(图片来源于网络) <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七律·惜黛玉</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">读网友寒烟冷月《七律·惜黛玉》,试步其韵,戏和一首。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 怅望碧空伤月圆,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 寄人篱下更谁怜?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 幽思难表空挥泪,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 愁绪忧心枉卷卷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 诗赋抒怀天可鉴,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 浓情何诉隔云渊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 绛珠仙子飘然逝,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 痛惜花魂一缕烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">注:卷卷,这里读:quán quán,卷卷即拳拳,忠心也。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">附:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">寒烟冷月的《七律·惜黛玉》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 空把相思寄月圆,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 飞花入梦唤谁怜?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 轻弹烛泪难眠夜,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 重掩清门诗稿卷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 荷锈葬花人笑齿,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 抚枝见血泪成渊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 墨随玉手飞诗横,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 且做花魂一缕烟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">北风红梅(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">欣赏朋友自题的藏头诗,意韵幽美,试步其韵,戏和一首。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 北 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">岸紫烟罩万家,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 风 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">携熏韵育新芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 红 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">烛燃尽天将曙,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 梅 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">灿枝头迎百花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">附:北风红梅自题的藏头诗:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 北 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">岭山庄是我家,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 风 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">裁细柳李初芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 红 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">霞万朵天边挂,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 梅 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">笑枝头映雪花。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">奇幻月影(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">戏题网友昵称的藏头诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 奇 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">峰野趣沐山岚,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 幻 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">象浮云呈百端。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 月 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">照寒塘摇碧树,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 影 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">影绰绰泛斑斑。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">远山风情(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">戏题网友昵称的藏头诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 远 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">眺群峰刺碧空,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 山 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">岚云海迷苍穹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 风 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">光奇幻神仙地, </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 情 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">趣悠然入梦中。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">幽潭静月(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">戏题博友昵称的藏头诗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 幽 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">篁摇曳影斑斑,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 潭 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">映星空碧水寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 静 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">夜无声花睡去,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 月 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">华如梦照空山。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">清韵飘逸(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">戏题网友昵称的藏头诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 清 </span><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(1, 1, 1);">风拂柳琴声扬,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 韵 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">雅曲幽入梦乡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 飘 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">过荷塘花舞影,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 逸 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">趣随心闻暗香。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">深谷幽兰(藏头诗)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">戏题网友昵称的藏头诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 深 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">山林树净无尘,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 谷 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">底溪流伴鸟声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 幽 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">径弥烟如梦幻,</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 兰 </span><span style="font-size:22px;">香清韵醉华英。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">作者偕夫人陈景素在云南</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">作者简介:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陈文炳,字.廷彪,1938年生于福建省安溪县金谷镇(东溪)溪榜村逸楼,是国民革命军少将、安溪县长陈铮的第八个儿子,著名革命作家《延安颂》词作者莫耶之弟。1954年去甘肃兰州,毕业于甘肃教育学院,任过中学教师,高级职称。担任过《中学生导报》社总编辑兼兰州市教育科学研究所副所长。是世界汉诗协会会员,中国青少年写作年鉴编委,现代诗人,著有《漫笔集》。</span></p>