽香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">独傲风姿雅，何人不识芳？</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.4.22</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">姜义学员的两首诗作平仄押韵正确，符合作业要求，意境优美，同意提交作业群。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：邹宁春 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：姜秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第三次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员: 姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号: wy8-x315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.兰花（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">幽兰生静谷，洁雅溢芬芳。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">不慕群花艳， 含薰淡淡香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2. 赞梅花（下平八庚）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">玉瓣挂霜横，琼英铁骨铮。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">冰魂香彻骨，俏绽让人惊。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3. 翠竹（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">劲竹山间立，风摇翠影雄。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">虽经风雪后，拔地似飞鸿。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4. 秋菊（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">风摇菊蕊黄，满院散幽香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">一任秋寒冷，何妨抱雪凉。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.8</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@姜义（组长）wy8-x315-023 四首诗作合律合韵，兰梅竹菊，各擅其长，符合讲义要求，可以提交教学群！[强][强][强]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第四次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.春风（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">翠柳轻摇添雅韵，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">繁花舞影映晴光。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">悠然漫卷云千缕，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">洗尽尘埃换丽妆。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.冬雪（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">纷纷六出漫空浮，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">洒落人间遍野幽。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">素裹千山添锦绣，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">霜披万岭玉龙游。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.明月（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">清光漫洒秋山外，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">皓彩轻笼夜色中。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">静映寒江浮碎玉，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">银辉万缕照长空。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.榴花（上平十五删）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">立夏榴花绽滿山，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">枝间绿叶叠红颜。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">清团艳雅君皆爱，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">好似佳人绛玉鬟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.18</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@姜义（组长）wy8-x315-023 同学四首七绝合律合韵，主题明确，符合讲义要求！可以提交教学群。[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：唐福山 陈亮</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第五次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.春风（上平十三元）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">春风梳细柳，淑气满乾坤。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">拂野千花绽，临溪积草繁。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">驱云天际远，伴燕影中翻。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">岁序因之始，东君妙手存。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.夏雨（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">夏雨似丝流，炎威一夕收。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">敲荷荷气落，打叶竹声悠。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">润土千苗壮，滋林万木稠。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">田园欢意满，丰岁待无忧。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.秋荷（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">冷露凋荷倦，残枝立浅塘。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">茎枯犹抱节，玉褪尚含香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">雨打清莲瘦，风摇雅韵扬。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">终怀贞洁志，素魄永留芳。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.冬梅（下平二萧）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">琼英映雪飘，瘦影立霜凋。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">冷蕊含香绽，虬枝向月摇。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">风欺颜更秀，冰压韵尤娇。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">待到春归日，欣然隐碧霄。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.28</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@姜义（组长）wy8-x315-023 同学四首五律辅以风雨荷梅，为诗增色多多，律韵对仗正确，符合讲义作业要求，可以提交！[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：唐福山 陈亮</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第六次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：姜义</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-023</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.泰山（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">拔地凌霄惊海甸，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">层峦叠嶂接遥天。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">云生碧岫千峰秀，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">日照青崖万壑妍。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">石径逶迤通玉阙，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">松涛澎湃响寒川。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">登临极目苍茫处，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">漫卷风云入锦笺。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.黄河（上平一东)</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">奔腾万里贯西东，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">浊浪排沙气势鸿。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">九曲蜿蜒滋沃野，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">千波浩荡映长虹。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">文明孕育千秋业，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">血脉传承百代功。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">亘古长流吟壮阔，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">雄浑不息韵无穷。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.长城（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">群山翠影环龙脊，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">峻岭苍烟绕雉楼。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">烽火当年惊敌胆，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">关城亘古护神州。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">秦规汉制遗风在，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">北塞南藩浩气留。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">历尽沧桑形未改，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">巍峨屹立写春秋。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.长江之歌（下平十一尤）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">滚滚长江逝水流，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">行经蜀楚历吴州。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">清波鹭舞迎贤客，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">碧树猿啼绕晚舟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">落木萧萧千尺浪，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">奔涛浩浩万年忧。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">诗篇璀璨成追忆，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">多少仙才韵里留。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.6.10</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@姜义 同学四首诗作合律合韵，对仗工整，意群正确，同意收录[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p>