<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">联斋群友2025上半年楹联集锦作品选评（一）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 孙福奎</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、田兴隆老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飘色非遗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">踩高跷炫起春潮，抖落奇葩，漫卷霞绸流量爆；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">趁上巳点开福袋，传承绝艺，轻摇羽扇菜单新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：流量爆，菜单新，新词语入联，精彩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">仲夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝉韵称荷蕊，纳凉扇撼繁星，弹幕吞天瞋目望；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萤光焊柳条，上线网评皓月，吃瓜说地会心甜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：遣词造句别致生动，有另一番韵味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">厅堂联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">随清风入座；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有明月萦怀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：言简意美，能呈现主人情趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、霍东来老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蛇舞油都圆铁梦；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鹊歌铁韵唱油春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：规则重字，精美意丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺丁香诗社成立十五周年</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">曲赋诗联，丁香醉倒万千客；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">东西南北，社帜飘红十五春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：夸张手法，妙笔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">元宵节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">光幻声迷，万众攒街欢望月；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠圆玉润，一锅沸水煮丰年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：一锅沸水煮丰年，精彩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、杨金香老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨后观桐花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨洗千枝凝翠色；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风摇一树绽青霄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：雨洗千枝，风摇一树，描述生动形象。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">端午节</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艾粽飘香香九域；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙舟竞渡渡千江。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：顶针手法精致。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贺滕州市诗词楹联学会第二届会员代表大会圆满召开</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">两届扶轮手；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一群追梦人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：言简意赅，描述真切。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、尹沛新老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老父</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">无言父爱如山重；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">有礼儿亲似海深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：正反对举和比喻手法出彩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">风骚屈子魂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龙舟竞渡，英名永载，纪念忧民忧国子；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">粽米飘香，艾草传情，讴歌不屈不挠魂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：自对和重字，意韵悠长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红花送暮春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">红颜送暮春，红花落瓣铺泥满；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">绿浪漂残月，绿柳垂丝映水长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：表颜色的词，运用精美。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、傅贺楠老师</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">为杨克炎著《历代书法咏论》撰联</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飞毫催落雁；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">跑马快扬蹄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：动感十足，构篇匠心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">醉酒铺笺谁布阵？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">飞浆展艺我冲锋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：设问，增添趣味。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凌云潇洒淘仙气；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">上海风流撰玉亭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">简评：淘仙气，撰玉亭，尽呈书法家风采。</span></p>