<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">附《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">（通韵）原玉：</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">陈懋催</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">基似沙滩亦建楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">工程质量果含羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">外形哪有惊和喜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">内架平添虑与愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">在意评说常放胆，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">担心嘲笑每低头。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">满怀热望难抛弃，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">无奈时随度夏秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">步韵和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">睿夫 </b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵海扬帆欲起楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">词穷笔钝意多羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲字句三更苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斟酌篇章百虑愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦绕诗田甘俯首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心随雅趣自昂头。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">但期琢玉终成器，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑看风云度岁秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">依韵和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:20px;">□阮子武 </b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵海扬帆驾扁舟，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲字句愧无羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">搜肠每叹才思浅，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">捻断常因妙语愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">敢向先贤寻雅趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">甘从典籍仰风流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗心若许终无悔，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑看霜华染鬓秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">(2026.06.27)</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">和陈懋催老师《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">奇风</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">格律森严似楚囚，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲平仄几时休？</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三更易改词中病，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五更难消韵里愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">李杜文章悬日月，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">苏辛笔力撼春秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">书生敢效擎天手，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">也向银河借钓钩。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">敬和陈懋催先生《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">文/蓝海清</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">画屏开卷胜书楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">点赞寥寥吾自羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">未敢骚坛听绝唱，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">不甘白首入凡流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三番测检仄平误，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">五夜寻思句式愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">唯恐诗庸添笑料，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">手机忐忑又悲秋。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">依韵和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《学诗感受》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">文/韦默爵（七里圣嵩)</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">打好根基可建楼，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">脑瓜愚笨勿含羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">字词缺少常嗟苦，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">语境平庸总犯愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">依韵和吟源引绪，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">命题创作感无头。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">骚坛迈步期成就，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">安度余生享百秋。</span></p>