好友予以鄙人拙作赋诗点评专集(三)

平凡(拒送花.私聊)

<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">文/铮铮铁骨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">图片/致谢原创作者</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">评“七律二首.夏暑吟"</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">文/铮铮铁骨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">吟暑题诗两律佳,清新淡雅数荷花。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">深情蕴哲美篇里,哪位骚人不赞夸?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">回评/平凡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">树影婆娑夏日芳,蝉鸣蝶舞荷飘香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">感恩师友言难表,笔墨回甘情谊长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">  评“七绝四首.秋韵”</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 文/铮铮铁骨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 诗图惬意如秋色,词畅含情句句强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 版面清新牵醉眼,平凡岁月韵中藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">回评/平凡</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">沈君称赞太夸张,字浅词穷意不芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">效仿名师需韧志,涂鸦续辍美篇藏。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><i style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;"><u>谢谢美友大伽一如既往地支持鼓励!</u></i></p>