<p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">仙鹤秋菊初稿补笔图~贾越云八画八诗一书法</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">这八幅团扇画，画面见七仙鹤一秋菊，都是多年前越云笔下的初稿画。其中一幅画于己亥2019年，其余七幅皆画于九年前的丙申2016年。今2025之夏，越云特补笔完成，以合始终。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">这八幅团扇画上，每幅都题有一首越云依平水韵自撰的格律诗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第一首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·贾越云题湘菊图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋菊开时十里香，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃源一带割禾忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">未知陶令今何去？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">有雁依依过楚湘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第二首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五绝·贾越云题潇湘大象图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">枝叶系玄风，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三川道气通。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潇湘存大象，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">形在鹤鸣中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第三首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·贾越云题仙禽仰呼图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仰望山川悲气盈，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">倭魔辱妇溺童婴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">至今南楚潇湘侧，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绕树仙禽生虎鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第四首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·贾越云题天道悠悠图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潇湘不息水悠悠，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">忽战忽安春复秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">昨夜江边闻鹤唳，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">始知天道满沙坵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第五首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·贾越云题秋江悟道图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">又见寒霜万壑红，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潇湘默默紫烟中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">诗人慎独水边坐，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">悟得秋风是道风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第六首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七绝·贾越云题潇湘清风图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜幕横斜江面平，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">星光点点静无声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清风吹醒潇湘水，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">老树徐摇伴鹤鸣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第七首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五绝·贾越云题潇湘雾开图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雾开天地净，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹤舞百禽羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲解其中妙，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">潇湘望绿洲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">第八首：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五绝·贾越云题潇湘晓月图</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">江边来远鹤，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羽动影如仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风起传天意，</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">乾坤一线牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">（20250522贾越云记于长沙）</span></p>