<p class="ql-block"> 夕阳西下，天空被晚霞点燃，色彩斑斓。余晖洒在湖面上，波光粼粼。晚风掠过，天籁渐歇，空气中弥漫着淡淡的麦香、花香。大槐树下，老人在竹椅上摇呀摇……你是否已陶醉在这夏日的傍晚中了？</p><p class="ql-block">五月第二期作业</p><p class="ql-block"> 题材：夏日的傍晚</p><p class="ql-block"> 题目：自拟</p><p class="ql-block"> 体裁：律诗（五律、七律皆可）</p><p class="ql-block">要求：颔联或颈联要用到重叠词。</p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">1.商怀祯 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚暴雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">避暑乘凉借绿荫，轻摇蒲扇远高温。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽然平地起风暴，转瞬晚霞换暮云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雷雨哗哗声贯耳，狂风烈烈树拔根。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天公肆虐人无奈，赤帝由来是暴君。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2.朱信言</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忆往昔龙口夺食日之山村薄暮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">连日同食宿，师生刈麦忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丹曦匿西岭，冰镜照东墙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骤雨声声慢，荷风缕缕香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">频频挥汗水，侃侃话农桑。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">3.苏雪琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">那年夏夜</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月色泻清辉，星光聚柳眉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">轻风穿夏簟，故事缀纱帷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">片片白云散，离离碧叶垂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乡音沉梦底，笑靥动心扉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">4.李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日晚步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑气随昏敛，余辉幻梦柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝉声喧烈烈，荷影曳悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野径寻芳入，闲心逐翠游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风挑河汉烛，星子坠云楼。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">5.梁文辉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夕步郊外</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">赤霞烙古城，缓步觅凉风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">堤裂燕翻剪，叶枯心若冰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黯黯悯农月，迢迢织女星。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何因天不雨，禾怨垅无声。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">6.毛应林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">湖面晚霞落，廊桥灯火朦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">汗衫湿浸浸，扇子晃匆匆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">芦密蛙焦噪，树高蝉涩鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">遥思秋气爽，难舍夏荷红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">7.吴惠琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡村夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绮霞浮垄陌，暑退晚风柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">袅袅炊烟起，悠悠笛韵稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">麦香盈野径，蛙鼓伴溪流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲坐庭前月，清光入梦幽。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">8.左红艳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏夜即景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸟归霞影敛，日落暮晖藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">熠熠灯流彩，丝丝饭送香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄童门口戏，白叟院中凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万籁皆岑寂，阖家话正长。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">9.李秦豫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日黄昏垂钓者</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">河岸染夕阳，钓翁收网忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">竿稍留喜讯，水面泛祥光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">收获欣欣惬，辛劳奕奕昌。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">路人多羡慕，妒我满行囊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">10.刘治</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">忆插队时夏收</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">暑气蒸腾日欲沉，田畴麦浪涌低云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">挥镰汗落丝丝雨，打场碡喧片片金。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">扬谷但期千斛净，归仓犹恐一尘侵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">终得囤满沉沉睡，梦里白馍香齿唇。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">11.景漫</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨后暮园行 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">霁云散尽夕阳斜，碧沼浮光动草芽。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风送晚香穿竹径，鸟衔余湿入藤花。 </span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">时逢归雀喧高树，次第华灯醒宿鸦。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">最爱新晴初月小，半城灯火共流霞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">12.刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚小区纳凉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蔷薇围舍小园幽，向晚清凉景色柔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">叶叶迎风拂面爽，莺莺啭曲惬心悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">茶浮月影人先醉，眸映星晖语始稠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">闲坐畅谈儿女事，夜深寂静话方休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">13.李群</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚纳凉</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎威向晚始初收，移榻青林傍碧流。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹影漫摇歌惬意，荷风戏绕送清幽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">流萤点点微光乱，朗月盈盈幻影浮。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐到夜深人籁寂，可知心静是瀛洲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">14.王寿礼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚河堤散步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">漫步河堤凝翠香，粼粼碧水泛金光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">空传燕雀声来去，树绿亭栏影短长。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">逸逸情怀凝瑞气，欣欣草木醉柔肠。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">微风拂面知人意，一路轻随送晚凉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">15.王彦飞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏晚咸阳湖</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">长堤闲步夕阳融，碎锦摇波映晚红。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滟滟湖光浮影影，双双凫子戏丛丛。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">垂杨蘸雾书章草，拱桥衔月作弯弓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">谁剪烟霞铺作纸，水流犹笔写空蒙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">16.薛建设</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">城际夏收</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">斜日馀晖映水晴，晚凉习习夏风盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">河边垂柳丝丝舞，街巷游人款款行。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">世纪花园花四季，兰池月殿月三更。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金黄麦熟抓时紧，耳畔常飘机器鸣。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">17.张生效</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">渭湖即兴</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕暉将尽傍栏休，待把平湖夜色酬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">掠水波微风细细，入林语脆鸟啾啾。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹰闲悠剪青天缎，艇迅勇开白雪沟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">咏意忽来欲乘兴，又耽月怨柳梢头。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">18.牛英茹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夕阳一点如红豆，已把情思洒满衣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">曲曲道中随意走，跷跷板上尽情嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">妹身轻晃君思妹，哥影微摇妹念伊。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">惟愿浮生执子手，斜辉脉脉不相离。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">19.张陕乐</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡村的傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜幕徐徐拂面颊，云舒雨霁吐霓霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐影垂垂香满岸，莺歌恰恰韵传佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">耒耜勤耕临野陌，桑麻闲话入田家。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炊烟几缕缠新月，漫把乡情绕作花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">20.赵华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日黄昏</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">汀州乱鸟闹平沙，落日西沉映晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">明月依依藏远树，湖波点点泛轻鸭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一竿暮色蛙声起，数顷方塘藕色佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽有荷风香暗送，清凉吻过我额颊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">21.美霞</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日家乡的傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚霞裁角作红纱，落日轻蒙赧脸颊。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">归鸟翩翩穿翠柳，顽童蹦蹦逗灰鸭。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹笛驮起天星子，蒲扇摇出槐米花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎夏乡村夕色好，秦腔舞曲伴清茶。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">22.李爱琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">清波荡漾映斜霞，湖岸尽开滕蔓花。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月季四时常艳艳，绣球初夏炫华华。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">少年踏踏灌球跳，翁妪盈盈扩体暇。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在高楼常远眺，温馨灯火万千家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">23.何顺永</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">丝丝柳线牵云淡，点点星光映水天。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">阵阵荷香觉气爽，沙沙叶舞伴神闲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风摇碧叶千波漾，月笼长堤百鸟缄。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坐看苍穹银色美，清辉尽洒满人间。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">24.刘文轩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚游咸阳</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日暮时分赏晚霞，咸阳湖面泛金沙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">黄鹂小憩凭河柳，紫燕低飞落树丫。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">茂草青青新叶展，繁花朵朵俏颜佳。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">红男绿女逍遥秀，秦地秦人最爱家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">25.南素华</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">观赏至友石岛新居夏日傍晚之后花园</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">远离闹港择幽岛，日落霞辉照舍园。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪水环宅千苇摆，银锄落地百花嫣。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野菊灿灿怀元亮，石凳青青诵义山。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">藤下举樽聊雅趣，知音情厚满畦田。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">26.孙宝玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">初夏傍晚遇雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">热气蒸升天地燥，空中蓝碧少积云。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">疾风导向匆匆至，浓雾铺出缓缓分。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">傍晚阴沉无月色，戌时雨露叩窗音。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">甘霖久盼滋苗野，润物轻声自有温。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">27.燕小君</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日归乡晚步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炎炎夏日返家乡，向晚徐行觅嫩凉。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">袅袅柳丝牵客袂，粼粼波影浣霞光。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鸣鼓乐千重脆，风送禾田两岸香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲向黄昏赊斗酒，醉吟山水入诗囊。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">28.韩公元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">乡村夏日傍晚</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏来向晚不寻常，金麦丰收尽入仓。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">豪爽爷爷三碗酒，虔诚奶奶一根香。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">门前灯下腔酣肆，场里歌中舞醉狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">弯月夕阳同映照，吾村喜庆走康庄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">29.安宗珍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日荷韵</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">十里湖滨夜景明，一池菡萏岸边生。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花开碧水朱妆点，叶舞银塘绿染成。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">倩影亭亭明己志，幽香淡淡伴蛙声。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷风送爽多诗意，月色朦胧缱绻情。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">终审:梁文辉 </p><p class="ql-block">组稿审核:李群</p><p class="ql-block">整理制作:王彦飞</p><p class="ql-block">图片来自网络</p><p class="ql-block">咸阳市老年书画诗词学会诗词部</p><p class="ql-block">2025.6.8</p>