<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特别声明：【芳草园】联对集锦成刊，均已得到参与成员的授权。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="https://www.meipian.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草园】 联对集锦组稿成员主页链接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">3月28日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴韵悠扬入渚云（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初春篱落竹兰新（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">梦向云端自绝尘（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野鹭翔飞绕水湾（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴郊野草花香（学荣）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">脚在泥中自得真（学荣）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">看客留连戏港鱼 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">通明室案笔毫忙 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">韵入毫中始化神 (青丝羽衣)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕欢飞掠岸花（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临秋院落果蔬香（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">事到明时始见真（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">莺燕婉转弄玉枝 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">平明玉宇月华闲 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在局中难破棋 (燕燕于飞)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白鹭翻飞戏浪花（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初春野泽蟹鱼游（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人在诗中自解迷（淡定）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">碧水蜿蜒映岭云 (Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">方春水泽鹭凫嬉 (Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">意入禅中自化尘 (Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">河水翻腾润芦花（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初春山野草木青（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">志在天边更向前（大海）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">丝竹悠扬动碧波（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">深秋庭院菊枫妍（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在病中自寂寥（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">春水欢歌绕岸花（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晨院宇燕莺忙（愚夫）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">情在理中则守真（愚夫）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕翩跹剪路杨（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初更庭院烛萤明（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">情到淡时可入禅（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor"></span>画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雅客悠闲赏浪花（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仲春野陌鸟虫喧（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">意入禅中始觉空（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉笛悠扬绕绣楼（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴田野燕莺喧（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">意入禅中始释怀（老农）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凤笛悠扬响宇穹（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初喧野渡灯火明（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人在书中可得安（梧桐）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">紫燕翻飞戏渚荷 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴野陌稻粱香 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身寄云间可忘机 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">玉镜澄明映野荷 (震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">将晨野岸鸭鹅眠 (震撼哥）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在闲中易执迷 (震撼哥）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鸥鸟翻飞啭碧波（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初春溪岸杏桃香（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人在山中可解忧（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">羌管缤纷落江天 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初凉庭院管弦悠 (乡间晚风)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在道中总不知 (乡间晚风)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画舫游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">骏马奔驰踏岸花（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">临秋沙渚鹭鸥闲（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在尘中哪得闲（闲云）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩蝶追欢采野花（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逢秋野水蟹鱼肥（於发）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在山中不识真（於发）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">清瑟悠扬入绣房（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初秋田地稻菽香 (若水)(今）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">身在情中难动真（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凤辇漫行过石桥 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初晴野渡吏民稀 (笑对人生)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人在红尘易动情 (笑对人生)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">钓叟安闲坐石矶（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">初凉院落桂兰馨（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">人在尘中难忘机（云朵）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">画船游逸穿堤柳（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠袖轻盈赏岸花 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">渐暮村墟鸡犬静（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">开秋原野稻粱肥 (笛里关山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">心于物外方开悟（问天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">情在难中更见真 (笛里关山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">简 评：</b></p><p class="ql-block">首联出句：画船游逸穿堤柳</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析: 景物联</p><p class="ql-block"> 画船：装饰华美的游船。晚唐韦庄《菩萨蛮》：“春水碧于天，画船听雨眠。”宋范仲淹《献百花洲图上陈州晏相公》：“步随芳草远，歌逐画船移。”</p><p class="ql-block"> “游逸”是并列结构的合成词。“游”和“逸”意思相近，都有闲适、自在、不受拘束的意思，表达一种悠闲、自在的状态。</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我或我们坐着） 画船悠闲自在地穿过堤岸边的垂柳。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句为省略主语句，表现了人物的悠闲自在，师友们生发自然，意境相谐的佳句不胜枚举，请一一体会，不再一一点评。</p> <p class="ql-block">二联出句：渐暮村墟鸡犬静 </p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：情景联</p><p class="ql-block"> 渐暮指一天中太阳逐渐落山，天色渐暗的时刻，即傍晚时分。</p><p class="ql-block"> 村墟：意思是村庄，亦指乡村集市。杜甫《溪涨》：“我游都市间，晚憩必村墟。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 傍晚时分，村庄里的鸡狗等都安静下来了。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句没有明显的季节限制，可对的意象很丰富。对句注意和出句的宁静、祥和等的意境相称就好。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们的对句精彩纷呈，可比较欣赏，不再举例点评。</p> <p class="ql-block">三联出句：心于物外方开悟</p><p class="ql-block">联意解析：义理联</p><p class="ql-block"> 物外：世外，谓超脱于尘世之外。 唐许玫《题雁塔》： “暂放尘心游物外，六街钟鼓又催还。” </p><p class="ql-block"> 开悟：领悟；解悟；(心窍)开通。《史记‧商君列传》： “吾说公以帝道， 其志不开悟矣。”</p><p class="ql-block">联意为：</p><p class="ql-block"> 当（人们的）内心能够超脱于外界的物质和世俗纷扰之外时，自然而然地就会获得觉悟和领悟。</p><p class="ql-block"> 这句话强调了一种通过内心的自我修养和超脱，达到精神上的觉醒和智慧开启的状态。即摆脱对外在物质的执着和追求，让内心回归纯净，从而能够洞察事物的本质和人生的真谛，实现心灵的升华和自我觉醒。</p><p class="ql-block"> 师友们理解出句意旨，义理阐发和出句联系紧密，给人以启发的佳句是：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">心于物外方开悟</span></p><p class="ql-block">意入禅中自化尘</p><p class="ql-block">情在理中则守真</p><p class="ql-block">意入禅中始觉空</p><p class="ql-block">意入禅中始释怀</p><p class="ql-block">身在闲中易执迷</p><p class="ql-block">身在道中总不知</p><p class="ql-block">身在尘中哪得闲</p><p class="ql-block">人在尘中难忘机</p> <p class="ql-block">审阅：芳草 云朵 杨柳岸 朱简 乡间晚风 文心 笛里关山 </p><p class="ql-block">简评：笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">组稿：琢玉 学荣 青丝羽衣 荷花 燕燕于飞 淡定 ANG.ZQ 大海 元其 愚夫 雨燕 文心 老农 梧桐 美西洋 震撼哥 弦思 乡间晚风 闲云 於发 若水 笑对人生 云朵 笛里关山</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后为序）</p><p class="ql-block">编录：笛里关山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，选取有代表性的对句简评一二，雷同句以投稿先后顺序选择，其余对句不再一一列举。以上简评仅代表个人观点，因学识水平有限，难免有疏漏和不妥之处，欢迎各位师友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句为芳草老师精选集句</p><p class="ql-block">②对句为师友们原创</p><p class="ql-block">③图片利用AI，根据出句意境创作</p>