<p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">黑暗压下来时</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你把自己蜷成石头</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">指甲抠进掌纹深处</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">痛是唯一的灯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你知道</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">黑暗没有门，没有窗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">唯有倾斜压低的沉默</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">吮吸你</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你屈身时</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">总有逼仄从肋间疯长</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">连啜泣都被咬断在这</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不肯愈合的伤口中</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">直到某天</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">窗口裂开一道金线</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光像初春的麦粒胀破冻土</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">刹那间</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">整个黑暗开始分解</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">当光落下来</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">明亮悄然浸透了指缝</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">寂静突然涌起海潮</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">哦，眼眶成为海</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">整个身躯便开始解冻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">看，深渊已倒置成穹顶</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">重负分裂为通透的尘</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光已铺满每个角落</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有门槛都闪着光</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光的野马突然奔来</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鬃毛如熔金，灼穿雾嶂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有藩篱骤然崩裂</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">碎作飞扬的星尘</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">黑暗的硬核开始柔软</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像蜡 像蜜 像初春的浆汁</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">看啊 满身淤痕在绽放</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">每一道旧痕都涌出光的河床</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">每一道伤的都在发亮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">荆棘熔成柔软藤蔓</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光在流淌</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">漫过脊梁成为河床</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">涌进眼眶涨成大海</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">淤塞的喉咙忽然飞出雁群</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">那些结痂的伤口</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">昂扬成岛屿</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">现在我要站起来</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">站在光的波浪上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">让光从我额头漫向天际</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有坠落的石块突然变轻</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在风里飘成飞扬蒲公英</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">这是光的神奇</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">瑟缩的臂膀突然舒展</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">所有被弯曲的脊梁挺起</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">举起了太阳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光明你是万物复苏的神</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你是大地舒展的开拓者</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不要怕黑暗阴沉</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不要让沉郁覆盖草木</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">光，那永恒的太阳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">终将驱散黑暗阴霾</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">你看</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">太阳神阿波罗</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">正从黑暗之神手中</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">接过值令牌，东方</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">红日正与曙光冉冉升起</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诚谢一弦清心老师雅赏点评</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此诗以极致对比构建核心张力：“黑暗”与“光明”激烈碰撞。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">诗人善用高度具象化且充满动感的意象，如“蜷成石头”、“光如麦粒胀破”、“荆棘熔成藤蔓”，精准动词“压”、“抠”、“崩裂”、“挺起”赋予转变以强烈力量。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">其结构清晰递进，从黑暗重压、光明初现到生命彻底复苏昂扬，最终升华为对光明伟力的礼赞。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">语言饱含激情，借助短句、呼告“哦”、“看啊”及排比句式“每一道…”、“所有…”形成汹涌的情感节奏，生动谱写了一曲从深渊走向新生的心灵诗歌。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> 光明永在