<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">6月6日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅室闲居忘世忧 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">把盏船头渔火明 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦荻丛中鹭影单 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉管轻吹和鸟音（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倚杖山屏鹤影悠（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桂楫收时酒盏盈（琢玉）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">横笛轻吹思旧人（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骋目霞绡雁影遥（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">塘角暮时蛙鼓喧（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉斝轻斟赏月光（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倚杖竹帘鸟影飞（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳叶丛中牧笛悠（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧叶轻摇醉客心 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收网星潭鲤影摇 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莲叶浓时棹影斜 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">焦尾轻弹听妙音（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">对舞松涛鹤影悠（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏雨匆时鹭影低（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿蚁新尝话故情（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落棹波心桂影摇（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问大）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳岸幽时月色柔（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古调清吟抒晚怀 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举目秋林桂影摇 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳叶浓时蝉语喧 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿绮轻弹抒素怀 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">问舍筠溪翠影长 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳叶梢头燕舞娴 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉盏轻斟漱玉华（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举棹星河夜色澄（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦荻寒汀棹影孤（老农）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉笋闲烹觅物华（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">弄笛花亭鸟梦回（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪竹源头鹤影稠（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老酒频斟待友人（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">放牧松涛柳浪摇（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云朵淡时雁影高（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老友闲谈话晚晴（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倚棹烟汀幻影奇（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦絮飞时鹭影稀（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅韵重温抒暮怀（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">引棹荷盘蛙鼓歇（雨燕)(今)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">云霭浓时雁影斜（雨燕）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古调新弹赏妙音（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">横笛水帘清韵流（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蒲草茂时鸟语喧（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿蚁频斟叙友情（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倘步花屏蝶影翩（老丁）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹭鸟惊时醉客欢（老丁）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹牖轻推迎月光（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">吹笛柳帘翠鸟飞（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白鸟静时树影暗（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">醇酒满斟诉晚情（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落子围城兵火烧（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">檐雨急时佛曲喑（闲云）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅韵清吟颂晚情（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">洒饵沙汀鹭影飞（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">杨柳丛中鸟语悠（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉管轻操醉晚霞 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">催棹荷盘鹤影惊 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芳草尽头樵担悠 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">香芽小沏品春味（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉牖闲欹赏月光（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">投石荷盘玉露倾（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藕花深处渔歌渺（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">兰棹归时日影斜（云朵）</span></p> <p class="ql-block">简 评：</p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：香芽小沏品春味</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 香芽：不是固定的词语，根据出句的意境，应该理解为制作香茶的幼芽或嫩芽，代指新茶叶。</p><p class="ql-block"> 春味：春茶的滋味。唐薛能《题汉州西湖》： “尝茶春味渴，断酒晚怀清。”</p><p class="ql-block">唐郑谷《峡中尝茶》： “ 鹿门病客不归去， 酒渴更知春味长。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）轻轻地慢慢地沏上一杯新茶，静品茶的香味。</p><p class="ql-block"> “春芽小沏品春味”此句以简洁雅致的语言，勾勒出一幅富有诗意的春日品茗画面，营造出宁静、惬意、充满诗意的氛围，展现人们在春日里，通过冲泡春茶，慢享时光，沉浸于自然与生活之美的情景，体现出对自然的热爱和对生活情趣的追求。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们深谙出句意旨，对句意象生发自然，富有情趣的佳对比比皆是，请师友们雅赏，不再一一举例。</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：抛竿湖镜蟾光碎</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 蟾光：月色；月光。唐皎然《溪上月》：“蟾光散浦溆，素影动沦涟。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我）在水平如镜的湖面上抛下钓竿，映在湖面上的月光就跳动起来，感觉像镜子被打碎了一样。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句所写的时间是月光皎洁的夜晚，人物活动是垂钓，富含诗情画意。 </p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为前四后三结构，具有因果关系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 此联不好应对，因为“湖镜”用了比喻的修辞，对句也应以相关的修辞应对为佳。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们时间契合，修辞恰当，意象相关的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">抛竿湖镜蟾光碎</span></p><p class="ql-block">倚杖山屏鹤影悠</p><p class="ql-block">骋目霞绡雁影遥</p><p class="ql-block">收网星潭鲤影摇</p><p class="ql-block">对舞松涛鹤影悠</p><p class="ql-block">落棹波心桂影摇</p><p class="ql-block">引棹荷盘蛙鼓歇(今)</p><p class="ql-block">横笛水帘清韵流</p><p class="ql-block">吹笛柳帘翠鸟飞</p><p class="ql-block">投石荷盘玉露倾</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：藕花深处渔歌渺</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 藕花即荷花。唐孟郊《送吴翱习之》： “新秋折藕花，应对吴语娇。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 荷花深处的渔歌缥缥缈缈的传过来，（感觉很是和谐，动听）。</p><p class="ql-block"> “藕花深处”交代了环境处所，作定语。“渔歌渺”作主语谓语。出句调动视觉听觉等感官，描写了宁静、悠闲的环境，富含诗情画意。</p><p class="ql-block"> 对句意象选择没有明显的时间限制，白天夜晚均可。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们意境相谐、意象相关的佳对举例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">藕花深处渔歌渺</span></p><p class="ql-block">芦荻丛中鹭影单</p><p class="ql-block">桂楫收时酒盏盈</p><p class="ql-block">塘角暮时蛙鼓喧</p><p class="ql-block">柳岸幽时月色柔</p><p class="ql-block">柳叶梢头燕舞娴</p><p class="ql-block">溪竹源头鹤影稠</p><p class="ql-block">蒲草茂时鸟语喧</p><p class="ql-block">鹭鸟惊时醉客欢</p><p class="ql-block">杨柳丛中鸟语悠</p><p class="ql-block">兰棹归时日影斜</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：ANG.ZQ 琢玉 老丁 淡定 美西洋 元其 荷花 震撼哥 燕燕于飞 老农 梧桐 大海 文心 雨燕 若水 老丁 弦思 闲云 於发 笛里关山 云朵</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片来自Al创作</p>