【芳草园】联对集锦(五百九十一)

乡间晚风

特别声明：芳草园联对集锦均得到参与成员认可。<a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=28575359&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3589e1657bd3f70ad183b44da6991e45" target="_blank">芳草</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=660512&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=6510daf54abd2627ae2696eea8668cc4" target="_blank">云朵</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=42413481&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=db1731125d427ff1d7db5fd1f379c453" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">杨柳岸</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=62057625&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=f6dd49c213697a43a663523d40f45c87" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">乡间晚风</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=83830822&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=77aa7a65a50aa55ddd97bba03b2a77e6" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">牧羊人</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=215999486&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=01bdcdfc46adcabc4feaf071a68f007b" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">绿水无忧</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=123638888&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=62d741234107c15b6526d9dc0e5879bc" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">闲云</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7562687&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=24af62e134b250f75ecb45074ef0071b" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">月影清风</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=8773504&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=a190d29ae2eaafad7908a0f87a8a15b0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">文心</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7599613&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=c833e2533f1822d8a61509b0ec28ac86" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">秋实</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=120859849&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e140da7c9319cee7aff8f344114b797a" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">钱云金雨</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=652384&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e4a42a8f947363c0495ccd727742281c" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">长安山石</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57960591&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3371f4e581721e96e3f55909f40fec90" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">於发</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=23334970&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=4e233cdc985463247a913ed68977cd6f" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">笛里关山</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=324435478&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=0e1c2eca2d925bbd85adc527360d9585" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">七弦琴</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=63866506&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=7036dd20ad9952cd2b115ea616279f17" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">蒲公英</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=58446201&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=37c423a20b5b6e7db2de2bac0e346619" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">老六(仁义)</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=72140024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">安宁</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=59488342&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">弦思</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=118454838&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">大海</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57622801&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">若水</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=70461024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=70461024&uuid=8c83c8e4a566775ed9d6c69d218f60b0&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=70461024&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=89dfcb6699f1a92f4efe65f8ac2b5c70" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">松源老农</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=169385171&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=169385171&uuid=f25830e309d241e1be5596e9d9550cfb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=169385171&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=10c90c4fd97e0916351e4999cdecf93d" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">雨燕</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=e7c2f4577240717f5ec4c23ba1bd64e6&author_id=47060341&container=1&v=10.1.4" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">燕子</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=208837663&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">八哥</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36358592&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">元其</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=67439235&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=67439235&uuid=302d6bb9fdbe7565d4b64a1b87fff493&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=67439235&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=0696de72d758eaa6ac947b2d382d2e5f" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">五岳樵夫</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=434621046&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=434621046&uuid=f1eac61a947394a66fd1421c07defe8a&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=434621046&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e5d62d5b9b3d5e43d05a82db754a4105" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">过客</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=4490819&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=4490819&uuid=3477ded56f0e705e2a83b05ee793a9fb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=4490819&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=84cf7cbec0cc8bb58ed97d4fff2907ae" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">宋</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=43288063&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=43288063&uuid=95ce0e76925f5e509acea2d632e17e23&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=43288063&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=705d407c7e08b5f1108b89f4c01e5fb5" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">荷花</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=750939&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=750939&uuid=c97ddab4d3e07b0406b7e3d90c60be98&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=750939&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=80b48afb7a1fb1390fb6cd353bed27df" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">美西洋</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=16a18011c7eaf69f5b4606ab0971fb08&author_id=3953176&container=1&v=10.2.1" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">ANG.ZQ</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=16510940&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=16510940&uuid=384145a50bf6378fd5f4603c7a0d59c5&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=16510940&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=1045e46bc02510122459e2734cc29b69" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">琢玉</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=359390016&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">青丝羽衣</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=303276228&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">胡萝卜</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=17450635&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">刘秋生</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=76534617&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">淡定</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36222480&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">愚夫</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=22498736&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">梧桐</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=24752147&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">东篱月</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=443016337&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">华玉宇</a> 五月五日精彩出句 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天) 流水不争终入海 (问天) 首联出句：孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 解析：孤蓬：又名飞蓬，枯后根断，常随风飞旋，常比喻飘泊无定的孤客。孤篷：孤舟。原出句为“孤蓬”，从后面的“泊钓”二字分析，改成“孤篷”更恰当些。释义：孤舟停下钓鱼，被似雪的芦花所遮盖。出句为秋景联，描述了芦花掩孤舟的景象。象一幅画，有沧茫幽静之感。“芦雪”，用了比喻，芦花似雪。“泊钓”，两个并列动词组合成的词组，后一个动词有一定的目的性，前一个动词是为完成目的而实施的行为。由于原出句“孤蓬”与后面“泊钓”衔接不太好理解，此句不列举优选句。 二联出句：藕风来榭香盈袖 解析：藕风：指穿过莲藕丛的微风，常伴随莲藕的清香和清凉感。释义：荷花的香气随风吹过水榭，侵染我的衣袖。出句为景物联，描述荷花之美，未见其形，先感其香，“盈袖”，表明荷香之浓，足见荷花之鲜艳。出句省略了“袖”的定语，可想象出观花之人也一定是个美女。留白之处更有诗意。联友深刻理解出句意境，对仗工整，与出句同框的佳句有：藕风来榭香盈袖 柳影浮池色醉眸松籁穿廊韵净心柳浪拂堤翠染眉竹浪临窗翠染衫榴色侵窗红透帘荷影绕舟韵醉心蕉雨敲窗翠染襟 三联出句：流水不争终入海 解析：不争：不争夺释义：流水不与谁争夺，最终到达大海。出句为义理联，用流水到达大海这一事实，赞扬其“不争”而实现目标的精神，颇有道家的无为思想。“无为而无所不为”。句中“不争”与“终入海”具有因果关系，“不争”是“终入海”的根本原因。因此，对句也应具有这种因果关系，透过现象看本质，合乎常理。联友用另一事实进一步印证出句这一思想的佳句有：流水不争终入海 佩兰无欲自流芳青松有节可擎天落花无悔自随尘闲云自得可浮天 行云无悔必翻山 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)斗酒独斟邀月魂 (震撼哥) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)秋月送光影在肩 (震撼哥) 流水不争终入海 (问天)闲云自得可浮天 (震撼哥) 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）独棹寻诗映晚霞（荷花） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）柳浪拂堤翠染眉（荷花） 流水不争终入海（问天）繁花无意却迷人（荷花） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）野寺鸣钟入竹澜（元其） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）榴色侵窗红透帘（元其） 流水不争终入海（问天）圣人自律故登高（元其） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)渔笛飘吹袅竹云（淡定） 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天）竹浪临窗翠染衫（淡定） 流水不争终入海 (问天)行云无语总游天（淡定） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）俚曲萦回逐水花（琢玉） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）松籁穿廊韵净心（琢玉） 流水不争终入海（问天）奇峰肃立自摩天（琢玉） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（联友） 野鹜起居隐柳烟（文心） 藕风来榭香盈袖（联友） 荷影绕舟韵醉心（文心） 流水不争终入海（联友）孤山有志敢为峰（文心） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)寒鹭击流碎月轮（闲云） 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)花露溅窗色印怀（闲云） 流水不争终入海 (问天)落霞无意总飞天（闲云） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）独桨争游映水天（大海） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）燕翅临房影掩窗（大海） 流水不争终入海（问天）行云无悔必翻山（大海） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)白羽翩飞隐玉峰 (燕燕于飞) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)词赋入怀气满楼 (燕燕于飞) 流水不争终入海 (问天)峭峰无语自冲云 (燕燕于飞) 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）瘦柳摇丝引月波（雨燕） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）麦浪迎镰金覆田（雨燕） 流水不争终入海（问天）佩兰无欲自流芳（雨燕） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)丰席坐弹隐竹烟 (笛里关山) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)蕉影扑窗露满怀 (笛里关山) 流水不争终入海 (问天)行云随性漫经天 (笛里关山) 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）倦鸟归栖剪暮霞（Ang.zq） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）荷露沾衣韵入怀（Ang.zq） 流水不争终入海（问天）幽篁秉节自怀虚（Ang.zq） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天)清曲坐吟和水琴（云朵） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天)柳影浮池色醉眸（云朵） 流水不争终入海（问天)高山静立自凌云（云朵） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)宿鸟归飞入岭云 (於发) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)梅雨离山露湿衣 (於发) 流水不争终入海 (问天)青山耸立欲擎天 (於发) 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天)紫燕闲穿戏柳烟（若水） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天)竹露邻窗绿染衣（若水） 流水不争终入海（问天)落花无悔自成泥（若水） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）远寺鸣钟入荻云（老农） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）蕉雨敲窗翠染襟（老农） 流水不争终入海（问天）高山有峙自擎天（老农） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)野鹤闲飞动竹风（梧桐） 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)云叶浮波影悦人（梧桐） 流水不争终入海 (问天)落花无悔自随尘（梧桐） 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪 (问天)霜雁飞离上岭屏 (乡间晚风) 藕风来榭香盈袖 (问天)鸟语入亭曲动心 (乡间晚风) 流水不争终入海 (问天)飞云无忌自乘风 (乡间晚风) 孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天)一笛横吹伴鹭歌（弦思） 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天)柳线撩波景展眉（弦思） 流水不争终入海（问天)高峰无语自连云（弦思）孤蓬泊钓埋芦雪（问天）瘦影衔杯醉柳风(美西洋) 藕风来榭香盈袖（问天）桂雨飘庭韵绕梁(美西洋) 流水不争终入海（问天）青松有节可擎天(美西洋) 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。 审阅：芳草云朵杨柳岸朱简乡间晚风文心笛里关山 组稿：（以投稿先后为准）琢玉笛里关山荷花雨燕元其闲云淡定文心大海若水燕燕于飞弦思老农 ANG.ZQ 震撼哥云朵乡间晚风梧桐美西洋 编录：乡间晚风 ①出句为芳草老师精选集句 ②对句为师友们原创