【芳草园】联对集锦(五百八十)

乡间晚风

特别声明：芳草园联对集锦均得到参与成员认可。<a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=28575359&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3589e1657bd3f70ad183b44da6991e45" target="_blank">芳草</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=660512&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=6510daf54abd2627ae2696eea8668cc4" target="_blank">云朵</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=42413481&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=db1731125d427ff1d7db5fd1f379c453" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">杨柳岸</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=62057625&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=f6dd49c213697a43a663523d40f45c87" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">乡间晚风</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=83830822&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=77aa7a65a50aa55ddd97bba03b2a77e6" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">牧羊人</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=215999486&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=01bdcdfc46adcabc4feaf071a68f007b" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">绿水无忧</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=123638888&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=62d741234107c15b6526d9dc0e5879bc" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">闲云</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7562687&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=24af62e134b250f75ecb45074ef0071b" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">月影清风</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=8773504&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=a190d29ae2eaafad7908a0f87a8a15b0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">文心</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7599613&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=c833e2533f1822d8a61509b0ec28ac86" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">秋实</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=120859849&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e140da7c9319cee7aff8f344114b797a" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">钱云金雨</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=652384&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e4a42a8f947363c0495ccd727742281c" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">长安山石</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57960591&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3371f4e581721e96e3f55909f40fec90" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">於发</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=23334970&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=4e233cdc985463247a913ed68977cd6f" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">笛里关山</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=324435478&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=0e1c2eca2d925bbd85adc527360d9585" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">七弦琴</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=63866506&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=7036dd20ad9952cd2b115ea616279f17" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">蒲公英</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=58446201&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=37c423a20b5b6e7db2de2bac0e346619" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">老六(仁义)</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=72140024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">安宁</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=59488342&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">弦思</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=118454838&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">大海</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57622801&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">若水</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=70461024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=70461024&uuid=8c83c8e4a566775ed9d6c69d218f60b0&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=70461024&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=89dfcb6699f1a92f4efe65f8ac2b5c70" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">松源老农</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=169385171&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=169385171&uuid=f25830e309d241e1be5596e9d9550cfb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=169385171&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=10c90c4fd97e0916351e4999cdecf93d" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">雨燕</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=e7c2f4577240717f5ec4c23ba1bd64e6&author_id=47060341&container=1&v=10.1.4" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">燕子</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=208837663&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">八哥</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36358592&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">元其</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=67439235&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=67439235&uuid=302d6bb9fdbe7565d4b64a1b87fff493&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=67439235&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=0696de72d758eaa6ac947b2d382d2e5f" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">五岳樵夫</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=434621046&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=434621046&uuid=f1eac61a947394a66fd1421c07defe8a&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=434621046&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e5d62d5b9b3d5e43d05a82db754a4105" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">过客</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=4490819&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=4490819&uuid=3477ded56f0e705e2a83b05ee793a9fb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=4490819&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=84cf7cbec0cc8bb58ed97d4fff2907ae" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">宋</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=43288063&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=43288063&uuid=95ce0e76925f5e509acea2d632e17e23&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=43288063&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=705d407c7e08b5f1108b89f4c01e5fb5" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">荷花</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=750939&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=750939&uuid=c97ddab4d3e07b0406b7e3d90c60be98&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=750939&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=80b48afb7a1fb1390fb6cd353bed27df" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">美西洋</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=16a18011c7eaf69f5b4606ab0971fb08&author_id=3953176&container=1&v=10.2.1" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">ANG.ZQ</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=16510940&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=16510940&uuid=384145a50bf6378fd5f4603c7a0d59c5&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=16510940&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=1045e46bc02510122459e2734cc29b69" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">琢玉</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=359390016&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">青丝羽衣</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=303276228&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">胡萝卜</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=17450635&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">刘秋生</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=76534617&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">淡定</a><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36222480&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; 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background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">华玉宇</a> 四月七日精彩出句 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天) 首联出句：烟雨织帘舟影杳 解析：烟雨：像烟雾那样的细雨。杳：遥远；不见尽头或踪影。无影无声。释义：如烟细雨落下，象织成的纱帘，极目远望，船无影无踪。出句为景物联，描述人望归舟时看到的景色。“烟雨织帘”，既是景物描写，也是对人心情的铺垫，因归舟无迹让人感到寂寞和迷茫。句中的“烟雨”和“织帘”都用了比喻。联友把握景物联同框，正确运用修辞的佳句有：烟雨织帘舟影杳柳风凝咽笛声残晓风梳岸柳丝长鸣蛙击鼓晓声喧云山叠嶂雁声遥 二联出句：一溪春色翁闲钓 释义：老翁在满溪春色中悠闲地垂钓。出句为景物联，描述了老翁在春色中悠闲垂钓的情景。出句“一溪”，数量词，说明春色之满，“闲”，刻画了老翁神态安静，整个画面完美体现出人与自然的和谐。联友深刻领会出句意境，以春溪为描述点，进一步勾勒闲翁周围画面，对句以数字对数字，以光声等对色，绝大部分对句都很完美，在此不一一列举。 三联出句：竞放百花争蝶宠释义：百花为争得蝴蝶宠爱，竞相开放。出句为景物联，描述了百花齐放，蝴蝶纷飞的热闹情景。竞放为“百花”的定语。“蝶”为“宠”的定语。句中的“争”形象生动，“竞”、“宠”，都用了拟人修辞方法。联友同样运用拟人方法，意境美，画面感强的佳句有：竞放百花争蝶宠扶疏千柳惹莺怜漫垂千柳任莺梳纷飞万絮惹莺怜倦飞众鸟惹春怜 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）青山入画墨痕匀（荷花） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）两岸晓光客漫行（荷花） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）纷飞万絮惹莺怜（荷花） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）云霞披锦雁声遥（刘学荣） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）满圃桃花蝶乐翩（刘学荣） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）齐鸣众鸟悦春和（刘学荣） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)乌云掀被鸟声喧（淡定） 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)满岸花香蝶竞飞（淡定） 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)翻飞千柳任莺嬉（淡定） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）云山叠嶂雁声遥(美西洋） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）半岭云光客醉吟(美西洋） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）频啼众鸟喜春喧(美西洋） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)风云闭月雁群稀 (震撼哥) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)千树花香客醉吟 (震撼哥) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)深啼众鸟引人迷 (震撼哥) 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）江山竞秀画图新（秋生） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）两岸风光客欲吟（秋生） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）催醒万物引蛙狂（秋生） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）溪流漱玉草花新（元其） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）十里桃花蝶畅游（元其） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）斜飞双燕借风吹（元其） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）松风谱曲鹤歌阑（雨燕） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）两岸林荫妪惬聊（雨燕） 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)腾飞众鸟诵春荣（雨燕） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)云霞裁幕笛声悠 (笛里关山) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)千树莺声女缓歌 (笛里关山) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)轻飘千柳献莺亲 (笛里关山) 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)梨云搭帐鸟声喧 (青丝羽衣) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)两岸草茵骑慢巡 (青丝羽衣) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)渐繁万柳逐风飞 (青丝羽衣) 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）柳风凝咽笛声残（琢玉） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）几缕茶烟妪细烹（琢玉） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）扶疏千柳惹莺怜（琢玉） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）棉云铺被雁声低（大海） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）满岭花香牧总闻（大海） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）初苏万柳盼莺临（大海） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)微风入画柳丝斜 (燕燕于飞) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)几树柳丝燕乱飞 (燕燕于飞) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)欣荣万木谢春风 (燕燕于飞) 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)云花镶径笛声悠（闲云） 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)满院朝霞子奋吟（闲云） 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)丛生杂草羡蜂怜（闲云） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天） 柳风生韵燕声欢（文心） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天） 两岸花香蝶乱飞（文心） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天） 倦飞众鸟惹春怜（文心） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)山花刺绣蝶衣翩（梧桐） 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)十里霞光鶴畅翔（梧桐） 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)狂奔万水带鱼游（梧桐） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）松风入画鹤声幽（老农） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）两岸风光客漫游（老农） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）齐飞千蝶恋花娇（老农） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天）晓风梳岸柳丝长（Ang.zq） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天）两岸桃绯莺巧啼（Ang.zq） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天）初萌纤柳逗莺歌（Ang.zq） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天)荷风拂岸竹声悠（若水） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天)十里画廊客畅游（若水） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天)翻飞双燕逐风闲（若水） 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天)黄莺唱曲柳枝欢（弦思） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天)两岸莺声客细寻（弦思） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天)密生千叶任莺藏（弦思） 烟雨织帘舟影杳 (问天)水花翻雪浪声高 (乡间晚风) 一溪春色翁闲钓 (问天)两岸花香蝶乱飞 (乡间晚风) 竞放百花争蝶宠 (问天)自摇千柳共风闲 (乡间晚风) 烟雨织帘舟影杳（问天)鸣蛙击鼓晓声喧（云朵） 一溪春色翁闲钓（问天)十里花香女畅游（云朵） 竞放百花争蝶宠（问天)漫垂千柳任莺梳（云朵） 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。 审阅：芳草云朵杨柳岸朱简乡间晚风文心笛里关山 组稿：（以投稿先后为准）琢玉笛里关山荷花雨燕元其闲云刘秋生淡定文心大海乡间晚风若水青丝羽衣弦思老农燕燕于飞刘学荣 ANG.ZQ 愚夫震撼哥云朵梧桐 编录：乡间晚风 ①出句为芳草老师精选集句 ②对句为师友们原创