诗友睿夫 奇风 韦默爵 拾柴夫唱和陈懋催老师《作诗体会》

黄福杰

<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">附《作诗体会》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">(通韵)原玉:</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">陈懋催</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">廿载钻研品苦辛,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">聊将开悟示同仁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗情涌自捉灵感,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵律来于转脑筋。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">翻找心中得体语,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">推敲笔下切实文。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">效今仿古皆为要,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉稳前行更是真。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">韵和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《作诗体会》(通韵)</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">睿夫</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笔底耕耘历苦辛,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲将心得告朋仁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寻章妙在察尘世,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">觅句佳于运巧神。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">炼字还需求雅语,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">谋篇更要铸精文。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">融今汇古开新境,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">笃志驰怀守本真。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《作诗体会》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">奇风</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老去光阴依旧新,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">寒星细数又通春。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">无声雪落江湖远,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">有韵风吹鸥鹭亲。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">酣酒常怀童稚趣,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">长歌笑对白头人。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗心且寄书香里,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">学海行舟再洗尘。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">依韵和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《作诗体会》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">文/韦默爵(七里圣嵩)</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">理解均无腑苦辛,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">心头抑郁用诗陈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">声张群体缺关注,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">分享私聊被骂嗔。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">命运不公伤状貌,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">本图依旧慰情神。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">难成业绩何缘故?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">自赏孤芳叹贱贫。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">农历乙巳年五月初一</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">学诗偶得</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">——敬和陈懋催老师</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">《作诗体会》</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">拾柴夫</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">方塘半亩启灵泉,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶得鳞光便是缘。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">草木观时须见骨,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">风云过处要听弦。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵依平水千寻路,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">典入新醅百代烟。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫道春芽初破土,</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋来老笋也参天。</span></p>