【澳华诗刊.诗人专辑】王成杰诗集

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本期主编：秋林 1 雨的印记 前妻说江南总下雨他说吐鲁番也是怎么会呢她很纳闷儿局部地区他笑笑心里有云飘过嘀嗒 Echoes of Rain His former loveSpoke of Jiangnan's ceaseless rain.He too claimed Turpan's skies were wept with showers.How could that be?Her face wore a puzzled look.Isolated drizzles,He said, with a gentle smile.Clouds sailed through his heart,A soft patter echoing. 2台阶 只因在梦里听到故乡的秋声下山时我把长长的台阶踩成一节节一节节断肠 Steps In dreamI heard the autumnOf my homeAnd thereforeOn the way downMy heart broke into piecesLike steps 3寂静之声 隔着坟他听到爹说狗儿你瘦了 The Sound of Silence He heard Dad sayFrom the grave,“Doggie,You just pined away.” 4告别夏天 几声鸟鸣绿了午后的阳光谁家篱笆上悄悄儿探出一抹红像某年某日那人的粉面像弥漫的心思不经意落下一瓣砸得记忆生疼 Farewell to Summer A few birdsongGreens the afternoon sun.A flower peeks outOver the fence of a yard,Like her pink cheek on that day of that year,And my wandering mind.A petal suddenly fallsAnd hits my memory. 5杀死一只知更鸟 当所有的知更鸟都停止歌唱当枪口对准整个春天我要向张开喉咙的那一只致意 Killing a Robin When all the robinsStop warblingAnd the muzzleIs aimed at spring,I will saluteThe oneThat opens its beak. 6过火 太冷了一个人的江南我开始怀念北方你若还在那里的冰雪会很温暖 Much Sadness Alone in the south,I feel cold.I miss the north.If you were alive,The snow there would be warm. 7旷野 我向它挥手道别那棵树轻轻地抖了抖叶子 In the Wilderness I waved it goodbye,And slightly, the tree shook its leaves. 8惹 春天很坏凭白惹一段相思又去了你更坏许那么多诺言却不来 Lovesick Spring is bad.It made me lovesick,But it left.You are worse.You promised so much,But you never came. 9餐桌 一个人两副碗筷最近手抖得厉害总夹不住碗里的悲伤 Table He is aloneWith two sets of cutlery.Hands shaking badly,He can't holdThe sadness in his bowl. 10消失的人群 忽然想起彪子在那个人人自危的年代彪子曾经偷偷冲我笑他说，你好后来，以及再后来聪明人满街晃只有彪子和彪子的笑容不知所踪 Vanishing People Fool came into my mind.When everyone felt insecure,He gave me a secret smile,And said, "Hello!"Then later on,Wise men were everywhere,But Fool,With his smile,Disappeared. 11春日 从那以后春天再也没有来过 青杏在枝头羞涩她在树下羞涩一袖风过鸟鸣跌入草的怀里而忧伤忽然就绿了 从那以后春天再也没有来过 Spring From then on,Spring never came back. Baby apricots hung on the branches, shy.She stood under the tree, shy.When a breeze blew,Birdsong fell into the grass,And all of a sudden,Sadness turned green. From then on,Spring never came back. 12月亮 今夜的月亮太瘦湿漉漉的思念挂上去扑通一声月光碎了一池思念碎了一池舀不尽捧不起 The Moon The moon tonight,Thin and pale,Couldn't bear the weightOf memory.With a splash,It fell into the water,Too shatteredTo scoopOr hold up. 13破碎 拼图少了一块我说算了儿子说不行一番折腾到底还是找了回来原来是台湾岛拼图是爷爷送的老人扛过枪 Broken A piece of the jigsaw was missing.Forget it. I said.No. My son insisted.After a long effort,He got it back.It's Taiwan.The jigsaw was a gift from Grandpa,Who was once a soldier. 14白夜 万物都起了鼾声挂钟醒着我醒着滴滴答答的时光是最好的独步舞曲而故乡的炊烟在夜的深处起舞翩翩 white night everythingis snoringbut the wall clockand methe ticking timeplays the best solo dancein the deep of the nightcurls up the twilight smokefrom my old house 诗歌点评：在细微处照见生命的苍茫与温柔这14首短诗，以极简的文字勾勒出丰富的情感层次，既有对往事的追忆，也有对现实的凝视，更暗含对生命本质的思考。诗人通过碎片化的意象与克制的语言，将个人经验升华为普遍的人类情感，呈现出一种“于无声处听惊雷”的美学效果。 1. 意象的凝练与张力组诗擅用微小事物承载厚重情感。如《台阶》中，故乡的秋声被具象为“一节节断肠”的台阶，将乡愁的绵长与疼痛压缩在短短数行中；《月亮》里“湿漉漉的思念”与“碎了一池”的月光交织，用视觉与听觉的通感传递思念的不可承受之轻。这些意象看似平淡，却在矛盾的并置中爆发张力——如《寂静之声》中“隔着坟”的对话，生死界限被一句“你瘦了”轻易穿透，荒诞中透出深沉的哀伤。 2. 语言的留白与韵律诗人深谙“少即是多”的创作哲学。《旷野》仅用两行——“那棵树轻轻地抖了抖叶子”，便完成了一场无声的告别；《春日》中“忧伤/忽然就绿了”，以反逻辑的修辞让情绪自然流淌。英文译本（如《Echoes of Rain》）亦精准捕捉了原诗的节奏，如“A soft patter echoing”中的头韵，模拟雨滴的韵律。这种留白赋予读者二次创作的空间，使诗意在沉默中蔓延。 3. 主题的多元共鸣组诗涵盖乡愁、爱情、生死、社会反思等多重主题。《消失的人群》以“彪子”的失踪隐喻集体记忆的断裂，在幽默与悲凉间切换；《破碎》通过拼图中“台湾岛”的寻找，将家国情怀融入亲子互动，举重若轻。而贯穿始终的，是对“缺席”的凝视——前妻的疑问（《雨的印记》）、逝去的春天（《春日》）、未履行的诺言（《惹》），皆在缺失中凸显存在的重量。 4. 东西方诗学的融合诗中既有中国古典诗词的凝练（如“一袖风过”的意境），又吸收了西方现代诗的冷峻（如《杀死一只知更鸟》对暴力的隐喻）。《餐桌》中“夹不住碗里的悲伤”，以日常场景解构孤独，令人想起雷蒙德·卡佛的极简主义；《白夜》里“挂钟醒着/我醒着”，则带有俳句式的寂寥禅意。 结语：雨滴中的宇宙这组诗如雨滴般清澈透明，却折射出生命的复杂光谱。诗人以温柔而锐利的笔触，将记忆、失去与希望凝结为“雨的印记”——它们落在江南与吐鲁番，落在坟茔与餐桌，最终汇成一条无声的河流，冲刷着读者心中共同的褶皱。 作者简介：王成杰，笔名浣石，大连交通大学外国语学院教师，前牙买加蒙特哥贝国际中文教师，诗人，翻译。