<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第一次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：WY8-X315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.贺望岳开学</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">寻方来望岳，会友去兰亭。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">可笑真师隐，荧屏享视听。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.望岳开学有寄</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">叠嶂千重岳，翻山起步难，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">而今跟向导，一路御诗寒。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.4.12</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">邹老师的两首诗作平仄押韵正确，符合作业要求，意境优美，同意提交教学群。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第二次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1. 春回（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">细雨乘东风，摇春醒梦中。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">村边青草地，二月有花红。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 2.逢春（下平八庚）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">阳春老柳茎，遇雨绿芽生。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">喜上眉梢笑，还调燕子情。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.4.22</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">邹宁春学员的两首诗作平仄押韵正确，符合作业要求，意境优美，同意提交教学群。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：姜秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第三次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.梅（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">梅开寻赏客，雪梦伴清香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">月夜城池静，窗含读景郎。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.兰（上平十四寒）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">架上叶青宽，盆中蕊紫丹。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">摇风迎晓旭，最爱赏春兰。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.竹（下平四豪）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">雪雨霜风叠，根深竹剑高。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">虚怀成大业，逐梦出山遨。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.菊（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">金秋月夜霜，菊艳压群芳。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">碧玉金龙貌，红莲矮盏裳。①</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">注①：碧玉、金龙、红莲、矮盏，皆为菊花名。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.7</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@邹宁春WY8-X315-103 同学四首诗作合律合韵，符合讲义要求！梅情兰香竹气菊名，蕴含其中！作业通过。[强][强][强]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第四次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.风（上平十一真）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">月夜扶摇挥竹韵，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">芭蕉梦里舞青春。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">荷风入舍翻书阅，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">一阵诗香似酒醇。 </span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.花（下平六麻）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">蔷薇点降灿如霞，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">绿叶生辉伴艳花。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">醉驾东风香十里，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">春城锦瑟着红裟。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 3.雪（上平二冬）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">霜天晓旭梅花弄，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">一阵清寒慰翠松。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">银粟无聊亲万物，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">危楼赏雪品毛峰。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> 4.月（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">月抱城池熟睡香，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">悄行不忍扰黄粱。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">时常躲进乌云里，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">静守星空换曙光。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.18</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@邹宁春WY8-X315-103 同学四首七绝合律合韵，主题明确，符合讲义要求！可以提交教学群。[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：姜义 唐福山 陈亮</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第五次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.春（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">东风吹陌上，老柳吐新黄。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">野草书青径，庭花写紫廊。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">含芳兰二月，吐惠杏三阳。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">我辈勤耕作，春天绣锦乡。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.夏（上平四支）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">浅夏绿城池，芙蓉粉玉枝。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">景风驱荒旱，膏雨润陵夷。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">旷野犁新赋，田园种古诗。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">鹃啼声养耳，麦浪助神驰。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.秋（上平十一真）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">清照诗金桂①，吟枫杜牧新。②</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">菊黄霜渐白，竹翠露成银。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">落叶前庭问，寒枝后院巡。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">秋高天地阔，敲键觅乡邻。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">注：①指李清照诗桂花，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"> ②杜牧吟枫诗。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.冬（上平五微）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">寒风肆虐追，大雪展淫威。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">借月松姿翠，偷星竹韵辉。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">梅开形自傲，叶落影悲微。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">数九观三友，更需银粟飞。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.5.27</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@邹宁春WY8-X315-103 同学四首五律合律合韵，对仗正确，符合讲义要求！可以提交作业。[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">望岳雅集公益诗词学校八期初级班第六次作业</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学员：邹宁春</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">学号：wy8-x315-103</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">1.泰山（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">五岳之尊群仰望，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">泰山独享史悠长。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">君皇祭祀琼楼应，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">武帝封王玉宇祥。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">岱庙钟声涵世事。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">天街岁步印沧桑。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">御书断壁风烟里，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">阅尽浮云始向阳。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2.黄河（下平一先）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">黄河静淌兆余年，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">古道流今盛世迁。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">壶口悬浮掀底浪，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">禹门空洞纳良田。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">母亲乳汁育华夏，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">大地甘霖沛圣贤。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">一路奔腾心渤海，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">同歌九曲弄情弦。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">3.长城（下平七阳）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">山峦叠嶂苍茫控，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">警醒神龙守北疆。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">啸吼可降熊与虎，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">狂呼能退狈和狼。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">回眸青绿江南美，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">放眼安宁岁月香。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">华夏同心中国梦，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">长城万里更辉煌。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">4.长江（上平一东）</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">万里长江志向东，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">蜿蜒曲折去匆匆。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">烟波浩渺千帆竞，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">浊浪排空百舸雄。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">湍急岸边观落日，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">奔腾桥下沐晨风。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">通航大坝名天际，</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">一路高歌与海逢。</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">2025.6.10</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor"><br></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">@邹宁春 同学四首诗作合律合韵，对仗工整，意群正确，同意收录[强][强][强][玫瑰][玫瑰][玫瑰]</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">点评人：姜义 唐福山</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">指导老师：江秋容 刘秀平</span></span></p>