<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·自家做饼倍儿香（四首）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">总羡摊头饼子香，今儿咱也学潘娘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韭根入味和鸡蛋，肴肉提鲜加老姜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">面粉优推五得利，油酥莫忘十三香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">圆盆放置留温处，只待蓬松派用场。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">i)五得利，三仄尾，因是固定名词，故不改。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">¡¡ ）香，重字不重义。饼子香，“香”为形容词；十三香，属固定名词，故也不改。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">掀被抱盆出暖房，犹存酵母一般香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">称斤份量仍依旧，入目充容两倍彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">揉面团团和气在，拉丝叠叠絮风扬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凭观多见蜂窝态，弹似凝脂映玉光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">十指掐胚匀又细，妇人兴致擀千张。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">走边走出团花秀，裹料裹来金满堂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">笑语陡增烟火气，温馨霎那好时光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">须臾饼子全包就，工艺何输御膳房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">首选居家电饼铛，厨中能手数它强。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四边受热烘胚脆，二面升温烙馍香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">皮薄可窥红翠隐，馅多但见绿黄镶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">推窗气味迷村客，线上邀君共品尝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.31</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·赏春（藏头： 乐以忘忧）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【乐】享春光陇畔行，观花丽质带风轻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【以】然莽荡油苔旺，更见葳蕤苜蓿荣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【忘】醉其中迷蝶影，超常物外辨莺声。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【忧】愁一掷九宵外，陌上云开拨雨晴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·老来学诗（藏头： 发愤忘食）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【发】乎勤奋勇超前，莫道桑榆已晚年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【愤】笔南窗书古籍，掞词北阁学先贤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【忘】机苦读三围瘦，伏案多思两鬓全。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【食】腹谁知可填饱，几回过午又拖延。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·仲春（藏头·竹窗花雨）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【竹】径寻幽兴致浓，春深误闯骛源中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【窗】扉日暖啼黄鸟，江海浪轻载短蓬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【花】叠千绡桃杏事，香飞十里暖歌同。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">【雨】偏寄意南堤树，万发垂丝荡柳风。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·仲春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">万点油苔妆野陌，长堤望去草茵茵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">连途柳媚岂无骨，两处莺鸣倍有神。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">风拂温和桃李笑，云开晴暖露霖珍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">青龙唤得抬头雨，急走归农赶独轮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.24</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五排律·仲春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">秀水添诗意，青山入画真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夭桃参粉杏，绿竹俯红尘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">左岸茅菇嫩，长堤瑶草新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">霞光穿嫩叶，爽气入芳滨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白鸭划双蹼，微波隐细鳞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">群游呼后补，孤落赶前轮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">节物催常雨，时光正仲春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">油苔增雅致，俊鸟亦精神。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">热烈勤蜂引，喧嚣梦蝶亲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">谁家旧归燕，隔浦务桑人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">撒籽田肥下，悯农最劳辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.22</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹧鸪天·春分两首（晏几道体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">桃李只肯嫁东君，卯时斗指正春分。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">檐头日暖迎归燕，柳岸丝长钓水纹。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花烂漫，陌氤氲。踏青赏景好欢欣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">儿童牵线轻鸢放，几欲乘风逐晓云。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">绿水时泛一波潮，桃花正旺织红绡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">才闻朝雨南塘涨，又见归舟北浦漂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">离乡久，念心焦。只帆风雨路迢迢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春分立蛋年来顺，愿祝安康岁岁饶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.20</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·城边赏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雨霁空晴云漫飘，春光椽笔美图描。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">闻声渐醉枝间鸟，顾影相怜叶底蕉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">远望青山藏宝气，犹传翠竹奏仙箫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">徐行且把桃源探，市井红楼带画桥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.18</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五排律·祝贺小两口有个新家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">由来情向往，寻梦到南方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五载酬何处，三餐理日常。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">薪资当月盼，底气逐年长。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落户番禺县，安家越秀乡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朝霞浮霁色，云彩漾金光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">带露椿枝密，冲宵椰木苍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">层楼经百丈，市井纳千祥。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">抬步高阶迈，撩襟大志昂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">殷勤环左右，潇洒走中央。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">举目和风正，推窗暖旭徉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新砖人影照，立柜物衣藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">设计预留白，装修选暖黄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">休嫌居室简，自有好磁场。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">顾我温馨在，同君细语商。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">从兹爱巢筑，比翼共飞翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2024.03.16</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鹧鸪天·晾腌菜（晏几道体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词/朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开春日暖好风扬，枝头鸟雀唱晴光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">长竿晾挂檐边晒，粗线悠垂系矮墙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卤水浅，菜根香。浑身使力石搬缸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">应将琐事勤谋划，以备馀年度岁荒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">石：指压缸石。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">卜算子·母亲（苏轼体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 一一三八节献给母亲的赞歌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">那年嫁过来，无轿无红盖。只有窗花映灯笼，桃李东厢待。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">接连生三娃，小玉娇花蓓。粉脸嘟嘟乖萌样，看着心头爱。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">二、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸡鸣出东村，垄上寻春菜。野荠灰灰马兰嫩，拣净装麻袋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">总想变现钱，拿去摊边卖，孰料乡人不稀罕，路过真无奈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夫不在身旁，独把囡囡带。每到星星眨眼睛，掖被轻轻盖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一晃入隆冬，飞雪鹅毛大。得悉他爹今夜回，倚门痴痴待。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">四、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">暂不借营生，辗转身心惫。合计居家先创业，要把清贫改。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">勤劳不负人，财富能翻倍。爆竹声中穷年送，也把鸡鹅宰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">五、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">如此年华过，厚道无言败。甘衬红花绿叶陪，何惧容颜改。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偶遇浪打舷，扶桨轻飞快。要为全家保驾航，驶向温馨海。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">六、</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">新雪送残春，庚戌连辛亥。发白身躬步履巍，已显龙钟态。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">龄高又何妨，心正慈容蔼。绿鸟相呼宜作伴，慢曲听天籁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.07</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">拂霓裳·母亲（晏殊体） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词/朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">不平凡，育儿生女把丁添。持家务，日常油米酱香盐。缝衣东厢屋，织蒲草茅檐。夜犹酣，梦无眠，风拂动垂帘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">安贫乐道，富不慕，欲无贪。家共守，与夫成就共分担。白头身已老，回望岁华惭。暮星探，近黄昏、斜日过山南。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.03</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·植树节（首句借用邻韵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">三月桃花杨柳风，全民植树正高峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凿渠远道开新绿，种竹荒山易旧容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">护域千秋极寒挡，长关万里遏沙凶。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">根深厚泽炎黄幸，叶茂枝青佑国钟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.12</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">一丛花·又见朋友圈晒菜（苏轼体）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">词/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犹观图片菜鲜姸。晕素配齐全。青椒炒肉油光亮，卤味美、直叫垂涎。更爱沙锅，煲汤量足，热气赶肠寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">每逢周末有余闲，动手做三餐。纵然忙碌心愉悦，有道是、家务优先。厨屋香飘，厅堂日暖，窗外鸟声传。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.23</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">七律·寒潮侵袭后的油菜花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瞻观日幻任流形，寄寓桑田岁月经。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">盛极群蜂层赶浪，开齐百蝶屡呼馨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">何多事变惊前夜，乍起黄莺落小庭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">望去油苔方阵乱，黄花几处落零丁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">2025.03.27</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦托清明忆故人</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">文/ 朝云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜寂见灯昏，风吹向暮村。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">沉思疑坐久，过往忽重温。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span 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