<p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">指导老师：张伯利 男，1953年6月出生，籍贯，陕西长安，陕西省诗词学会顾问，咸阳老年大学诗词鉴赏班老师。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">诗词鉴赏班二0二五年春季班</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">第三次作业</b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">七绝或七律·风筝</b></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">张伯利老师：七律 风筝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">纵目八方绿意浓，白云绕我万千重。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">紧系纤腰牵一线，脱却素手到九空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">比翼轻捷一队雁，傍身威武两条龙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">借风遥向春深处，茂盛青青掩紫红。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">1. 高飞行</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">风筝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">随风起舞逞才能，自傲云端笑燕鹰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">莫问青春梦何许，命悬玉手一丝绳。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">2. 杜宝军</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">摇摇摆摆细丝牵，变幻翻腾纸鹞鸢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">今尔凌空舒广翼，它年伴我探星天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">3. 刘娓妮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">形态万千醉碧空，云前起舞慕飞鸿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">虽然总被纤丝扯，却有苍天借我风。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">4. 曹少萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">草长莺飞紫燕娇，村边纸鹞任风摇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">小童嬉笑抬头望，彩影飘悠过二桥。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">5. 毛应林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">欲乘春色上云端，引线纸鸢飞梦圆。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">牵扯实为高放手，共收远景两成全。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">6.刘颖</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七绝.风筝（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">纸鸢借势上苍穹，炫耀轻扬舞碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">莫羡飞行天际远，细丝牵拽立回匆。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">7.李爱琴</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七绝.风筝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">爷孙追笑放纸鸢，五指翻飞直上天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">偶遇飞鸿惊叫起，回眸相望醉心甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">8. 杨继康</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">纸鸢应愧大鹏名，但借绳系假羽丰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">借势穿云青空上，风吹绳断杳无踪。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">9. 韦萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月柳丝衣袂靓，稚童拽线纸鸢牵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">若能穿界始皇禀，盛世您应来秒观。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">10. 李萍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"> 七律 风筝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">餐风借力上青霄，一线牵云故里遥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩翼徘徊衔暮霭，轻躯笑傲破春潮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">丝绳漫绾乡愁起，竹骨犹擎客梦飘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">纵使天涯羁旅久，归心总是向家瞧。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">11. 郭有成 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩鸢逸逸戏东风，唤醒童萌绮梦浓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">志揽星河奔远路，九霄云汉缚金龙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">12. 吴惠琴 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">纸鹤浮风素手牵，银丝遥系碧天边。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">嫦娥一见自欣喜，邀至蟾宫金桂园。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">13. 张桂玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">随风曳影叩云窗，一线牵悬掌上藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:20px;">几度扶摇凌碧野，仿如缠缚好时光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">14.贺勇</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">身着彩纸线轮牵，舞弄轻风上九天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">斜影飞霞绳细断，面羞飘逸落河湾。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">15.孙宝玲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">七绝.风筝（新韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">能匠精心制不凡，顺从长线抢冲前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">阳平四月云托起，动魄高翔遥外天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">16.刘治</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">扶摇直上彩云间，笑看雄鹰脚下旋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">何须登髙凭𡘊翅，但依风势可登天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">17.刘秦岗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飞花逐线趁风酣，稚子牵绳笑满衫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">忽见纸鸢栖碧树，斜晖影里唤声甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">18.蒙吉品</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩翼扶摇万里追，鸢飞九域倚风雷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">浮沉碧海平凡事，新岁逢春又恋归。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">19.李亚杰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">彩身钢骨趁风轻，一线牵云入碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">眺望群山围绿水，心随雁影向春行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">20.李扩继</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">竹骨裁云纸作衣，东风借力破重围。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">忽惊断线凌空去，化作青鸾向日飞。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">21.张志鹏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">争先恐后奔云端，獵奇斗艳谁占先？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">莫笑燕鹰无耐力，春梦全系一线牵。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>审核:张伯利</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>组稿:李萍</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>监制：韦萍 张桂玲 毛应林</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>美篇制作:李亚杰</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>图片来自网络</i></b></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:20px;"><i>2025. 4. 19</i></b></p>